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blineye ~vs.~ Sm0e Ki
you know the rules iaght due wheni get out of school iaght PEACE~2u~
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yo............. it must be 5 barz or more iaght no less than 5 barz that is lol
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yo look this guys name is Sm0e Ki so i must have already put him out/
i smoke his ass juss like the grass and burn him till he shouts (ouch!)//1 mutha fuck always wishin he could be like me the best/ but no matter how hard he tries he wides up losein like the rest//2 his mouth must smell so bad from all this shit that he talks/ goin around to every dog lookin for the shit that will give him his walk//3 you should just give up cuz you lost your touch/ and you lost this match from the begining patch//4 so let me sum this up for brake it down make it a lot simpler/ no matter the way you walk, talk, smoke, or toke, you'll choke and pop like you pimples//5 this was mad weak but hey it only took me like fuckin 3 mins to do and i am in schol and can not consintrate AND I AM WITE LOL! juss playin around iaght PEACE~2u and good luck! you are gunna need it !lol! |
lol... it's a comical verse! LMFAO!!!
yo, you shuld just say due by 2:00 eastern time though lol... anywayz... check! g'luck homie! PEACE!!! ~1~ |
look, we call you blindeye cuz i stabbed-one/
cuz u thought chu could talk slick holdin a cap-gun//1 you were wrong, and you paid tha price, bitch-suffer/ ya girl gives dome to so many cats she's like a dick-buffer//2 scrawny lil white boy tryna be like me,-walk,-talk,-an-ack,-like-a-G/ you get caulked,-chalked-and-smacked-like-a-flea//3 bow down to tha kid like im tha Wes Connection/ my lyrics to "mattie's beatz" blow thu ya vest-&-chest-son//4 (our friend matt) ion needa finisher here's an extra bar jus to meet tha quota/ cuz my werds busted ya good optic after it saw um and swoll-up//5 :D g'luck homie! PEACE!!! ~1~ |
smoke clearly won better punches his rhymes werent played better flow and better structre cand blindeye you need to elavate but good battle not to bad yo hit up
Fo-Real vs. Pictureperfect2 and Fo-Real vs. C.Quip sorry no link |
this was weak..... i think smokie won this though
he had some wat wordplay and ok punches bline eye your flow was off bu alot and i was n't catching your its or our verse at that |
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This was a weak battle...but smokie got this easy...better all around verse
vote-smokie can you return the favor and hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109012 |
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yea word one sided..........................nice flow from smoke...... vote/smoke..............................overall better battle verse .................................................. ................................. |
Vote/Smoke Ki....... Just all round better rhymin, better structure.
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vote-blin eye better flow and punches...
both verses were whack as shit... smoe ki ya used a line no one understood even with the explanation... use rb related personals.... my vote-Blin Eye hit up my battles n open mics in sig\/ Pz... _-SyaNidal-_ |
ighttt smoke took this had better punches and flowed a little better..........but nice battle.....
my vote-SMOEKI yo hitt this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108844 |
iaght thas koo i no you gunna win dawg i was juss doin this shit cuz i was bord durin mid-terms and had nothin to do but i ain't complainin your shit was clean and nice now matter what these fools say you know iaght well uppin for votes and PEACE~2ALL AND TO ALL A GOOD LYFE~
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uppin for some votes you know lol
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Blindeye- Nope. Nope. Nope. Elevate, Visit WEC. You Needa Get Punches In Your Verse. Try Add SOme Multies, And THings No One Has Heard Of Before. Ok FLow, Bad Structure, Get ALl Your Lines Same Short Length. Smoke- Nice Versse, Feelin Ya Verse. Ok Punches, Better THen BLind, Nice Wordplay. NO vocab, bad structure. But you took This Cuz Your Punches Actually Hit A Lil Bit... Punches- Smoke Flow- Smoke Wordplay- Smoke Opener- Smoke Closer- BlindEye Vocab- None Overall- Smoke Hit THis uP http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109027 |
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