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Jay-Nova vs. Dan_Da_Man
10 line min......12 line max
no d/r no hate no bytin due in 30 min....or dqed :shoot: good luck... :thefinger |
RULE EXTENTION:
YOU SPIT FIRST!...or DQED!.....1 peaceeeeeeeee 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 |
ok i was gone for a minute and now i'm back with the jump off/
i rip new new one's and fuck ur line of bitches, but of course/ U bout u can spit with this cat, ay yo how u figga/ they call me texas pete because i be flowing over chicken niggz....lmao I cleans house and do the bath tub, that' s the only way i'ma scrub/ see u be that hard face to look at, so if u were porcelin u'd have an ugly mug/ I never seem to amaze they call me evil kaneeva because i like to stunt/ ur rhymes are dry as hell and already washed up like an old ladies cunt/ Ur rhymes are paper, oh yes sir they are wack indeed/ u stay gettin tested ur new names should be s.a.t.'s/ So please, find a new contender, i'll eat ya like a chicken dinner/ i have a warm heart, bu tcold flow so they call me mr. winter/ So b4 i exited this joint it's only right u stay in ur place/ because like broken chinna tradation ur a got damn disgrace/ |
is this a fuckin joke........imma take it easy on this cat....and u had more then 12.....14 homie....WOW....but check this you
DAN...DA MAN!....ur whack...what u flowin for?/ i dont want to be the main reason u bout to go 0 and 4/* battlin me...where do u get OFF WITH THIS?/ cause u flow like a LAXATIVE...all you spit off ...is SHIT/ well u was at home...practicin ya ryhmes spittin/ im SERVIN you in this battle....i geuss u can call my ryhmes chicken/* ya ryhmes is so bad...im surpised they aint makin the news/ cause u couldnt win this battle....IF YOU PAID ME TO LOSE?/ last bar....takin easy well i blast at it/ but i still got this cat breathin HEAVY...like he was ashmatic/ yo this cat wasa fuckin joke man....up these votes...or dq him for breakin the line limit...either way i get the win....1.....HAHAHAHAHA |
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*1......his record is 0 and 3 *2.....he said quote....(So please, find a new contender, i'll eat ya like a chicken dinner/)....lol im out man....WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!....up theses vote yalll |
lol lol lol ................thi shit crazy its unanimous big ups jay nova and im not dik riddin
dude was weak1 |
VOTES PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....... ....1111.........................................c an i atleast get a mod to close this...cause he broke rules......
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well i'm not even going to argue with this cat, yes i went over the line max, by 2, but i was feelin the flow, i got excited, anyways, stop cryin lil boi and let the voters decide man, don't make me crew up on ur ass, lol
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i dont give a fuck...either way i one....ur tired ass verse.......and what the fuck flow were u feelin?......lol can we get soem votes?...........1
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can i get a voter...or a mod......either one will do me good......1....................................... ........
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vote = Dan
nova your sig clutters up the thread and makes this thread a overbarret mess |
yo explain ur votes man......and i dont know how the fuck u voted for his weak ass....maybe yall are the same person....and i changin shit...anyways.....im uppin for votes....1
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a yo im uppin for votes....i cant believe this shit.....1........................................ ................
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K I gotta say Jay you won this one.... I think the other guy may of got the vote off senority..... but your punch lines were just better..... I would vote but sry bro not enough posts....
(need votes Logik vs YOZLyrical Killah) check the front lines |
its kool.........but i would like to get some vote in here on the poll....cause i know i merked thsi half wit...dotn vote on who has been here longer...vote on the verse.....1
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Punches-Jay
Flow-Jay Personals-None Multi-None Meta-None Structure-Jay Opener-Jay Closer-Jay Overal-Jay This was one of the weakest battles I have ever seen. I mean come on, Jay was the least weakest. Dan, your verse was not undertsandable at all. I mean come on, elevate big time or never come back here. Hit This Up Jay: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107950 |
Yo Im Uppin For Soem Votes....cause I Merked This Cat...it Was A Weka Battle...but I Didnt Even Try...can I Get Some More Votes So We Can Close Thsi Shit
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Uppin For This Shit.............................................. .................................................. ...............
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Uppin..........................1.................. ...........1..........................1........... .......
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shut the hell up, just because of the name i'm tired of u guys thinking i'm a white guys and half my wit is more wittier than ur all, bitch nigga, so u want black there u have it, i'm uppin now let's get this shit over with, he has the nerve to call my shit weak, with his paper towel ass raps
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lol uppin on this coward man....talkin bout eatin my ryhmes like a chicken dinner.....lol 1..................
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ima give this here to jay you made this cat look
stupid,you got this here cause i could at least understand you, dan i dont know what the fuck were talkin bout, that chicken line was so lame it was hilarious. my vote:jay hit up any of my battles, piece |
Yo Can I Get Some Votes So We Can Close This Shit......1....................................... ......
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Jay Nova Got This Because He Had Better Punch Lines
And He Made This Cat Look Stupid With That Chicken Line He Had Better Structure Stronger Punches And A Good Flow. My Vote : Jay-nova |
My Bad This Vote Does Not Count!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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This Vote Does Not Count.........
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how do i delete my vote?.............
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naw it counts.....i wasnt in crew when u voted........i was in after...........so it still is a good vote....1
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flow- j nova
punchlines - j nova impact of disses- j nova overall verse consistensy- j nova overall vote- j nova hit this battle up and ill drop a vote in this battle heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...25&page=1&pp=15 |
punches Jay
structure Jay flo Jay multi's Jay meti4's Jay overall Jay no offense but Dan...u need to elevate...u really had nuttin to show here...visit the emergency center b4 ur next battle.. as for Jay it was OK, nuttin special, but u had the edge in every category pretty easily |
uppin...lets get this shit closed though......2 more votes...1
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yo jay......stop upping so excessively.........just stop.
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