ATL Shawty770 vs. Bonu
 

checkin in..........................u spit first..............................lets do this........................check in

...........................aight

.........................lets

.....................do

..................this

we gon do this or what............check in 10 min............................................... .....................................betta hurry.......................................

waitin fo you to drop.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............

(bring da pain beat starts)

Yo battling me, that’s like facing hell/
Southern bitches only craving bills/
think ya gon win n get praised as well/
I got a better chance joining atl/
Now this bitch’s state of wills gone/
You ain’t waving mills you pack a lil jon/
da real one,you killed con, what the deal son/
rap till dawn think ya got skills, still wrong/
you don’t rap you only just shout fast/
you ain’t andre, but you still an outcast/
so what the fuck you think you got on me/
when you do the drankin its only bodily/
riding dupris dick down to his arteries/
you ain’t rhymed a grain of honesty/
so hot you think this shawty be/

you talkin all that mess you gon have a mouth full of lead/
my lyrics be so sick it will have you in a hospital bed/
you know im on fire but yo verses need some tips/
afta this you gon be as burnt as Whoopi Goldberg's lips/
im packin da glock that will leave you in shock/
you aint original so all you can do is mock/
frontin like you a real rapper and whatnot/
bringin me them weak rhymes, man you bound to be caught/
i dont get it are yo rhymes supposed to be funny?/
you gon get yoself hopped on more times than da easter bunny/

letz get these votez in people............................................ vote now............................................... ..............

i guess my last one counts as an uppin so................uppin#2...........vote people

uppin#3.......................come on people............vote so we can get this ova with.............................................. .........i wanna close this battle...............................

well good one i guess, but bonu had some good vocab and puncehs so he gets it

atl gets my vote
his shit flowed better
his punches hit harder
he had a better closer 2

uppin for more votes

uppin...............................#4............ ......................we need some more!!!!......................................

Close battle but I think ATL won every catagory exept multis...
His/Her punches just hit harder and bonus just seemed like he couldnt focus his thought into well thought out punches...

v/atl

Vot on my battle when you guys get a chance...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107351&page=1

-W1

my last uppin.................come on we only need a couple more..................................

goin with Atl....harder punches...nice flow...last line was a killa...i think ive heard that andre shit b4 too....but Atl got my vote

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atl- you had harder punches and shit and you flowed better to me folk....
bonu- ya names gay enough but damn ya rhymes was doo doo garbage shawt

yo atl? what part of atlanta you stay at nigga? since i voted on this shit yall go srop a poll vote on my battle against wise ways, its on this page..............

Opener-ATL
Closer-ATL
Multi-Bonu
Flow-ATL
Punches-ATL
Meta-None
Structure-Both

Overal-ATL

Yeah, ATL pretty muhc kicked this kids ass. Bonu you have way to sort of lines, don't use the / either, they are noobish, elevate, look at some of the vets battles and take notes.

bonu - structure is good, flow is ok, rhyme scheme is wack, most of the punches suck, no personals, no multis, basic wordplay

atl - structure is good, flow is pretty good, rhyme scheme is ok, some of the punches r pretty good, personals r ok, ok multis, pretty good wordplay

conclusion - atl takes this in rhyme scheme, punches, personals, and wordplay, so he gets my vote

VOTE - ATL SHAWTY

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u did the same.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947

much appreciated.........