Acro Nim vs Wits End: Thesis vs Com
 

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Due Thursday

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This fool is stupid, I'll drop early... give you time to contemplate
You're the type to stare at OJ... just because it says concentrate!
Your reputation decreases... coz your verses have creases
Acro Nim's on borrowed time and I'ma rip... their lease to pieces!
There's bound to be some friction... so I'll lubricate right through
This is the first gang bang... where one person raped a crew!
Who the fuck are you?... you're nobody... not worth it
Well I guess they lie.... they told me nobody was perfect!
Like a disconnected heart... Acro Nim just missed the beat
My verse looks unfamiliar... coz you don't know defeat!

I Haven't Texted In A Minute......

You Can Say I'm Cruel
..........But His Rhymes'll Get The Shreadder
Cuz I'm Nobody's Fool, Like Unemployed Jesters

Greet Em With Shells, Like Michael Jackson Imma Make His Posts Bail.
T.S. Never Fails, Cuz I Stay In Front Of Com Like The W's In URLs!
I'll Win By Far, My Second Hand Smoke'll Leave Em Filled With Tar.
T's A Star,Shit The Only Time I'll Go Below C..Is Pressing Space Bar!
Enuff With The Small Talk, Com's Gettin Killed With Outta Hitch
How Can You Be A Big dawg????? When Your Leader Is A Bitch!
Leavin Em In A Ditch, We All Know..... This Faggot Blows
Com Went Shoppin 4 The Recipe 2 Success,
........................................But The Store Was Closed!
Imma Krush This Hoe, Like Gettin A Clock Drunk, My Time's Wasted.
Cuz This Faggot Gets More Wood Stuck In Him Than Old Fireplaces!

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Good Luck......

good luck to you too............ lets get some votes............

Dissapointed in this battle....

Thesis: Had some nice punches, but also some played. Shouldve came with some harder hitting punches, but still, you had a nice verse.

COM: Not the best ive seen from you. You couldve came a lot harder. You shouldve came with some harder hitting punches and some more personals.

V/ Thesis


Hit up this battle with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1113041

Overall Im gonna have to go wit thesis here....
To me he had some nice meti4's and very nice flo...
The punches were ok...on that end I would have to go wit Com tho....
But due to the multi's meti's an flo....Thesis takes this one...

nice from both
vote-thesis

Damn I Hate Alias's.....

If We Knew Who Thesis Was..Com Coulda Beat Him...Oh Well.

Good Battle..To The Both Of You.

if you dont get EVERY line in my verse then dont fucking vote.....................................

calm down com...u act like u got the best verse ever when not true...

however....i will vote....

both were weak, played, and had a bit of cornyness in them

weak punches throughout the battle...i dont like keyboard punches or computer related punches.....i dont like people rhyming with bitch...i dont like capitalized anything...i dont like the raped line...i dont like hidden compliments....i dont like unecessary multies...i dont like wackness

so by virtue of not being as bad....i vote for Com....thesis' opener and closer killed it for him...yes i like personals but yours didnt hold enough weight...Com wins

word...... nah i havent got the best verse ever.. its one of the best i've done in recent weeks though..and I KNOW i beat thesis with it... but thx for the vote....

No Need To Be Nad Com....Calm Down.

Its Just A Battle....So..Chill.

Com Dont Fuckin Sway Kid.......
Damn You Didn't Beat Me.........
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Please COM.. It wasn't that good.. For gods sake you used a line I heard Jeff fucking Foxworthy use in like 1995. Nothing hard hitting at all in your verse.. Lacking personals.. Maybe a crew name flip would help? Anyways it was blah at best.

Thesis came with some personals.. The leader is a bitch line was nice.. Fucka complex make you think punch.. The lines aren't that stretched, they have internals in order to keep flow up.. ALL clock/time lines are played.. Bland verse with a few nice spots..

Whatever..

V - Thesis

Thesis took this..sorry COM...you can talk shit man but i don't think you should criticize..sure it might be good for you but it just wasn't good enough...Thesis' closer took this alone..

"Imma Krush This Hoe, Like Gettin A Clock Drunk, My Time's Wasted.
Cuz This Faggot Gets More Wood Stuck In Him Than Old Fireplaces!"

Best line of the whole battle..

Vote=Thesis.

then that shows what you know...... Computer lines PLAYED... he had fuckin loads,,,, fuck it i dont care,, i'm NEVER battling in elevated front lines any more.... its obvious why half you pricks aren't in LLL or on the Elite List,..... fuck it,... stick yo cock RIGHT up thesis' ass and then place yo votes on him... i give up...

I hate to go against grain here.. erm.. actually.. I couldn't care less.

My honest opinion is..

Thesis: You came alright... but you had 3 or 4 played punches that I picked up on right away which made the points of your verse minimize. You also had one too many fillers.

Com: You came a little better than alright.. but still dissapointing.. You had nice set ups.. Good concepts.. but lack of hard punches. Wordplay was a bit forced.

Overall COM takes this because of his creativity and without played lines. A couple of his lines made me smile.

So HONEST vote

COM

Yo This is Bull Shit...
 

First off i would like to say i like the new changes around here....

now on with the results....

Flow...Com
Structure...Com
Punches....Com
Personals...Tie
Multi's....Tie
Meti's....Com

Im Not Sure what is going On With This Site..... But i Remember Back When Dickryden Would Get you Banned.... so Im'a Post a link to this Shit in the IR and let the mod's Hannel They Buiz....Cuz This is Some Bull Shit!...

Vote= Com

i checked this out when it was first posted, but didnt reply cos i thought com won easy, and would be finished quick, then i come back and looking thru the votes are going to thesis, so i decided to voice my thoughts...

i think com took this his concepts were better, tho he didnt execute them as good as ive seen in past battles... his punches were harder, specially the opener and closer, they were much better than thesis's... thesis was ok, but seemed a bit played and the punches a bit weaker.... so.. vote=com

dude....that's herbish right there...

Bitching like this gets awfully annoying.
And leads nowhere but to an eventual DQ

LMAO now thaqt I read com's verse.
You should shoot yourself for that OJ line
The closer sucked ass.

And I used the nobody's perfect line months ago....
...only flipped better

no hate votes from chrit aka trapt wit ......... we dont really get along

Not voting, just upping
Not voting, just upping
Not voting, just upping
Not voting, just upping
Not voting, just upping

Wow, Com Bitches, Com Gets Votes.
Have I Came In Here Swaying With
The Fact That He Used A Fuckin OJ/
Concentrate Line? Then He Used Tried
Flipping A Nobody's Perfect Line Get
The Fuck Outta Here...I've Ask That
The Mods Come Clean Some Of This
Shit Up.

i agree this is quite close


com-nothing really played...nothing really new...punches were ok...and decent personals...overall this wasn't that good..i've seen better work

thesis-some witty lines here...good wordplay n harder hitting punches...i was diggin' those personals there...

vote-thesis

he just had a better solid verse

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