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Token Vs. Axe
10 Lines.
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Check.
Word, I'll get at you tomorrow. |
Alright, I'm ready to drop.
I will report you to IR and make u DQ yourself if you no show. :laugh: |
This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos.. .. Is standing next to Walter Wall! Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people I told you to say your prayers.. .. But you tripped over the steeple! Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave Said the shadow is coming.. ..But you just needed to shave! Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest Feeble thinks for you.. ..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless! But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel That's not just what it sounds like.. ..It's how we ALL feel! You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work Although I'm finishing this with an Axe.. ..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK |
Hurry up.
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My internet service died on Thursday night. You just showed this to me now. I'll get to this by tomorrow.
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Hi, thanks for your patience Toke. Even though you bitched at me every day on AIM. ;)
:nono: You edited. Hoe. You went over 10 lines. Hoe. Enjoy. Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself. Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself! Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth. Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth! “Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd. Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend! Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees. Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese! Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away. People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte! This is a battle between two IR agents, so explain your votes dukes, or they will be taken away promptly. |
I'm gonna go with Toke on this one.
I felt Tokens punches were more effective, and were filled with better personals. I especially liked the bar "Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest Feeble thinks for you.. ..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless!" I thought Toke was more creative with his punches, because I've heard the male kissing one and the Chuck E Cheese line's a few times before. So overall, for creativity and better punches/personals, I'm going with Token. Interesting... your vote is almost idential to mine in which I voted against you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...342#post1139342. If you feel it's still a legit vote... leave it Token. -Axe Didnt I vote before you? ^No. -Axe Vote gone. -Axe |
aight nice battle mods
ummm i really dont kno this was a close battle....a very close battle since most of the categorys were tied i think that im going to go with the person that has the better punches ax got structure vocab personals token got flow creativity wordplay i think the person that had the better punches was ax i loved this like: Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd. Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend! that was hott tokens urs was hott also but i feel that axe's punch hit harder and hit more directly just an honest vote v/axiom |
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all in all you both suck... ;) good battle gentlemen:) |
This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos.. .. Is standing next to Walter Wall! wack ass set up...but u came back decent...6/10 Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people I told you to say your prayers.. .. But you tripped over the steeple! nope...didnt like....3/10 Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave Said the shadow is coming.. ..But you just needed to shave! meh..i dont see how this is a diss....4/10 Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest Feeble thinks for you.. ..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless! coo...7/10 But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel That's not just what it sounds like.. ..It's how we ALL feel! ok...7/10 You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work Although I'm finishing this with an Axe.. ..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK hmm...not good closer...5/10 overall.....for Token...32/60...this is over 50%.... Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself. Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself! alright opening...7/10 Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth. Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth! wack....seemed promising on the set up..but no...2/10 “Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd. Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend! blah..nothin good here...3/10 Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees. Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese! didnt like this either....3/10 Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away. People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte! soft hitting closer...5/10 overall...for Axiom...20/50...40%... Winner is Token...but pretty weak battle right chea ..no hate..just a vote..late |
oops..i accidently polled Axiom instead of Token..fixed that if u must........sorry
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This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos.. .. Is standing next to Walter Wall! got a slight smile Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people I told you to say your prayers.. .. But you tripped over the steeple! not really feein' this one Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave Said the shadow is coming.. ..But you just needed to shave! eeeh, cool Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest Feeble thinks for you.. ..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless! eehh, ok But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel That's not just what it sounds like.. ..It's how we ALL feel! not feelin' it You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work Although I'm finishing this with an Axe.. ..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK ok, should have been stronger though this verse was ok...Nothing spactacular or stood out... Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself. Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself! lmao, this was nice Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth. Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth! eeh, not feelin' it “Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd. Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend! nope Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees. Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese! nah, not feelin' it Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away. People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte! this was ok Opener was ill, the closer was ok, I wasn't feeling much more Even though Axe had the illest line, token came more consistant. Where axe had an ok line and an ill line to show for his verse, token had about 4 decent lines to show. He just came much more consistant and provided a better read, front to back. After the opener Axe let me down with the rest of his verse. Vote: Token -W1 |
You're all idiots.
Sorry Token, but Axe killed you here. You came nice dukes, and you're elevating immensely. But Axe ripped the shit here, everything about his verse was funny. This vote is honest, I'm actually cooler with you than Axe. But fuck it, here's a breakdown. Tokester. This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall The only time Axe's skill echos.. .. Is standing next to Walter Wall! Par. Numbing his brain..leaving him mindless people I told you to say your prayers.. .. But you tripped over the steeple! Ok but not hard hitting. Kid had high hopes, But I left him seeing his grave Said the shadow is coming.. ..But you just needed to shave! Filler in a way, sorta funny. Your overshadowed by me and feebs.. IRs finest Feeble thinks for you.. ..I'd have to kill him just to leave you Mindless! Lay off the name punches, they're getting old, this was aight. But on a serious note.. You're more like the 3rd Wheel That's not just what it sounds like.. ..It's how we ALL feel! A cut above par. You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work Although I'm finishing this with an Axe.. ..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK Best bar of your verse, but don't use a punch in a setup again. Axe's verse. Dumb fuck, said 10 lines… but can’t even count that high by himself. Your verse knows it sucks… two days after you dropped, it edited itself! Good. Toke’s known for fallacies, so fuck if he’s spoken, Axe speaks the truth. Duke likes to run his mouth… quickly to the nearest all-male kissing booth! Best bar in your verse, fuckin' hilarious. “Dude, gay jokes are played.” Yea, and all your punches exxttteeeennnnd. Sucked more net dick for his mod spot… than good-bye threads by Amend! Aight. Axe isn’t the type to hit Token while he’s down… I let him off his knees. Axe duck?! Even little kids get the best of Token at Chuck E. Cheese! Also very dope. Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away. People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte! Par. Sorry, Token, Axe came dizzope. He came consistent and had a few punches that actually made me laugh. Soooo, vote - Axe. EDIT: TOKEN DON'T EVER BITCH AT ME EVER AGAIN, YOU CAME WACK AND GOT KILLED, END OF FUCKING STORY, AND NEVER EVER BLOCK ME AGAIN, HERB. |
Token
You came dope. you had some good ass punches with a lot of wit behind them. Your closer wasn't all that spectacular. Axiom You came dope also. Your punches had me rollin. but whut really won this battle for was your first two bars. vote= AXIOM vote on this honestly: Vote doesn't count, weakly explained. But LMAO @ Token in regard's to Aisle 5's vote. -Axe |
UP #1. I just want this battle to be at the top, even though it's only four battles down.
