Dazasta vs Hardhitter
 

ok rules

def no feeding
no hate votes
d/r votes
crew votes
biting
being gay over votes
12 lines no more no less

waiting for ur check in...

ightt son lets do this..............wuz the time limit??????????

none..heres my verse

i had to collect this newb before carson could get at this whore/
the only thing he hits hard is head on the backboards/
i sack hoardes..of wannabe emcees, sweep ashes under the table/
chuz this kid couldnt flow tight if his throat was stapled/
his throat on cables..as i deliver a smashing pain/
while i leave him double-minded by slashing his brain/
capping this lame....deliver caps in his fame/
the only track he layed on..was in the path of a train/
this activist slain..his thread was for michealmadness who woulda lost if he showed/
and hes on top of the world...when standing on globes/
he drops below me..they'll be nothing but wackness/
went 2nd to show his skill on is on the bottom..like hiding under a mattress/

post...kid

before you drop your verse ima let u know michealmadness cannot vote because he said he was ur friend and hes gonna obviously be ur vote...so he cannot vote whether or not he thinks its honest

ihgtt yo im the hardest in new york//my flows hard yours is soft like a un cooked pork//im new in this game im in for the forchin fuck all the fame//when i murder u in this battel wont be no 1 to blame...u been rapping much longer/ but still im putting u to shame,HARDHITTER is the name beatting wacked rappers is the game....my words are getting in your brain got u sittin at your comp going fuckin insane//called michaelmadness out but u showed up like a flame!!////stand up take a bow and remember my name....H.A.R.D to>> the H.I.T.T.E.R my lyrics got u gased up sitin on the shitter...your lyrics couldnt get any bitter...fuck it im out!/im gunna leave u with this and i aint no quitter!!!!!!!............~*1*~

ightt lets get some votes............................................. ...........

uppiin for votes............................................. .................................................. .............

Breakdown:

Open-D
Closer-D
Personals-None
Metas-D
Punches-D
Multies-H
Flow-D
Structure-D

Overall-Dazasta

Not A Very Good Battle But Dazasta Won For Sure
His Verse Wuz Better Overall

get these votes in..........................................

Can't Poll...
but the breakdown is...
Dazasta barely got this...pretty weak battle...i kno both emcees had more potential that neither used..Dazasta had more and harder hittin punches, better wordplay and well text don't got a flow...

eazy win 4 dazasta.....good verse
weak batle....cuz dazasta didnt have 2 try....
break down:
punches: d
flow: d
structure:......
multiz: ......imma say dat hardhitter had atleast 2
vote: Dazasta
hit dis battle up....thnxx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625

v/d

Hard hitter was a little too basic with his shit...
D was a little better with the structure and punches...
D gets my vote for the bove reasons...

Please vote on the batttle in the bottom of my sig...

-W1

get these votes in...........and no shit dumb ass u guys are light weights........i want a peice of killer MC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I almost forgot to poll vote...
*done*

-W1

i had to collect this newb before carson could get at this whore/
the only thing he hits hard is head on the backboards/
follow through isnt bad, setup opening could have came a bit better
i sack hoardes..of wannabe emcees, sweep ashes under the table/
chuz this kid couldnt flow tight if his throat was stapled/
liken the follow through punch, set up seems more of a filler
his throat on cables..as i deliver a smashing pain/
while i leave him double-minded by slashing his brain/
ok punch, good concept
capping this lame....deliver caps in his fame/
the only track he layed on..was in the path of a train/
simple but doing the job so far, still not seeing anything extreamly hard[b]
this activist slain..his thread was for michealmadness who woulda lost if he showed/
and hes on top of the world...when standing on globes/
[b] a little bit of a played follow through.. set up could haveeen more directed
he drops below me..they'll be nothing but wackness/
went 2nd to show his skill on is on the bottom..like hiding under a mattress/
ok ender.. follow through was good little over drawn but nice, set wasnt bad.

Ya had an ok verse, could have workd a little more on setups and wording...your flow was ok good verse..




IP: 7A50 A5A0


ihgtt yo im the hardest in new york//my flows hard yours is soft like a un cooked pork//
not really feeling this start, reminded me of 50 cent... not really directed at dissing your opponent
im new in this game im in for the forchin fuck all the fame//when i murder u in this battel wont be no 1 to blame...u been rapping much longer/
not really seeing your diss/punch at your opponent... focus more on dissing him next time
but still im putting u to shame,HARDHITTER is the name beatting wacked rappers is the game....my words are getting in your brain got u sittin at your comp going fuckin insane//called michaelmadness out but u showed up like a flame!!////
aiight, good attempt at a personal, a little rewording would have helped the concept
stand up take a bow and remember my name....H.A.R.D to>> the H.I.T.T.E.R my lyrics got u gased up sitin on the shitter...your lyrics couldnt get any bitter...fuck it im out!/im gunna leave u with this and i aint no quitter!!!!!!!............~*1*~
ending wasnt the greatest

Ok basicly your flow was a little to simple here, didnt really focus on dissing you opponent. Add a little more creativity into you rhyme, work on dissing whoever you facing(stray from talking about yourself in a battle) build up a better flow( make it more consitant).... After that try going for some of the harder stuff like wordplay and metaphors..

vote- dazasta
Came through with better punchs

hardhitter DQed for having more than 2 active battles up at once.

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