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Limited Edition Vs. Hardhitter
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ightt ill have it posted in about 20-25 min's ightt...............................
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yo im gunna give you a simple sample of wut im workin wit// your lyrics are thinthey snappin like tooth picks// we all know limited loves to sueth dicks,my lyrics are sick and glichless like i said yours are weak like all these bitches.......
YOU got a demo and its a CD ROM you think u tight cuz your on rapbattels.COM its sad u just a fag in a womens dress bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast// why take the chance of stepin to me ull just get rolled on like every MC?? I'm that lyricly gifted/my words will hit u and make u feel like your whoel fuckin world just shifted//SO what u plan to do?/or where you plan to go?/fuck all this ramblin let hear u flow?........... |
Yo...listen up...
Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles... You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved... Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard.... ...even if you was Babe Ruth... Nice battle... |
ightt mann let get these votes in..............*1*
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Ight...
Structure- both need work but Lmtd wtf was that shit... punches-tie, lmtd were cleaner at times all tho More humor was delivered by hardhitter flow-hardhitter had a cleaner flow, lmtd was ight but at times he went off track wordplay-Hard hitter asocitated fluently thru out the rhyme more creativity, giving him the upper hand to the battle...his verse was more of a battle verse then Lmtd's was v/ hardhitter no beef |
i wasn't feeling either verse. both i felt were played in creativity. flow was better in hard hitters verse. punches were better in LE's. both need uppin, but i felt that the end line in LE's got this one. it was a nice play on his name, and i kinda thought it was funny.
vote=LE RETURN THE FAVOR: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...32&page=2&pp=15 |
ightt uppin for votes.............................#2
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A'ight thx...uppin1...................................... ..................................................
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ite h hitter was played also had wak flow and structure was abit of man,
l edition had wak structure but his punches hit harder also, his flow was beta (bit streched inm places tho)............. plz hit this na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...270#post1108270 thx.............pz Unexplained vote removed |
get these votes in and let me know i will return the favor...............1
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..One of the weakest battles of all time...I don't even want to break this one down..HH came a little better..punches more clever(not by much),both had terrible structure,flow was okat(it sucked compared to others),but overall HH was little bit better..vote HH
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thanx penskills i will be sure to return the favor..............*1*
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punches le:Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting metas le: You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper personals le: You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did flow: i guess i gotta say hard hitter overall i gotta go with le for a overall better verse peep the links in my sig honestly please |
A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... .......
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A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... ............................................
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come on get these votes i need a win,vote on this and i will return the favor pleazzz thanx..............~*1*~
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both verses were sub whack...um....LE took this with the lack of multis by both,but i guess he had 'hard' hitting punches....
Vote-LE if i could poll i would http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108295 Return the favour |
A'ight thx....uppin3..................................... .................................................. ....
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votes uppin again.............................wil return the fav.............*1*
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Uppin4...I will return the favor too............................................... ..................
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hardhitter wat was dat shit....ur structure was fucked up and ur punches were played limited edition takes this 1 clearly..........i was likin his first 4 lines especially the daddy line as it raised a laugh...........no need 2 explain n e more cos limited edition came a lot harder and punches were doper....
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hey lets get these votes in some one is gotta win soon this has been sleept on for a whiel come on noW.....i will return the favor..............*1*
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uppin once again .................................................. ......votes....................................... .*1*
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yo uppin thes muh fuckin votes............pleaz...............1
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What the fuck was that bullshit, is it hardhitter you call ya self, niggih you couldnt get off a puch line fah ya own fuckin health. LE got that yo he beatcho ass wit them aight punches.
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fuck u fagg battle me no hate vote bitch as clown ..................upin
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get these votes in come on////////////////////////////////
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UppinFinal...I will hit your up...plz come on....get them votes in.......................................
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hard hitter whoa structure was terrible..honestly horrid..it kinda messed up ya flow.. .first punch was wack second was wack...rest were pretty tight other than that personals were sparse..but good...all around fair verse..not fully showin ur talent ok verse i guess though structure need work overall 7/10 limited edition whoa..damn man..ur verse was wack..ur my boy..i expect much much better from you..what the hell went wrong? weak punches fair name personals.. kinda wack structure..all around kinda wack verse..punches were slightly weaker than hard hitters overall 6.8/10 close battle..herb fest...lol...j/k... my vote hardhitter |
this battle iz close az fugg buuuut imma go wit L.E. cuz i felt his flo and punches just a lil bit more. my fav lines from both:
Hard:its sad u just a fag in a womens dress bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast// L.E.:You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did ok now show sum luv on the links in the sig... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on |
gotta give diss battle 2 LE
he took it wit da closer da flow were da same n real close but wut seperated da 2 was da closer so v/LE vote on my battles V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 DON(topical) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 G http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142212 |
yo im gunna give you a simple sample of wut im workin wit// your lyrics are thinthey snappin like tooth picks// 5/10 we all know limited loves to sueth dicks,my lyrics are sick and glichless like i said yours are weak like all these bitches....... YOU got a demo and its a CD ROM you think u tight cuz your on rapbattels.COM its sad u just a fag in a womens dress 4/10 bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast// why take the chance of stepin to me ull just get rolled on like every MC?? I'm that lyricly gifted/my words will hit u and make u feel like your whoel fuckin world just shifted//SO what u plan to do?/or where you plan to go?/fuck all this ramblin let hear u flow?........... 5/10 Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting 6/10 You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did 5/10 You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper 5/10 You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles... You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles 6/10 Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved... Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard.... 5/10 This battle was kinda weak the punches were weak on both ends word play wasent really there Hard's structure was horrible which made it almost impossible 2 pick up the vibe and flow that he was settin down and ya punches didnt leave a lasting impression on my mind Limited your structure was bout the best thing u had goin in this battle ya punches were ok didnt really sting eitheir ya wordplay was ok also both of u can drop harder than this but cuz of structure and wordplay im goin with Limited |
o shit good battle
flow-HH personals-LE punches-HH multis-HH HH had the upper hand on u LE, no beef but my vote goes to HH |
yo limited edition took this clearly....his punches hit harder....and his verse got str8 to the point
punches: le personals:le multis: none metas: lil vote le no beef \/\/ return favor |
Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting 8/10 nice intro You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids? You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did personals 7/10 played out but put well. You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper... Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper nice 6/10 You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles... You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles lol 9/10 Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved... Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard.... ...even if you was Babe Ruth... 4/10 old.. overall i think u got it. |
an yo limited edition was nice as shyt his flow was killa n he nice wit tha punch lines so dis goes ta him
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