*Giggles like a school girl* |
this was a very close battle....both verses were good but they seemed to be a lil bit rushed
token-u had a nice opener and closer....but your punches seemed to fall of in the middle of your verse...however u did have some nice creativity in your verse....but your punches just didnt land very well my favorite bar= You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work Although I'm finishing this with an Axe.. ..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK axe-i wasnt really feeling your opener but ya closer was tight...i felt your punches were more consistant throughout your verse u had some really good punches that were very funny....overall i think your punches just landed harder than tokens and your verse didnt seem to fall off my favorite bar= Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away. People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte! my vote/axe......for more consistancy and harder punches...it was a very close battle though |
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Ok, this was a decent battle.... but Toke, after the way you criticized my verse against B.I. in Elite, I really expected to see better from you... your punches were short and to the point, which is good, but I felt they didn't have a great impact - they were jabs instead of punches. Decent Opener, liked that, and you had another good punch (the 'mindless' one) but I think a couple of lines were wack (the steeple... c'mon man) and I have seen much better quality from you before. NOT a hate vote
Axe - First battle of yours I have ever read, and I was somewhat impressed. Punches were witty, but I think there were to many 'gay' punches/remarks. You said that 'gay jokes are played' which would have been fine for that specific punch/bar, but then you go on to use the whoel 'gay' thing twice after... (off his knees/his forte) which I thought was somewhat weak. Your verse was good though, and I felt that it took the battle this time because the quality of the punches was better than Toke's verse. Both of you had decent personals, but I feel Axe came a bit harder SO, my vote goes to Axiom. I REALLY HOPE this constructive criticism is viewed as just that... and doesn't get me hated on more. Just trying to Keep RB voting active and give feedback to you guys. pz This is purely a hate vote.. you are still bitter about me taking you off the elite list. Vote gone. -Token ^No. A hate vote would be... XXX won this, Token you suck. But if you want to remove it, Young P's shall be removed too. -Axe Vote gone. -Axe |
Thanks for the votes people, 4-3, Uppin to finish.
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Meh sorry token , .. Amby came better , in this one...his punches were just harder & nicer to read, than urs, you had good verse but i was feeling Amby's lines more, .. they just hit harder, .. nice battle, .. good verses V/ Amby.
Blah... come on Edicus. Explain your vote better, set an example. Re-Opened before Toke does it. -Axe |
Real close battle, and to be honest...
I'm a touch lost on Token's opener about Walter Wall... I guess ya saying Axe ghostwrite's for him. Hope so, don't wanna fuck up the personal. But if so, isn't that the same diss as your Feeble one? Some witty stuff, no doubt... But against Axe's first 4 lines... Man... The Chuck E Cheese was kinda played, but the fact that his name is Token... Was a nice flip. Just think Axe came harder, funnier, and had more of it... Token was cool, but I didn't feel he was hard enough... The steeple line: funny, not hard. The shave line: real creative, but no so much of a punch. Third wheel line: again, eh...nice, but kinda soft. Good concept, just didn't think the execution was there. Only kinda close... Peace Axe |
^ Walter Wall= Wall to Wall hence the echo wordplay.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
i voted already...can you foo's hit this up...thanx |
Best Line In Battle:
This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall The only time Axe's skill echos.. .. Is standing next to Walter Wall! It was a killer personal sik meti4 an nice wordplay all in one All in all..... punches- Tie (both came hard an regular wit the punches..even distribution an quality) flo- Token(His set better in my head, the lines connected alot better than axes) wordplay- Token(along with the top one i showed he had some witty additions) meti4's- Token(was pretty even in quality exept for the marijauna line on token's side) personal's- Token( easy....played ass chucky cheese lines....i seen em 100x on token) overall- Token Honestly I dont think this was really close either, I think Token took it pretty handily no hate an dont bann me axe -1 |
^ Lol.. Axe can't bann
thanks for the honest vote. uppin |
B2K didn't poll... I polled it. I win. Nevermind, he did poll but Token toke away Spitacular's vote. If you take his vote away, I take Young P's away.
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Wtf, .. set an example, .. i told the truth.
Punches:Amby V/ Amby iunno punches takes battles, in my book. *Flow, structure, all other shit dont count for me, personals & punches, do. =)..I always vote honest. Vote polled. -Axe |
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