Da Kid vs Technician
 

alright u know the rules
20 min time limit after last person check in.

ch-ch-ch-ch-ch checkin in..........................

10 lines.....

checkin in.................................

Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
MUTHAFUCKA
good look yo

I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick

nice drop yo. u came wit some pretty hot shit.....

Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
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7/10 was ok nuttin speacial decent punches and personals
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I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
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pretty good 8/10 better battle verse good punches and personals hit harder
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vote/technician for better overall Attempt and Battle Verse

Aight battle.....

Tech.... aight punches.... aight multies at tha end...
good flow to it..... and wordplay was nice

Kid....Most of your punches were played...
wordplay was minimal... flow was aight...
but you didn't come hard enuff

so

V/ Tech

hit this up with an honest vote.... thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107743

Vote gone. Not explained. -Token

Come on ppl get these votes in. Get er Done.................................

This was Ok

punches - tech
personals - none really
flow - tie
creativity - tech
opener - didnt like either
closer - tech

OVERALL - tech......seen him come harder but he still edged this

Hit up the link in my sig

This is the third time I've seen you vote like this. You have been here WAY too long to do this. Stop immediately. Vote gone -Token

punches - Tech
personals - Neither
flow - Both
creativity - Tech
opener - Both
closer - Tech

Tech came harder with better punches, I didn't see any from Da_Kid at all.

My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Wasn't that good, but still probably the best line.

Vote - technician

Vote gone. EXPLAIN VOTES -Token

wise ways was a hate vote!............................................. ...................

LM's shit was a hate vote too. And he knows that shit. Cause we was beefin when I was in my other crew.

opener tech wasnt really feelin dkk
punches tech came alittle harder
personals none
closer tech neither were really good dkk's was corny
vote tech
pretty good battle

return the favor yte grl vs it

No unexplained votes. -Token

the kid took this by far....if yall would understand what he was sayin...he straight merked the other cat....

VOTE-KID

Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
^^ alright punch 6/10
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
^whack 2/10
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
^ok 5/10
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
^whack 3/10
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
^alright 5/10
21/50 = 42 percent
Pretty whack..

I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
^Alright, 5/10
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
^Ok 5/10
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
^whack 3/10
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
^mmm okay 4/10
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
^okay.. 7/10

24/50 = 48 percent
Another whack attack..

Technician edged this by a bit..

upppn.......................................pppppp pp

v/ technician

reason - the other kids shit was ok.. neither one of you right here came your best i doubt. reason being that there werent too many attempts at punches in this battle, you both just had a lot of filler. its ok i guesss, i woulda liked to see more good punches.

Da Kid: ur shit was ok. what he has, that you did not were multies... if ur not gonna have great punches or metaphors, at least have some multies to show us sumthin good in ur verse. ok verse...next time elevate & show us some shit...

technician: you didnt have the best punches either, or even very many if i remember correctly... your shit was ok too... you win this battle solely because your multies throughout kept it more interesting than his was.

both of you vote here or i will kill you:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...486#post1104486

breakdown

structure-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
personals-neither
similies-both
complexity-da kid
creativity-tech
multiples-neither
vocab-neither
humor-dakidd
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
vote-tech

good battle but tech overall came better good shit from u both

upppn.......................damn poelpel slepppppppp

flow- technician
punchlines- technician
overall verse consistensy- technician
metas- technician
multies- techinican
overall vote- technincian

hit up this battle with a vote then ill poll vote in this battle

heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108219

yo tech took this but barely tech man i miss when you used to try it used to be fun to read your battles lately you just drop shit that barely wins when i know you can merk....anyway this battle was tech's because he had harder punches that were hitting more personal and thats my favorite kind so that is a big category to take...plus he took the regular punches category also which only leaves remiadial shit da killa kid....nice wordplay on a couple occasions but you had to come harder to take this.....both hit these up....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108225

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107655

^its all good.......i know when i need drop dope...........

vote - kid, he definetly won, the other dudes raps just sounded real gay when i was readin 'em and if that " My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime" was the best lyric he sucks, the plural form wasn't right and the first time over i didnt even know he was rymin the shit.
so definetly i vote -kid

Technician - Vote
Way Better Punchlines Inside Of This Battle..He Came Out More Complex With The Punchlines, Just Didn't Really Have Much Multies Or Flow..On The Other Hand..Da Kid Had A Pretty Consistent Flow Inside Of The Verse But Didn't Have Them Punchlines...So My Vote Goes To Techincian For Better Punchlines...





Return The Favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108336

uppppppppnnn for that last vote ..............................

Technician...

Nice Drop...Good Wordplay, And Punches...Your Flow Was Great, And You Had Some Nice Multies Towards The End...You Should Have Had That Throughout The Verse...

Da Kid...

Aight Drop...Pretty Decent Punches And Such, But Some Were Played, And A Few Were Original...Still Need Elevation...You Just Have To Up Yor Wordplay And Add Some Multies...Flow Was Good Though...

VOTE=-TECHNICIAN-