CarsonJet Vs. Michael madness
 

Ight Heres the fuckin deal,
10-15 Lines,you post first, I'll post around 6:30 when I get back home,
No hate votes,
No crew Votes..
Lets fuckin do this

Oh yehh. check in first.......But make sure yer ish is posted by 6:30

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Michael madness...

Yo this thread's a joke! I swear it wasnt even Jet's Idea...
Michael's jus angry cus I voted against when merk was clear
So filled wit fear...I'll even drop 3 hours early on this bird
punches thrown...He miss's..while mine leave his vision Blurred
Notha merk's Brewing...It's like I'm conducting my own Hops...
Forget the spit..Jus call em HALLS way i cough an ne he drops.
Veiwed his past and avi, an lemme tell you..Micheal honestly Blows..
I'd call him a girl But that's an insult to the Y chromozones
Reppin sum no name city like he's from the inner peice NYC...
Can't u see?...Ur fake, U whine, an ur a bitch...Now feel Defeat

I'll admit, out of all my battles Your flows been The hardest yet /
But this still won't stop me from crashin "Carson Jet"/(Do it like a terrorist..)
The Bar has been set, By your Victorious Threads /
But I'm Gonna Lift the bar off the bench, n' leave u strugglin to pick it up off ya chest /
I ain't filled w/ fear , Admit u were the 1 scared the moment the curtains drew /
You don't want me to go all out, Cuz if I did I'd end up hurtin you / This persons thru /
Cuz already the only merk thats brewin... is me merkin you / You deserve to lose,
For the simple fact that u think yer # 1 on the list
Only #1 thing you is, is The # 1 bitch /
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
Son Stays battlin newbies so he can say hes Won n 'shit ,
Why else would you be in the front lines when yer records, 21-6 /
Your tryin to accomplish this win, but so far your losin to "I"/Hes bout to lose so hes losin his mind / posted 3 hours early cuz he had nuttin better to do w/ his time / remember I challenged you, I wouldnt rhyme If i knew i was to be beat /
all I feel is victory, you can keep the defeat you were giving to me /

Ight lets get some votes up

Whoaa , The structure is all different then how it was in the post box, it was 15 ligit lines in there.

dont matter...u won anyway..ive seen carson drop alot better..i dont kno what happened here..

v-Micheal Madness

unexplained vote discounted.

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v/madness...barely

Madness, feeding was gay as fuck...
You sould never feed in a text battle...
Mad still got it though, because of other personals and punches, besides the biting...

I dont have enough posts to poll vote, but, ehh...it ups the thread at least...

Please peep my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1

"biting"- I meant to say feeding...........

-W1

ok lemme explain the vote since carson wants to im me and cry about it..

Yo this thread's a joke! I swear it wasnt even Jet's Idea...
Michael's jus angry cus I voted against when merk was clear
^^ok
So filled wit fear...I'll even drop 3 hours early on this bird
punches thrown...He miss's..while mine leave his vision Blurred
^^above average
Notha merk's Brewing...It's like I'm conducting my own Hops...
Forget the spit..Jus call em HALLS way i cough an ne he drops.
aight^^
Veiwed his past and avi, an lemme tell you..Micheal honestly Blows..
I'd call him a girl But that's an insult to the Y chromozones
nah^^
Reppin sum no name city like he's from the inner peice NYC...
Can't u see?...Ur fake, U whine, an ur a bitch...Now feel Defeat
^^from what ive seen...hypocrit..and nah

now for MM's
I'll admit, out of all my battles Your flows been The hardest yet /
But this still won't stop me from crashin "Carson Jet"/(Do it like a terrorist..)
The Bar has been set, By your Victorious Threads /
But I'm Gonna Lift the bar off the bench, n' leave u strugglin to pick it up off ya chest /
^^made me laugh...nice
I ain't filled w/ fear , Admit u were the 1 scared the moment the curtains drew /
You don't want me to go all out, Cuz if I did I'd end up hurtin you / This persons thru /
Cuz already the only merk thats brewin... is me merkin you /
aight^^
You deserve to lose,
For the simple fact that u think yer # 1 on the list
Only #1 thing you is, is The # 1 bitch /
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
NO...NOT EVER^^
you say I honestly blow if so, then you honestly suck dick /
Son Stays battlin newbies so he can say hes Won n 'shit ,
Why else would you be in the front lines when yer records, 21-6 /
Your tryin to accomplish this win, but so far your losin to "I"/Hes bout to lose so hes losin his mind / posted 3 hours early cuz he had nuttin better to do w/ his time / remember I challenged you, I wouldnt rhyme If i knew i was to be beat /
all I feel is victory, you can keep the defeat you were giving to me
stopped being good at 21-6..everything below is wack..

like i said da first time..mediocre verse for carsonjet..use to kinda respect him until he came to me havin a heart attack about me voting for micheal madness..not a hate vote so dont go running off to get this takin awya too..HONEST VOTE>>

v-MM

^^lol Herb....UPPIN (2).........................
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w/e go to hell..at least im not bitchin over a vote

CarsonJet
Not up to your usual standards..
Some weird 'rhymin points'..& not the usual creativity.
..Still with like..80% of your full capacity..
You managed to squeeze out some witty lines..
Ok punches..could've been better overall..
I guess you little underestimated your opponent?

Madness
..regardless the reply box, ur structure is still fucked..
w/e.. you had nice lines, problem is..they arent punches..
You hardly even actually insulted him..or threw a punch,
directly towards him..it cudve been vs anyone..
So work on that , personals & overall more complexity.
..Not bad though..

still..

vote CarsonJet

Uhh tha feeding killed it....Mike why'd you do it... thats like gay as hell

even though you did feed carson still got punches... tha avy chromozones... and tha halls<--- nice

flow.... definatly carson..... Mike ya verse was stretched cuz of your newbieish habits of putting multies in

wordplay.... carson.....they were hard personals mike could do nothing about...

so

V/ Jet

hit this up with an honest vote...... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107470

Yeh Carson got this. He came not hes hardest becaouse he though madness wouldnt hit hard , but madness still came oright. He was feeding which is a no-no. But even though , carson had the smarter more wittier punches and better structure... hes flow was better 2. Carson gets this

v/carson

Wow, carson, U just keep gettin these votes , but u bitch when i get one........

Well report the bad votes........I'm not complaining...go ahead....
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There was no fucking rule about feeding, so i guess i'll have them all takin away since they put me down for feeding

ok go for it...............................................
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Feeding is wack faggot... and if you want i'll battle you...
... you can go first and i'll write a 3 hour verse feeding off yours...
Quit swaying Mike... carson won without you feeding...

... sorry for tha freepost

Don't let this get slept on, vote , so i can beat this cat and he can stopp bitchin

I Think Carson Got This Not By Much But He Had Better Punches And Came A Lil Harder
Punches:carson

Madness Did Ok He Held His Own
But Was Over Done By A Vet
No Beef
Vote:carson

Don't flatter urself.....I came half ass an I'm still winning.....
UPPIN(4)I think....

Wow, carson, I don't even give a fuck , were gonna battle again in the future , nd' ull b merked then, as u were this time

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Vote- Carson Jet

Punches hit much harder, I liked the Y chromosomes one. Got no idea what the hell Dazasta's on :\ but Carson clearly took this.
Madness came much too basic and not hard at that. You can't say he's going to crash like *carson jet* and think you have something, that's the most obvious route to take. Try to think outside the box, being obvious is the opposite of the oohhhhhhhh type punches.
I've seen Carson come much harder before but you do what you need to do to win battles, he did more than enough.