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TheUnderRated vs. NaStRaDaMoUs1
10-12 i guess
you got like 30 if you need it// no crew hate blah bah blha diddy ma... checkin and lets do this.... |
CheCkiN iN..whO SpITtIn First............................................. ........................................
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word my bad lets just do a blindspit so spit at the same time....
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No DoUbt............................................. .....
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sigh.....lil intro tryin out some new shit...trying to get unique up in this bitch..if you don't like it then i guess i don't win..sob...cry...
Verse. esco to escobar now nastradamous one is gettting stuck left in a car fo acting hard.. first take out the knife then cut out da corpse i bite with the jaws opposite of life.. new to the Rb get rid of the BS in the middle its just left NewB and you due me.. spit through you fluently in ever language where my connects to vets be who knew me.. i see you in the next life with your text strife can't we all get along dividing herbs n vets right.. computer shooter damn dog now you rollin on a mutha fuckin scooter what you dumb.. get with a crew let em do you think you known on a internet of like a billion and 1... put your eyes to the son cause its a waste of a retina you intrest me so i'm disectin ya.. see god gave me a gift so i'll give on to you you can have this battle i'm nice just how i do.. nastradoumous...one i'll see you later son hop on the elevator and elevate some.. cause the next battle to come you'll be left lookin oh shit my bad i guess thats this one.. |
i spit like killa CaM/
u piss me off ill kill a MaN/ im glad theres no feedin cuz if there was u can juss EaT MaH ShYT/ dey call me nastradamous cuz i can predict a win when i SpiT/ u betta b protected cuz ill put teflon in ya chest like a mafia HiT/ u call yaself a joker ...its sad to c when u spit u playin GaMeS/ i got punchlines that make niggas cry when i call em NaMeS/ im 16 ..i bet u like 35/ got 16 wins ..prolly through shitty LiNeS/ i aint SeAn PaUL or JaMaiCAn but i can spit sum DuTtY RoCk/ n ya gurl stopped ryden u for me cuz I GoT a BigGa CoCk/ |
aight uppin for votes .................................................. .................................................. .....
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LEts i aInt a NewBe ..NiGgAs DoNt B vOtIn..LetS Go..bby Tha Way U SpELt MaH NAmE WrONg..
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i copy and pasted your name moron so i didn't spell it wrong uppin this for votes 2.................................................
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nastradoumous...one i'll see you later son hop on the elevator and elevate some..
....um whos da moron ..DICK HEAD |
word lol at this kid...^^^^it only matters in the polls and the setup son not in the battle and who the fuck cares i'm not gonna waste time to cap the right shit and to spell it correctly its a battle and i give a fuck.............................uppin this x3 hehe dick head good one
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ya it was wasnt it..iight fuck it wuteva..lets get summ GOD DAMN votes..
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esco to escobar now nastradamous one is gettting stuck left in a car fo acting hard..
first take out the knife then cut out da corpse i bite with the jaws opposite of life.. new to the Rb get rid of the BS in the middle its just left NewB and you due me.. spit through you fluently in ever language where my connects to vets be who knew me.. ***good opener....i like dis line get rid of the BS in the middle its just left NewB** i see you in the next life with your text strife can't we all get along dividing herbs n vets right.. computer shooter damn dog now you rollin on a mutha fuckin scooter what you dumb.. get with a crew let em do you think you known on a internet of like a billion and 1... put your eyes to the son cause its a waste of a retina you intrest me so i'm disectin ya.. ***lol.......mad nice punches.......my son dis won u da battle**** see god gave me a gift so i'll give on to you you can have this battle i'm nice just how i do.. nastradoumous...one i'll see you later son hop on the elevator and elevate some.. cause the next battle to come you'll be left lookin oh shit my bad i guess thats this one.. **nice punch/closer at the end*** overall=9.5 out of10 first of all wheres da structure???????????? i spit like killa CaM/ u piss me off ill kill a MaN/ im glad theres no feedin cuz if there was u can juss EaT MaH ShYT/ dey call me nastradamous cuz i can predict a win when i SpiT/ **weak opener.......good line about predicting shyt*** u betta b protected cuz ill put teflon in ya chest like a mafia HiT/ u call yaself a joker ...its sad to c when u spit u playin GaMeS/ i got punchlines that make niggas cry when i call em NaMeS/ im 16 ..i bet u like 35/ got 16 wins ..prolly through shitty LiNeS/ ***aight the top part killed it but u finished off strong*** i aint SeAn PaUL or JaMaiCAn but i can spit sum DuTtY RoCk/ n ya gurl stopped ryden u for me cuz I GoT a BigGa CoCk/ ***lol...nice closer......best line u had*** overall=7 out of 10...work on ur structure...... good battle...nice way u was both beefin it bu tmy vote goes to the underated vote=the underated |
o yea i forgot , my battles against zorbon and c_lo are gettin slept on can u ppl hit me up???????????
sorry for press postin but i forgot to add that to my post above |
MaH Mans IdK wUt u WaS ReaDin.,.but DiS GuY JusS aInt DaT GooOD..FuCk UndERrAtEd yA MaNs IS oVEr HypEd......WuTeVa MaNs...1Ne
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good batle....but UR takes it 4 better punches.....flow......n structure.......
nice battle.......props to both.....yo nast...ur pretty good 4 a newb punhes: ur flow: ur creativity:....... funner 2 read: nas..cuz it waz short......lol structure: ur vote: under rated hit dis battle up...thnx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625 |
mas u are garbage....up ur style...this cat merked the fuck outta u and that ainteven his style....he TRYED IT OUT.....thats fucked up....so ne expo for my vote....1
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DiCk RiDaZ ...MaN..FuCk DiS..DaTs WuT i GeT Fo BaTtLiN A VeT...1nE
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Originality - Underrated.. fresh concepts
Punches - Underrated.. nice style.. cool meta4s Personals - Neither Flow - Neither Opener - Underrated.. Nostra went down hill from there.. way too short an simple Closer - Underrated.. wasnt exactly hard to be betta than Nostra's one VoTe = Underrated Not due so much to ur skill im afraid as to Nostra's lack of.. dissapointin from both really.. tho Underrated clearly didnt need to come as strong as usual. |
uppin to close this bitch c mon now..........lets vote people get your credits up
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Underrated took this but, seriously...
Go back to ya other format. This rhyme scheme was off and choppy... Nostro lost cuz his shit was so badly formatted and also... So very weak, elementary. A bit childish, seriously. At least Under had the tools for a battle rap. Though ya punches could be more personal... And a touch harder. But ya had complexity, wordplay, and hits that landed. Peace Winner: Underrated |
a my vote is nas
better punches vote reall battles ............................................. |
the under took this hands down
breakdown structure under flow tie punches under metas under vocab under personals under over all underated won. Nas's flow was not pointed directally towards under he more or less said what might happen if they were to meet. under put some thought in to this no doubt. all in all not a bad battle keep it up both of you. 1 |
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