FreSh_EmCee VS Saint Heartless
 

Rules:
10 lines max
no cheating
i'll spit first

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checking in.........g'luck........
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here's ma verse:

This guy's a "Coward" like "Howard" and hides behind the "Bush"
You rhyming is like a riding ur first "Bike" so you gonna need that "First push"
The only time you see "Pussy" is by looking at your "Reflection"
This guys rhymes are like a "Broken Compass" and has lost his sense of "Direction"
I've never been in a battle where I actually bend or budge
Cos Fresh be packin "Heat" while Heartless be packin "Fudge"
I'll sign you to ''Death row'' but i'll be "Suge Knight"
And leave your rhymes "Hung-over" as if they were "Vanilla Ice"
Now ya'll have witnessed a ''Fresh'' victory against this rookie upon~us
All thats left is to dig "Heartless" a grave in the "Land of Promise"


gud luck

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come on dawg u postin yet?

lol.

Just my third post on RB and already I'm slittin' throats
Drainin' "fresh" emcees like crack addicts sippin "cokes"
Align your lines with signs and ya still couldn't find ya mind
Kinda like a race you can't win, ya starin at my fine behind
I could cut this list "short" and it'd still be "longer" than your ability
Inject the rest of ya text with supersenses, you still ain't feelin' me
Your quoting Tupac man cuz nothing about you is original
You're like a pastor preaching words without a religion yo
the say "its funny how time flies when you're having fun"
sorry son, time for you won't be flyin cuz after this you ain't havin NONE

out

i liked fresh betta just because he had a real nice flow to his junk.........saint......take more sensible punches and u would of had this........but anywayz...............

VOTE: Fresh

both came iight, fresh had the betta wordplay off his opponent name, nice flow from both, fresh punches hit a lil betta, saint was a lil weak on punches,
neither were creative, nothin to hot from them either but fresh edge..

vote fresh

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hemm the winner...... i dunno ... lol jus playing

this was good but fresh took this, he had better wordplay and punches
saint your verse was way to basic and could of used more harder punches
but saint i think you could of came harder as i see

but any way holla back on the reply votes

aite. thanx for voting.
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fresh was more on point, simple but more on point. Saint i felt ya flow, but some of the punches needed work. fresh kept the flow and punches consistent and that's why he gets my vote-fresh

ok man.......fresh had this battle all the way...............good verse from both but....i feel that fresh ahd this..he was on point and was consistent on his flow and punches...a battle is won when u get the punches going

my vote is fresh...
hit my battles up...i spend time on urs....u do the same


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109693
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699

thanks ppl

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Fresh Emcee had more punchlines that hit far harder... he flipped words very well and his wordplay was very good.... heartless needs to elevate his punchlines if he wants to win, but he had a decent verse and his pastor punch was pretty good...

vote = fresh emcee

vote on this please with an honest vote... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109734

come on uppin pplz.............................................. .....................................

flow/structure-
goes to saint, he was more concistant with multis and his lines weren't as stretched while fresh didn't have any multis and a few stretched lines

multis/rhyme scheme-
no doubt goes to saint, fresh didn't have any multis, but he almost had a nice rhyme scheme... saint had multis with an average rhyme scheme

punches/personals-
was close, but i give it to fresh... u guys do u need work with this... saint had a nice line about the coke, but the rest of his were weak.. fresh had more average punches yet none hit too hard however he had a few personals, and saint didn't have any... one good punch without anything else can't win u a battle i'm afraid

opener/closer

opener goes to saint
closer goes to fresh
since saints opener was better than fresh's closer, i'm giving it to saint

overall-saint by a hair


since i took the time to vote, plz hit the battle in my sig up... it's getting slept on like hell

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come on ppl uppin to get this motherfuka closed...............dont sleep on it......................

decent battle both should be elevating....
fresh: good punches like your metas and wordplay....flow was good .....struct was a little stretched lose the quotes....your personals were attempted....punches hit hardly tho...good verse......14/20

saint : nice verse as well ....struct on point....lose quotes too tho...personals were blah...decent at best....punches...didn't quite feel where you were goin with Some of them...but inded they were good...hard hitting if not played....flow was good.....good verse all around....but not enuff i think 11maybe12/20

vote - fresh ......
hit up my battle with wise ways.......