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Brethren vs. Kaos Theory
House Rules
10-16 lines Due Saturday (1/24/04) midnight Good luck |
Are you gonna check in??
I'm only battling if theres blind spits |
sure, pick a time .
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Make it due in a half an hour
Haven't started yet so.. thats sounds reasonable |
Alright, due at midnight .
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Flow? Brev.. you couldn't feel a beat.. if it pinched ya skin
..Ya 8 miles from talent.. you're even hopeless in Michigan Don't front.. Tha only time ya seen pussy.. is coimg out ya moms cunt A lil sleepy? Brev's had that battle with Danksta for a month! Late for school?kid.. you got tha wackness center to attend My spits are at Wits End But this n00b's verse has -~""**""~- and slashes at tha end Wack,n00b,Herb..thought for a while.. .................................couldn't describe you any other way Brethren of Hitler?cuz he was Protestant.and he turned out gay Ya full of gas fag..You're a lightweight and ya always been light I Threw pencils in Brev's eyes.. & still didn't have writers insight Looked wack as fuck in bitchslapped..& thats tha way u still apear 2-1?not much skill reflects there..so I'll make ya rec look like a mirror(2-2) Lmao.. Can tell you a herb by ya actions.. let alone by ya words Cuz you on ya knees more.. than ppl with strong faith in a church |
Kaos dazed, I'm warpin-vision like hes in the 'House of Mirrors', seeing circus-midgets,
I pummel him to worsen-conditions, haha, really 'take the edge off', like circumcisions, This battle is just like Pee Wee Herman, you taken a 'beating-for-fame', I'll see-that-your-maimed, lethal injection while you 'pleading in vein', You the Kaos Theory? You hear a 'Big Bang' from me, just to prove your uncle-wrong, Fucka-gun, I'll 'rip the barrel' straight out, and throw it at you, like Donkey-Kong, I'll shit on your verse, all damp and wet, so now all you got is miniature-'dews', Kaos, bitch still a virgin, he's got 'stickier fingaz' than Winnie-the-Pooh's, Haha, still 10 years old in mischief, somebody get this 'minor-off-fences', Kaos is just sick enough to get me to sneeze, or was that sinus-congestions? If you don't get the wordplay, don't vote, must have 150+ to vote. |
Uppin for a vote maybe?
Or even maybe five... Just vote you lil a-holes! #1 |
kaos good 1) 2-1?not much skill reflects there..so I'll make ya rec look like a mirror(2-2
great line vote-kaos Read voting rules. Vote gone. -Token |
alright........................................bat tle
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punches:brethren
flow:brehren personals:brehren others:none kaos most the time you lines didnt even go together it didn't have a good flow at all. brethren nice flow, went good together, your intro was dope dawg keep up da good work. since i took da say what i think, vote on any of my battles, piece. |
uppin for votes #1
(Reall get your weak-ass outta here) |
Kaos - You came pretty good, nice punches and the odd personal. Flow coulda been improved but it didnt effect ya that much. You were quite creative and came good.
Brethren - Ok....nothin special. You threw the odd god punch but didnt hit as hard as Kaos Theory. Flow was Ok but in some places fell off a bit. Overall not too bad but elevate VOTE - KAOS THEORY I cant poll yet but drop an honest vote on my battle...links in my sig |
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If you aren't gonna vote, then why even post in somebody elses battle?
Uppin #2 |
dam..good battle...
herez da break down kaos- madd nice punches....n i like dat line bout da mirror also (2-2)...good shyt on dat.... brethen- tite punches....but didnt com out az hard as kaos's...ur flow was ite 2..good shyt punches: kaos flow: kaos strucutre: brethen humour: .....kaos.. vote: kaos yo hit dis battle up wit an honest vote....thnxx 'http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108746 |
Cant poll...but kaos had it....B's multies were a little forced and his flow wasnt on point...some filler too
Kaos-Personals were on,when u had the multis they were there...Flow was off a little...but you took this battle easily |
word i think koas took this one just by the fact that his wordplay was a lil doper when it came to the punches...brethen don't get my wrong you had nice shit i liked the donkey kog barrel one and the veins wordplay but that refelection of skills mirror image line was nice..plus i felt he got more personal on you were as you were just throwin punches that hit hard but really we kind of not so direct personals are what won this for kaos its all love sons..good battle best i seen in a while on FL...peace...
