LyricalJediVWiseWays
 

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ill drop a vote as soon as yall spit a verse and i get 100 posts...

Wise Ways 5-0, that 0 got to go son
Like niggaz in the hood when they see cops you better run
Bang you on the head with these skillz
Leave your body naked hanging over the hollywood hillz
As your family prays
Wise Ways prepare for your last battle days
My lyrical punches leave with internal bleeding
Have you coughing up blood who stay weeding
The weakest in your crew like Turk


Do even worry about this shit cause y'all boy just get merked

Wise Ways 5-0, that 0 got to go son
Like niggaz in the hood when they see cops you better run
Bang you on the head with these skillz
Leave your body naked hanging over the hollywood hillz
As your family prays
Wise Ways prepare for your last battle days
My lyrical punches leave this nigga with internal bleeding
Like a pregenat who gets on trial for greeding
The weakest in your crew like Turk
Yo son your Wise Ways don't work


Do even worry about this shit cause y'all boy just get merked

This herb is outta this world.. he's so fucking unearthly
Got all that jedi mind power.. and still not quote worthy
But tha kids got writers block.. so he can't use tha mind
3-7? I could flip my record.. and he still couldn't top mine
I Bet this lil stars wars fanantic won't throw one personal
Kids vocab wouldn't expand if they were pop corn kernals
What tha fuck was jedi thinking? stepping up to Wise Ways
You can talk as big as you want.. but you still a light weight
And plus Just for you kid.. all I need is a small quick reply
But tha only thing that counts.. is you gave it ya hardest try

iight...

a think wise ways takes this... hehad a more complex verse and harder hitting punches... he had a couple of personals aswell...

jedi... you talked about yourself too much... and didnt punch... only made threats in my opinion... not bad... jus work on ur punches...

vote - Wise Ways... not polling until you vote on my battle...

hit this up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...07&page=1&pp=15

thanks

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Jedi- You had no real punches you seemed to just be rhyming words no complexity or creativity or personals.

Wise- Nice verse- You had some good punches an real good personals I was fealin it

OVERALL- Wise got this one

Jedi- You had no real punches you seemed to just be rhyming words no complexity or creativity or personals.

Wise- Nice verse- You had some good punches an real good personals I was fealin it

OVERALL- Wise got this one
Return the favor an vote on my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
Thanks

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Hey yo you said I have not punches on my battle man you are fucking crazy god I mean I know I did not win because this cat I battle is good but man you don't call this My lyrical punches leave this nigga with internal bleeding
Like a pregenat who gets on trial for greeding a punchline then apparently you have no idea what one is.

Peace

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lol.. another merk job.. hey straight up. no hate.. wise ways took this battle

mulites- wise ways (lyrical jedi had none)
punchlines- wise ways (wasnt even close these lines took it "3-7? I could flip my record.. and he still couldn't top mine
I Bet this lil stars wars fanantic won't throw one personal
Kids vocab wouldn't expand if they were pop corn kernals"

creativity- wise ways
personals- wise ways (the shit bout you could flip your record and your shit still wouldnt be better than mines.. took it)
overall vote: wise ways

this battle was very one sided

Wise ways took this with a much more focused attack. The other verse was pretty generic except for the first line. everything else seemed like it could be used in any battle against ANYone.
Wise had a couple great snaps on the star wars theme, and made it hit hard personally.

vote - Wise Ways


Return Fave:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107109

Merked was Jedi...

Wise ate his elementary, gang bang verse right the fuck up.

Better wordplay, personals (the win/loss stat flipped line, tight)...
Definately harder punches.

Try and use wordplay and not make your punches come so straight forward, Jedi.

Also use personals, i.e, his sig, name, avy, profile...

Wise ways with the obvious win.

Holla back...

Vote here!!!

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v/ wise ways...
Hispunches were there, and jedi's shit just didnt hit hard enough to beat wise's punches

Sorry i dont have enough posts to poll vote...

Please vote on my battle when you get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1

yep wise ways got this one no question first of all he had some nice freestyle writing like it was really a freestyle its called a keystyle guys....I felt the punches by wise ways way more and lyrical jedi you need help go to the whackness emergency center i'm not hatin just trying to help thanx for the vote wiseways....agianst me...you bastard ...winner wise ways....peace its all love no hate...