Dev vs Unknown Skillz
 

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IIGHT lets kik dis thing off.........who spittin first???

you should be done by now,, its been over 1/2 an hour....

IIGHT Ill spit first

This guy must think he pretty cool......but hes not//
Im takin a guess that hes borin....does that mean my brain gon rott?//
Even if this guy act like he a punk....he was still prolly taught not to smoke pot//
Yes yes my skillz are unknown...but to u they can be hard as a bone//
His verses are old and they were shone//
He start freakin out when I raise my tone//
As I move on my skillz ratin gets higher......now they are too high to desire//
But now ur in my rap life and imma bring u through the wire//
The only way ud win is if u post up flyers//
U gotta be kiddin me..........Im too good for you little boy//
When God made me........He said,"All those fake Mcs....I want u to destroy//
I hear u`ve been doin this for a long time....so hasent Segfree and Roy//
I could go on and on for my whole life time//
More and more and Im still waitin for u to make a rhyme//
Dev is a PYROMANIAC.......but people runnin like 911 ATTACK//
I serve more dishes to my oppenents then the Shaq Pack//
If u ever challenge me u prolly leave with a 3rd degree burn and a cracked back..
DONE u spit

Unknown skillz, yours are to me... when ya post a verse without real dis
Dunno why ya bother punching… cos like castration ya ‘hit’ but ‘miss’
I couldn’t wish for a better opponent… but don’t think im giving praise
It’d be misplaced… I meant ya skillz that low… it’s lost in a maze
So it’s a case of 99% whack… and I jus washed the other 1% away
That was keeping you awake… now ya jus a string-less guitar try’na fucking play
Yes Ya fake… like a diamond that isn’t cutting the glass
Cos like that with a bit of pressure… ya crack… then get fucking smashed
It’s a laugh jus reading my verse thru… its jus a quick sumthin, but it’ll do
Cos jus one half decent punch in 20… it good enough to beat you!

IIght good verse..........UPPIN FOR VOTES..........UPPIN.............

nevermind dev, you polled but i cant vote on this cus unknown is in my crew!

Ahh....sheer outclassing here, Dev takes this hands down. Atleast the other guy had a pretty sig. :\

Anyhow, structure, punches, personals, and most overwhelmingly complexity all go in Dev's corner. There was some flare to his verse, some creativity that hit hard and wasn't played as fuck. Unfortunately, wasn't really that great of a battle, a little easy to call.
Good battle guys, elevate Unknown, good luck :)

Drop a vote guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574

Wat u mean IceMan???????????????????????????????????????

^lol at you saying he has a pretty sig..
All he does is goes to a graphic site..jacks one of their pics & puts his name on it.
..He doesnt make the backgrounds..
Anyways for the battle.

Dev
Nothin to great..but atleast ur verse was enjoyable to read..
You had some nice complexity that made for some nice punches..
You definately had the better verse..talkin catagory's?
You'd take all of them..including personals.. < nice.
No played line nor concepts which also was a strong point.

Unknown Skillz
You should really be more creative..
I've read 2 battle from you so far..both are below par..
You need elevate & apply more wit & comedy..seriously.
You had some ok lines, but thats it.
You got outclassed..

vote Deva

Damnit I fuckin give up......................everyone says I need to elevate.........nothin works........Imma fuckin leave

i mean dev voted for my battle, but i thought he didnt poll but he did so i said nevermind, and i said i cant vote on this battle cus unkown is in my crew

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damn, its hard to get votes............
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alright.....
To me....it looked like Unknow had no clue as of what he was doin here.....It's pretty apearant that Dev took this battle in punches'structure'flo'and metiphore's......not much else here....but it really was a showing of class here.....Unknown...work on that structure and make ur punches harder...be more creative an personal....

my vote- dev

drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107580

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dev won... dev you had a nice overall verse. your structure was ok and ur punches were nice. i liked your opener. you had nice flow to go along with those punches, nice verse

unknown, elevate. you need to fix your structure, shorten your lines and dont CAPS your punches, multis etc. you had bad punches with OK flow. you didnt come hard enuff in this battle to win it, so elevate.

punches- dev
creativity- dev
flow- dev
wordplay= dev
structure- dev
overall- dev

please hit this up

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106323

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punches and wordplay won it for dev...he had good creativity
blah blah blah his structure was straight

unknown you need to work on structure and on punches
they really dont hit hard at all:(

vote dev