optimus VS Ja'e Roc
 

battle

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IP: 58E6 C588


lets do this
10 - 20 lines
due in 30 mins
blind spit
u set it up
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Tha One :banghead: :shoot: :gfy:

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me bein beat by some cat name optimus, shit sounds perposturate,
his neck i'll slit, n fuck like a clit, stick my dick, down his asoffagus,

i never knew one worthy, to serve me, exspecially from jersey,
only thing new, about you, is ur post boo, hand on the cock like herby, (Herbie Hancock)

call u boo like ya my bitch, might be after this, syke, unlike u i hate dick,
optimus aint in his prime nor gettin warmer, ima brake this transformer, quick,
(optimus prime the transformer figure)

named after a cartoon, fuckin bafoon, ass bout to be whipped by high noon,
only way you catch float, is on a boat, caught up in this tycoon,

winds turn quick, like ya moms do a trick, suckin dick, Ya I said that shit,
don't get mad, cause moms been had, shit i might be ya dad, i know i spit up in that clit,

so if so, son you know, ima have to let you go,
take you in to this world then take you out, no doubt, all cause of a ho,

i just couldnt pull out, shoulda left it in her mouth,
but when i was all up inside her, like a ruff ryder, coulndt resisit hearin her scream n shout,

n whats worse then, is u's a liven abortion, just a portion,
that slipped, from her clit, n didnt flush, years later wearin lipstick n blush, a he/she sqwashin.

my abilities go beyond the science of conventional matter,/
my verbal thunder makes the heavens shatter, /
ya blood n brains splattered left adjacent to the pavement,/
got ya body parts scattered across my fuckin basement, /
with one swing I leave ya wonderin where ya whole face-went./
I shatter ya nose-bone, ya spit, but no original flows-shown. /
ya styles “choppy” I should be payin ya to mow my-lawn/
potency in my one breath equal that of a hit from five-bongs/
an MC? You couldn’t move crowds spittin the illest live-songs/
you’re prancing round the board reppin silk nylons/
spittin high pitched spits, like a fuckin lady, ya drank “slim”-fast, but still aint no “shady”,/
throwin punches, tryin to degrade-me, I wouldn’t cop your album if the fuckin label paid-me/
You may be Christmas, but I’m more “gifted” than December twenty-fifth/
Judgments passed swift, You aint “seein clearly” man, take some advice from Jimmy Cliff/
go back home ya housewife, pack ya kids school-lunches/
disses? you’re in a verbal gunfight, only a fool-punches/
shut ya lips, cut tha bull-shit, sit back, I’ll unload a “full clip”/
cause im tha “star” of my “gang” like guru and premier/
looks like you’re a rook and shouldn’t be-here, cause it’s strictly sucka free-here/
I know ya crews sayin, its Op that we-fear/

uppin for votes come on peeps only 2 days to post em.
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Opener - Ja'e Roc (optimus talked highly of himself, ja'e roc dissed optimus)
Flow - Ja'e Roc
Vocab - Optimus
Structure - Ja'e Roc
Punches - Optimus
Personals - Optimus
Closer - Optimus

Vote - Optimus

Ja'e Roc had some nice worplay but didnt really have hard hittin punches, I vote Optimus because his punches were better, there were more of em, and they were harder hitting. Ja'e Roc had some nice rhymes though (optimus, asoffagus) and wordplay. Good battle both of you.
Pz.

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Opener:Ja'e Roc
Closer:Ja'e Roc
Flow:Optimus
Enjoyment:Ja'e Roc
Punches:Ja'e Roc

Vote Ja'e Roc
Optimus u were 2full of urself in ur opener wen u shud of dissed Ja'e Roc instead!

will u repay d favor on this please seen as i took the time 2 break urs down!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...334#post1098334

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optimus took this shyt no doubt cuz he had better punches..and more personals......
everything else was pretty much the same
vote=optimus

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Punches: Opt
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Opt
Personals: Jae

call u boo like ya my bitch, might be after this, syke, unlike u i hate dick,
optimus aint in his prime nor gettin warmer, ima brake this transformer, quick,
Jae, you would've taken this battle if you kept this up

Jae's first 3 bars were pretty good, but then you started to fall off, losing punches, dragging on into 'played teritory'.

vote - optimus

upppiiinnngggg for votes lets get this closed iots been months yall an on to your site we'll return the time to vote ya'll

i vote for j e roc, becuase his rhymes made sense unlike the competitor. structure was great

I think j rock ot this he was better far as disses and overall fw and punches..pt quit yappin out your self and rip o him.youlso lacked hard hitting punches.

Vote:j roc

This was a decent battle... I the only problem I had with either of your flows was the flow itself... sometimes the lines stretched for both of you so it made readin it a little choppy.... As far as verbal ability it was clear that Optimus had this battle won from his first bar onward... He just made it very easy to follow his thoughts and keep up with his punches.... I really liked a few of his verses too while Roc was hot about 50 percent of the time... Ima give Jae Roc a 6 outta 10 on this while ima give Optimus a 7.75 outta 10... Vote - Optimus...

Please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

ja you a disrespect to va wit dat shit you just spit opitmus took dis easily he came harder wit his punches and he had a betta flow muilies all of that was hott

v/opitmus

optimus because he simply murked. had his lines better flowed consistantly, so obviously it was a win because he kinda rymed better which murked you with a better verse that was slightly better than yours, his punches seemed to hit more thats what i thought, sorry man no hard feelings

Im gonna give this to Jae Roc coz the wat he managed to handle the multies was quite good in my opinion, used a lil too much but good enough to read also J had good punches and the structure was readable. Optimus keep it up it was a good battle but i think he had u on this 1.

V/Ja'e Roc

Ja'e Roc i just like yours more just a little bit more. you still kind of bored me.
optimus had nice puches.
Ja'e Roc you still need to step it up big time.

vote=Ja'e Roc

return the fava (taken over vs. Graphix)

OpT
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

Roc
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 8/10

v/ J'RoC

my abilities go beyond the science of conventional matter,/
my verbal thunder makes the heavens shatter, /
damn nice line kid structure goes to optimus punches-opt and sides that he just took the battle nice punches fo real though
vote-optimus

Optimus gets my vote- he had better punches and an ok flow