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This is my battle.... #3..........Uppin people |
yo brethen u came out with the multis and dats wat gave u da edge in dis battle.....besides dat everything else was tied........dont have 150+ votse so i cant vote on dis battle though
vote=brethen can any1hit dis battle up???http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108745 |
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opener,kaos
closer,bret flow,kaos punches,tie, enjoyment,kaos VoTE,kaos damn good battle though peeps! |
didnt drop u a link! can u return me the favour please!
once again good battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195 |
If I could vote it would be for kaos...the battle was really good but kaos had more hits then misses...and Flow was pretty good too but still my vote would be for kaos.....
if ne of u guyz have time... check this battle out..really sick http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109024 |
Koas---ima say this again YA shit is SERIOUSLY SLACKIN DAWG
-------you had weak punches personals vocab was Iffy at most and you dropped nothin great Brethren----had a pretty dope verse a lil strethed but it worked cuz it flowed nicely punched hit hard and it was the better verse in my eyes no hate just some honesty fo yo ass vote-------Bre plz return tha votes |
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opener was hot from both...
kaos had the better closer... Ill punches on both sides, but I think kaos barely edged brethren out on that... Brethren had some nice multis, some forced though... Tough vote but i gotta go with kaos, because of consistantcy, and strength of punches. v/kaos Please return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=108767&page=1 |
no Wise, I wasn't talking about you, i was talking about people who can't vote.
Uppin #3 PEOPLE, READ THE VERSE, UNDERSTAND IT, THERE IS A PUNCH OR WORDPLAY EVERY SINGLE LINE, NO FILLER, SO IF YOU MISS A PUNCH, LOOK AGAIN |
^^^stop swaying votes
anyways i think that wise ways or kaos or whoever he is lol wins this battle his punches hit harder were better and were more consistant he had the overall better verse and all of brethrens stuff i felt were elementary shit my vote goes to kaos hit up the battles in my sig please cuz i took the time |
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.........vote please....... |
THIS WAS A AIGHT BATTLE BUT BRETHREN GON' TAKE THIS. HIS FLO WAS WAY BETTER THAN KAOS, HE HAD BETTER STRUCTURE, PUNCHES EVERYTHING.
KAOS U NEED STRUCTURE AND FLO KEEP WORKIN ON THAT. VOTE- BRETHREN HIT MY BATTLE UP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=103980&page=3 |
Kaos- You Came Nice. I liked Your FLow With HARD hitting Punches IMO. You Had Nice Structure With Wordplay. Long Battle, Nice Verse. 8/10
Brethren- You Came NIce Too. Decent Punche With Good Flow. You Had Nice Structure Too, And Ok Wordplay. You Can Elevate, But Yu Do Got Skill... Punches- KT Flow- B Vocab- None Mutlies- None Opener- B Closer- KT Structure- TIe Overall- KT Close Battle, Good Battle Hit This Up Please http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109027 |
Originality - Kaos.. 'midget' line was played
Personals - Kaos.. did his hwk an keyed against a specific opponent Punches - Both Flow - Both Structure - Both Multis - Neither VoTe = Kaos Fairly close.. but Kaos's originality an personals edged it for him. Drop a vote here plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108710 ...1 |
I didn't take multis? You sure?
O well, uppin # 4 |
ok ok, I read these two verses right. Kaos Is Good But I Don't Like The Structure. Good Punches Pretty Good Flow, Very Good Wordplay Some Witty Shit. Brethen Aslo Had A Sweet Verse But Kaos Was Better
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This Was A Good Battle. I Thought Kaos Had Very Witty Wordplay And Good Punches He Lost In A Few Catagories, But Overall I Give Him The Vote
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