Kaos Theory |vs| B.I.Detained
 

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If you don't get punches.. you better not vote..

He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe


Please explain votes......g/l....this should be good

Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord

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Pm Axe n get him to move it pz
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He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
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9/10 nice verse but structure was off or it would of been a 10/10
aight overall nice punches and personals,aight werdplay cuz structure was off
which effected rymescene a little,pretty decent opener and closer
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Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
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this was nice,easy to read,flowing werdplay good structure
good punches and personals,opener and closer were creative
overall 10/10,cuz it was a well approached battle verse
vote/B.I. Detained

Don't vote if you don't get tha punches.....

I need to breakdown or some shit for tha ppl who don't know

BI Detained aka Brixton aka Phil M Up

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Kao Theory's verse...


If you don't get punches.. you better not vote..

He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
^^^not such a good opener could of been better...4/10
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
^^^Good personal...6/10
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
^^^LOL..nice i liked this one...7/10
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
^^^Nice creativity...7/10
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
^^LOL...4/10
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
^^^ERRRrr,Got something against Europeans? Im European, but this was good, 5/10

33/60

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B.I.Detained's Verse...


Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
^^^LMAO...this was nice, better opener then KT...6/10
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
^^^Decent, could of been better...5/10
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
^^^Played line, heard it many times before...3/10
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
^^^Ehh not feelin it much, could of been better...3/10
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
^^^Decent...5/10
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
^^^Good finisher...7/10

29/60

Pretty good battle but kaos takes it he just had a better overall verse...close one, good work by both.. No Hate just a vote...Props to both

Peace

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Uppin in this bitch......#3


Boy I tell ya.......lol

Please Vote...
We need to finish this
So I'd appriciate a vote....Thanks

#5........last uppin......
Please vote....Maaad slept on
BI up this man

Kaos takes this.

Before you go on me hating on you BI, read both verses.
Your flow fell off in a couple places and some of the wordplay was weak.
You need to work on using metaphors without making them stand out as a metaphor so much
Battling is about being witty without drawing attention to your metas and wordplay/

Kaos... you had some played shit in there but I liked how you stayed personal in most of your punches


Vote- KIaos

3rd uppin
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Punch: KT
Meta: KT
Flow: Tie
Structure: Brix
Pesonal: KT
Enjoy: Tie

Vote: KT

nice battle..pretty close..but..kt came with the better punchs..lol brix whats with the miniture verse..fuckin hard to read..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109853

hit that up

This was a close battle i thought. But KT took it with personals and consistant punches that rhyme. B.I you started good but the fist bar didnt rhyme but it was still a decent punch.

KT- you started off with good personals and some nice punches, i liked the creativity on where he lived an what not. That was a good hard verse.

B.I. You had a good verse as well but i felt it wasn't as hard as Kt close but slightly off

Good read from both of you though

Peace.

very close battle really hard to judge this one

kaos-u had a real nice verse u had some very nice perosonals and punches....i liked your closer it was a nice play off his location....your verse was good throughout w/ some nice hitting punches/personals.....the bar that really stood out to me was the phil me up line that was a dope bar......overall your verse was tight....the opener wasnt that great though but other than that it was tight.......9/10

B.I-your verse was ok at first i wasnt really feelin it but than i read it again.....it was a decent verse.......u had a nice opener but from their the quality in your verse begin to drop....u came wit a couple subpar bars but i still liked ya verse....if u could have reworded some of ya punches better i think your verse would have been really nice....overall u had a decent verse 8/10

v/kaos....no hate this was a close battle

please hit this honestly

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110817

He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Blah...
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
nah
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
first line was ill, the second wasn't
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
ok...
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
Not feelin' it

I was dissapointed in this verse. Just not any punches that even made me crack a slight smile. Blah


Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
nope
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
this one was cool
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
nah
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
nope
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
nope

This verse wasn't very good. Just didn't contain hard punches.

Vote: Kaos, cause his verse contained less 'blah' lines.

Return the favor here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=110153&page=1

-W1