Se7eN v.s Jay-Nova
 

Rules:10 lines
u spit first
u have 30 minutes 2 spit
No hate, crew, or D/r votes


Good luck and your time limit starts when u check into the battle :gfy:

checkin in....good luck man....i tryed out for dynasty soldiers too......1........................................ ......................

k good now spit ya shit u have 30 minutes and counting

i spit flos outta the mind, man this shit aint tough/
thats why its easy to put this cat in a bag... that zippers up/
cause like teenagers wit a playboy /
IM QUIK TO BUST/
listen up....ya test the kid....im put holes in ya lip...AND UP/
when i spit....imma let you know im the boss of this game/
u just a employee....thats why name and ur loses the same/ (seven)
no COST in ya game...and u try to be BUYIN the best/
get real...ya ryhmes are weak/
like SNOOP DOG....TRYIN TO FLEX/

good luck man....im out....1

(verse)

I’m a master wizard, that’ll slice open your liver
This guy is more fucked up than a porno wit the Geico Lizard
I’m a giver and slither across, no matter wat the cost
You couldn’t win a battle, if u prayed 2 Mary while u kissed a cross
Imagine life wit your losses as depression, in a session
This guy doesn’t know how 2 battle, like he’s 5 and juss guessin’
I’m stressin’ this metaphor, like I always said before
I told him 2 win go to the right, so he went to the left door
I’m testin’ whores like you, wit a pussy and mic too
You’ll never gonna get into Dynasty Soldeirs, so why try dude

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good shit....now cane we get some votes.....................................11111111 1...................

can i get some votes in here?........................................damn. .................................................. .....

opener tie
punches se7en
personals se7en jay nova didnt really have any
closer se7en

vote se7en
jay nova u need to elevate

return the favor yte grl vs it.....................

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umm dis was aight battle nothin really stood out....but here it go

personal-se7en
flow-jay nova
punches-se7en
creativity-se7en
my vote- se7evn his shit was a battle verse and he some aight punches in there da flow was good and all jay u gota step ya game up dogg....

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This battle was a mismatch...
Se7eN got it in vertually every catagory...

v/Se7eN

vote on my battle when you guys get a chance...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107351&page=1

vote seven


not that much hard hitting shit..but was way better thatn jay novas verse..only thing in jays verse that was ok was the name seven loss shit he said..ok personal used plenty of times..but ya ass needs to write more shit... :thefinger

Opener-Both
Punches-7
Meta-7
Multi-7
Structure-7
Flow-7
Closer-Jay

Overal-7

7 basicall took this shti without even trying. Jay your shit is really good, keep it on even lines and don't use caps like that, get the strucure right and you could be really good.

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shit se7en. what happened? i seen you better than this
truly disappointed dawg. but you seem honest. you still take this one. but shit man, dont think its an easy win cause theyre noobs. next time it could be a chrit imager. you took it on metas and punches. other guys punches were ok. but se7en just takes the cake.

personal-se7en
punches-se7en
creativity-se7en

Nova keep elevatin

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need these voted on ASAP. thanks peeps...

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Jay - Your verse was to simplistic. There wernt any punches in there, or anyones that brought effect that is. The rhyme scheme was horrible, that structure was just choppy. It was just a bad verse, its a battle... Not a wanna be G Unit Session...
Elevate...

Seven - Your verse wasnt as good as a couple you droped befor. Almost all punches were weak. You had the right idea hommie, just word them a little better. Your working on creativity I see. Your structure was straight, and you stuck with a regular rhyme scheme. It was an alright verse, just need to work on the effect of your punches...

Vote - Se7en