Telekinetic vs Avenge
 

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Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food

Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
The pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped


*opener he got beat my taktik in 1 2 punch an under location it says dope

avenge beat..his multies basically won the battle not really anything else in this that stood out...

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Calm down playa. ya wastin ya ups. this wasn't even a fuckin battle. tele came wit some punches that blew avenge's shit out the water. the personal opener was a nice touch to the whoppin, and the flow was good as well. Both structures were alright but it was about the flow and Tele had it.

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Originality - Avenge.. fresh concepts ("braiding sisters hair" line)
Punches - Avenge.. more original an witty wordplay made em harder hittin
Personals - Tele.. more of em
Flow - Neither.. all felt like individual punches
Opener - Tele.. personal
Closer - Avenge.. funny shit!

VoTe = Avenge

Swept more catergories.. some nice concepts.. keep elevatin kid.. an no hate Tele.. jus figured u underestimated him.

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opener avenge
punches avenge
closer telekentic
flow telekenetic
multis avenge
personals avenge
vote avenge i was feelin his shit more

telekinetic takes it his verse wus more consitant in punches and metafors he also to the uperhand on the personals with the 1-2 punchline of taktik....
good job by both but my vote goes to Telikinetic...
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Punches-Avenge
Flow-Telekentic
Multi-Both
Meta-Both
Structure-Telkenetic
Personals-Telekentic
Opener-Telekenetic
Closer-Avenge

Overal-Telekenetic

This was a very close battle, the only reason Tele won is because he edged out Avenge in some categories. Avenge you are really good dude, get a better structure and you got it.

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I liked Avenge's verse more...less played material and it was creative and he did have some great wordplay in there.

"Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips "

One hell of an opener. Tele did post an ok verse, but nothing really stood out. It was jsut basically a standard diss, not much creativity which is why he couldn't really make me laugh. Tele jsut presented the facts, Avenge added a creative twist to it. Tele did have a better structure and flow...but those don't decide battles...punchlines do, which is why I vote Avenge. Decent battle tho. Just be more creative Tele.

Vote- Avenge

Now you said I if I dropped a link, you'd vote on my battle. So please vote on one of the battels in my signature please. Thank you.

umm dis was ahott battle...be4 i break dis shit down i would like 2 say dis is fuckin text battlin on da net how can u fuckin flow serious everybody shit is different..aneway...let me break dis shit down
opener-tele
punches-avenge..took dis 1 real easy
creativity-a tie
wordplay-avenge
personals-tele
my vote-tele his shit wa smore personal and datz whut u need a battle along with da punches....avenge ya shit was sick dunn but hegot dis shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107960
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107533
^^^^there go da links my battles rite...can ya niggaz vote on wun or both since i did ya'll a favor and voted on ya shit ..goodlookin WUN!

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damn probablly the iilest battle ive ever read on this board.. ill be back to break this one down.. just uppin it for now though

avenges verse
Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
hahaha nice multies and punchline

Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
nice creative line

You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
damn yo that mathmatic equations line had a nigga rolling hot shit

To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food
damn nice battle you had some hot punchlines some clever lines and a nice use of multies i give this verse a 8.5/10

telekenetics verse
Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
nice personal disses with the first 2 lines.. the last punchline was decent too

Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
i wasnt really feeling the last 2 lines of this shit.. plus some of the punchlines here didnt hit that hard

he pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped
overall nice verse i give this verse a 7.5/10


overall vote: i got to give my vote to avenge here.. he had more clever lines and i was feeling alot more of his punchlines

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YO I CANT POLL...BUT SHIT...AVENGE TOOK THIS ONE...BUT BARELEY.......BOTH HAD SOEM RAW ASS PUNCHES BUT...AVENGES HIT HARDER.....
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Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food
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whack structure fix this shit up 7/10
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Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
The pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped
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8/10 better approach werdplay was better nice structure
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vote/telekinetic


drop a favor cuz i took the time u take the time too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069

welp in my opinion avenge took this one easy cause he had more of a flow, punches were weak except for the one by telekinetic but his shit was 2 stretched out and ya'll both need 2 elevate and good verses both of u juss work o punches, but my VOTE=Avenge

Hit this battle up honestly it's about 2 get slept on please hit it up since I did hit yours up and took time wit it, please vote> 6th Grade New Patriots!

wrong link haha my fault here it is and everyone please vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019

i dont know what the fuck half of these cats read but i KNOW
AVENGE TOK THIS EASILY

HE HAD BETTER VOCAB-MULTIS-PUNCHES AND PERSONALS.... FLOW WAS A BIT CHOPPY AND HARD 2 FOLLOW AT SOME PARTS BUT ALL IN ALL A GOOD VERSE

tELE----NEEDS 2 UP HIS VOCAB...FLOW WAS PRETTY NICE BUT THERE WASNT ANY REAL PUNCHIN DONE BY HIM


SO MY VOTE

AVENGE