Efusive vs Zarbon
 

10-20 lines

No-hate
No-Crew
No-Feeding
No-D.R
No-biting
No-1 lines votes

all votes must be explained
you drop 1st..

Good Luck:hump:

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Check in kid....i dont have all day.
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Zar just shatter gays.. they'll have to scrape ya ashes
Hit your nasal passage turn it into a fuckin barricade
No-one's bearing your shit, but I'm often stunned when
In my eyes, your lines are straight..I'm the dot above them
so I'm putting you down, be quiet and look to the ground
prolly got 5 camel toes in ya pants, pussyfootin around
You have zero workplace skills,and you’re a bore did I mention?
Beat efusive so violently,life got a restraining order against him
And when the net’s down, face it...youll never be popular
your so far from fame the public eye needs binoculars
Take out my competitor,cause this is about to get intense
road to hell Is paved & I tagged your date of birth & death in the cement

haha...just for that shit verse im gonne brake my verse down/LMAO

i'll post in like 10

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ok let me see,you come in like 3 hours later read my verse then write something up..that is such a pussy fucking move,well it suits you well..so wear the name you just made for yourself faggot bitch.. :thefinger

HAHA, i didnt read your whole verse, i read the 1st 2 lines
and said fuck it...LMAO

Enjoy :)

Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence
You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Ya last heard shit's outdated kid ya better switch styles
It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch-files
Like a one hit wonder ya mad because ya know ya pitch less
This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist
I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie"
Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me
Especially from one caught bitting off verses unshamefully vastly
Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds
Last time I checked Mr.Zabron, I highly doubt rap was a Clown
It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay
Your future in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay
Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide you fate

If i could vote it would be for Efusive..I think u killed him with these two lines alone
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Efusive.Good Structure Good Flow Good Punchlines

Zar your flow was aight but u didn't have good punch lines my opinion ur sickest punchline was:
Beat efusive so violently,life got a restraining order against him
And when the net’s down, face it...youll never be popular
your so far from fame the public eye needs binoculars
Zar your structure was aight your flow i give a 5.5/10.
Ne wayz can u guyz vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934

upping for some more honest votes so this battle can be up and overwith
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we need some votes....dont sleep on this battle
common!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can someone please fucking vote on this battle please....this is bullshit...40 people viewed it and not 1 fucking vote...kind funny you want people to vote on yours and dont vote on anyone else...Dumbass's

Umm... Can you say one sided??
Damn Efuse came down on this kid
With punchlines that tore Zar
Efuse.. ya personals weren't that great

Zarbon... you had a pretty basic verse
With not that much creativity.. mostly played
Flow'd aight.. wordplay not that nice

so

V/ Efusive

Hit this up with a vote... Its being slept on maaadd

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=108823&page=1

yo Efusive merked this cat hard....i mean...hard.........ZArbon up ur shit...u aint got no structure....nor vocab.......good punchline by Efusive.....1

vote- Efusive

jay-nova i think that u forgot to poll..or kaos one of you did...well anyways thanks for the vote...upping #4 to get this shit some more votes.....

Efusive merkd Zarbon. Nice punches, personals, multis and metas. Notable line for Efusive: Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide you fate
Nice. Zarbon came half assed, nothin reallt stood out.
PLease drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109347

thiz one iz kinda obvious... Efusive's skillz way more advanced so it waz ez for him to merk thiz Zarbon kid. Zarbon your shit was juzt 2 basic for Efusive, u should try and use some more wordplay and shit. u got the right idea just need to work it out a little bit better... Vote- Efusive

plz drop some honest votez on thiz one, thxz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109348

efusive one this one for sure. zarbon's verse was alright, but it was a little too introspective, saying you good you were as oppose to insulting him. very nice punchline for e, and a nice flow. i'm sure unshamefully vastly needs a comma in there to make it make ne sense, but i'm guessing it's just a typo. better multi's and metas and flow from efusive, so it's gotta go to him. can somebody vote on my link below? my battles being ignored.

argh nuts. i don't have enough votes to vote proper on this. oh well.

This is my last upping common this battle has been up for 5 days already

please get this overwith

Efusive..you had good structure, perfect flow and some hard hitting punches..they were complex but make sure u add personals in them, and try to get more metas too

Zar your flow was aight but u didn't have any punches that really hit hard...punches are the key in battling so try to get them next time, there 50% of ya verse.

overall - Efusive took this battle wit eas...his punches were much harder and more complex, keep battling guys