Sp1TGa1M vs. MichaelMadness
 

.......10-20 lines.....you spit verse.....let's do this shit....

ight im checkin in I'll have this done in like 20-30 min

.....check in...... let's do this.....your spittin' first....

...............hurry this shit up........ :shoot: .....ive been waiting....

Spitga1m, You don't spit flames , prolly cuz U always got a cock-in-mouth /
But you wanted to battle, so now Ima give SpitGa1m Cotton Mouth /
Im bout to take you out.........(here goes)
12 years old, I couldve fathered u, Don't think this ain't true /
Wait I did..you mustve took ya moms names, cuz she had a spit game too /
(who's ya daddy haha)
I only thought I had one son, nd' they put him with the poop /(toilet)
Well That mustve been you, Way back when....Wow /
I can see u haven't went no where cause yer still shit now /
Spit What game you couldn't even define Conjunction or Noun /
Yer punches aren't gonna leave me down for the count /
U already out for this round, Yes.. I already beat you....
but ask around....it doesn't take much to deafeat you /
This is one sided.... you couldnt even raise the bar for it to be equal /
go practing for a couple more years and then well have a sequal / Till then let it remain peaceful /
Oh...yeh tell yer mom sorry I didn't use a rubber /
tell her maybe sometime I'll drop by so we can give you a brother /

very quick shit.....but itll do the job haha......

Damn right I'm 12, and be coming hard
You died??? Didn't ur mom tell u not to play wit bars??//
You could've fathered me??? Thank god you didn't
I wouldn't want two dads who both like kittens!//
What you go mad for? Dick, anal, or just plain men??
After I beat you this time, I wont have to bother again//
It took you an hour and u still got a shitty verse??
Wanna Live?? You have to get by Spitty (Sp1TGa1M) first//
Ive seen you before, doin' gay protests
Ill be laughin alot...The Day You Rest! (die)//
I dont need to kno what a conjuction or noun is to murder you
Cuz When you die, like RhymeTyme, you'll meeting Lucifer too (devil)//
I didnt even need 13 lines to kno that I won
So people give me your vote cuz this kid is done//

punches s
closer mm
opener both gay
vote s

u both need to elevate

^YOU need to explain your votes better.
-Axe

Ok definetely a one line vote. that will be reported to a mod!

Good lookin on that, Axe...Ight lets get these votes up....we know who the winner already is

....yo yte grl.....what the fuck is s.....haha....wow

spitgame str8 fed off madness in his entire verse...
status check....**Herb**
Madness takes this not because he was good in any aspect, but mainly because of his originality and creativity....the punches delivered were soft, but on the other hand..spit's punches were fed off of your verse.....

easy vote-madness
honest vote here, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107857

/ mm

This was very close in every catagory...
It was a virtual tie, but it goes to mm because spitgaim feed off of his verse...

When you guys get a chance, vote on my battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107351&page=2

Punches -MM
Flow - MM
Creativity - MM
Meti's - Neither
Word Play - MM

Most of these catogrys fall in to MM because he other guy did feedlike fuck not jst 1 like but all the way through..... so he is obviously gona get creativity and wordplay and it just happens thathe took the punches to....

*TIP* Spit next time dont feed off what the other guy put *TIP*
*TIP* MM try to make the verse a little less messy and theres no need for the things in brackets *TIP*

oh yea hit a honest vote up on this will ya plz thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107828

uppin .....lets get some votes up in this so i can get this quick win

Michael Madness...I see potential in your shit..for once...I see someone that had a couple of lines that made me crack a smile....you got decent rhymes, and it seems like ur grasping the concept of wordplay....you need to fix your flow tho..at some parts it was smooth but then at some parts it was just plain horrible....your structure was kinda bad too....but other than that u had a good verse overall...

Sp1tGa1m...u had decent rhymes..but no multis...no real punches either...I didn't get the thing about 2 dads that both like kittens....I thought all straight guys like kittens...lmao..vocab was weak....your flow was on point tho....nothing special about ur verse tho...needs some work but it wasn't horrible...besides the fact that you played off his verse the entire time...

vote- Michael Madness..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107780

^ battle needs some votes....I'd appreciate it if u'd return the favor...(not meaning I want u to vote for me..just saying vote on the battle lol)

peace

Uppin ....need 2 more and this is done......Post a vote and I'll hit you back

weak ass battle but im giving it to mike mad
becauz spit gaim fed off his verse for one...
and spit had virtually no punches...
madness had better punches(well had some)
and thats what tooke this battle nothing great here though...
My VOte-Mike Mad yall return the favor wit honest votes on battles in my sig... ThaNx...
_-SyaNidal-_

uppin Need 1 more vote...cmon some body vote n leave yer thread I'll hit yer battle up

Mike- Your verse was desent. You had some pretty funny punches an personals. The opener was a good personal.

Spit- Your 12 an it showed really. Your verse was just really simple. An dont ever use kittens in a verse again. lol You never had any real creative punches or anything. Desent for 12 I guess.

OVERALL- Mike more creative an harder punches
return the favor with a fair vote on one of these battles
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107516
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
Thanks