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Amp vs. It
alright well i didn't establish any rules in the other thread, so
10-16 lines no crew hate dr all that other shit and check in and i don't know we'll do something about who's dropping their verse first |
check
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alright I'd be really fake if i were to say "check it" right now so just listen, er.... read.
line 2: And 1 Mixtape Bring out an arsenal never seen before to be a crazy clown slayer// Man what are you a crazed killer clown or a dope basketball player// Ironically I'm the one that's got you runnin' from the beast of killers// I'm young, but you couldn't rape me like you was the original thriller// Findin' strength to tear down a ground level person must be a mission// Impossible as it is, you could come up with a verse short of circumcision// Your avi puts you out as a clown on a sunday stroll in his jump suit// An apple a day keeps a loss away, but today your savior ain't fruit// Things aren't lookin' up but now down is an insanely difficult task// I dropped u so quick, you're confused how you got here, need we ask// Questions are answered as i plumit you toward the source of darkness// You're past hell and six feet under, and god is now on long distance// The clown will mature to know not to be so courious and anixious// A jury of at least five will determine your fate, I'm your only witness// Off with his head, chopped him up with some bars, now you're gone// Like the wind I missed your presence, your dark night's over, here's dawn// eh whatever I'm done |
What up Amp,Are you literally gay,Are you Richard Simmons?
WTF is up with yer Sig & Avy,Fruitier than Yellow in Lemons Sig says,"come back Ally""come back Ally's sister" OMFG Come back Aight but in my Valley,Killed easily 2 hits 2 Bod Tryna sport Bass but has the wrong type of watts & Amp Roles down the block bumbing Britany Spears,jumps like Tramp Formally of the 920 currently of the 321,STFU LOL yer Dumb No 1 would care if U were from the 187,so clap yer head on a Drum 8 wins But 15 loses,Oh wait I mean 16,Whacker than Green Beans Age 14 friends call him MC cococut,Whacker than String Cheese OMFG=oh my fuckin god LOL=laugh out loud WTF=what the fuck STFU=shut the fuck up check his profile for the MC cococut |
hahaha
damn after this battle i'm gunna have to change that cuz noones called me that for like a damn year, now it's Jay since my name gives people difficulties |
It, nice battle
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This wasnt a badd battle kinds felt both ya verse.
First off ID LIKE TO BATTLE BOTH OF U SAME RULES AS HERE ILL DROP FIRST U SET IT UP BOTH OF U.. second i thought AMp took this battle his bars werent as wak as your it..he had wordplay sum were strecthed tho.. but i liked ya punches u had more then it..but it sum ya lines were wak..an ya wts stfu L Ol lmao things were gay..barley an personals besides ya closser// but besides that good shit.. Vote- Amp Can U Both hit this up..Honestly like i did..Plz...dawgs...thanks pc http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108047 |
nice battle but it had better punches
vote= it check out my votes please reall vs. tilleyedie and others |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108047
If u all can drop a honest vote in there it wud be kind of u..................... |
^ you could vote on the el battle-o
how's my spanglaish? did i get the accent right? I knew i should of paid attention in class!..... |
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vote now people lets get some polls on this |
im gonna say it took this......amp's verse was stretched and that took away from your flow.....both had consistant punches but it just hit harder....both there personals were good but again it's were better....his strucutre is another win here....overall he just came at amp harder..even with a shorter verse.....vocab and complexity go to amp....but just not enuff to overcome it
v-it |
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really
It- Nice punches way better then the other cat Amp- Nice also but u need too improve on ya punches really punches are the most important sooooo Vote- It |
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^^ ill battle u rite now bitch i think u suk dik..an ill murder u
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you should be dqed from our battle thats fucken whack if yer not^ uppin4 |
uppin 5
and 2 of you fools forgot to poll vote wtf? |
ite it gets my vote,
simplky cus he has elavated alot and his flow structure and strength of punches wer better, amp had ite punches jst wernt hard enuf and your structure is wak. .................................................v -it..........pz |
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aight thanks for the vote just made this post to make sure you polled cuz i wasnt sure i thought id seen 2 votes already polled and now it still has 2 instead of 3 w/e maybe im just stupid but just making sure ok |
..Decent battle..
Breakdown: Punches-It(his first bar with Richard simmons very clever) Personals-It(once again he came alot harder) Flow-Tie(both had very good flow going on) Multis-Amp(It had some but,Amp out id him on this) Meta-Tie ..hard to vote..but..Vote-IT ~Click battle on my sig~ |
aiiight battle.....Think IT was better cos his personal punches and flow were tight...
Gud battle tho.......props to bothe... Hit up the battle in my sig to see my battle style!!! |
[I]This was Ok...
Amp - You flowed well but never hard any hard hittin punches or personals. Structure was Ok except for the //....get rid of them It - More hard hittin punches and personals and your flow was the same as Amp's. Your structure was also good. v/ It |
Opener - It
Vocab - Amp Flow - Amp Structure - Amp Punches - Amp Closer - Amp Vote - Amp Amp had better punches, and his verse flowed nicely. Vote goes to amp. Pz. |
aight break down
opener: Amp closer: It Flow: both Structure: It Lyrics: It I think It got this on... Amp work on your lines a little. You got flow dawg... I just think in this one, you fell off at the end... |
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