COM vs RULE
 

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Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?'
Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch
Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit
Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule
Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool
Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet
Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left
Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must
I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore..
If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch

Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA!
Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats
How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet?
Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch?
Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch!
You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door
Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"!

upping for votes..............
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Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?
^^^^^
Hmmm... to long...didnt rhyme....Hes in wits end...and dropping soap=played
4/10

Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch
Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit
^^^^^
Decent...not a very hard hitting punch
6/10

Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule
Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool
^^^^
Trying to hard fer personals....only 1 punch is needed about the crew thing
5/10

Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet
Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left
^^^^
wtf? an attemp at a multi? YOUR TEXT BATTLING RIGHT NOW punch was disgracefull
4/10

Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must
I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore..
If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch
^^^^^
swaying votes twice....you put an extra line which through off the scheme
5/10

overall 4.5/10 (dont rap like rap, bat, cup, slut) and use wordplay



Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA!
^^^^'
good concept, wasnt worded right
6/10

Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats
How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet?
^^^^
OK line, try not to use the defeat/feet thing, nice flow
6.5/10

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
^^^
pretty ill...nice metta...
7.5/10

Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch?
Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch!
^^^^
ILL...nice little flip, and punch
9/10

You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door
Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"!
^^^
Nice....little personal...
8/10

overall 7.5/10

com wins Better verse overall

rule... thought the opener was a bit played, and it didnt really rhyme... the verse was quite personal, thats good, but the punches didnt hit too hard... th closer was ok, but didnt like the way you presented it... overall... 5/10
com... liked the opener, amusing... and quite consistent punches... with some nice wordplay

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
^^liked this bar... and i thought ya finished it with a good strong punch...

overall coms verse was harder hitting and more amusing...vote=com

whats MY mark out of ten?? lol............................................... ..

id say rule had an overall decent verse....i liked the humor of punches and personals....good strucutre...opener could have been better, and closer was pretty decent....i'd say it lacked in metas and harder hitting punches....there was a little filler..........so i'd say 6/10

com had hard hitting punches/personals especially the openeer......your creativity was killer....your strucutre was decent as was rules.....your metas were better than his.....
so were the punches and personals....overll.............8.5/10 ~ you win
vote - com

...pathetic...lol...if you read in elite free agents you people would understand the personal lol

but nice battle com...uppen for votes

thx.. but don't use personals about me bitching and then do it yourself. lmao

Com ripped this cat...

^^neek i ripped you fuck off fag

com i was just saying..wasnt bitching..I just thought personals win battles..but meh...and i said nice verse..so think about it

and I said thx...........up.3................................ ............................

yo ite,

i read this early'er and thaught this was close,
i just read it agen and still do,
rule took personals for sure nice stuff about wits end and shit, but
you came abit played in places and flow was abit of but nice spit man,

COM seen you come better but this was nice man,
tite witty punches and you were more consistent with a better flow and structure,

this was close for me but COM just gets it down to consistency and punches,

nice battle,

plz return the favor now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109583 thx alot.................pz

yo plz could you repay the favor with an honest vote as i took the time thx alot http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109583 .............pz

Com takes this.

Rule you had a few aight personals, but none of em stood out. You just blandly stated he was dropped from Wits End. Turn it into somethin' nice.

Com your verse was good. The knife line was good, everything else was par. Every category Com took.

Vote-Com

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5th and final up................................................ ......

just pop'd back in to see how it went, and it STILL aint finished.... come on i want to see who won.... lol

Uppin for these guys,,,,rule you had decent punches like i stated just you used all your concepts over and over......

aight why not
Rule.. stick to topicals kid
Com is more of a battler n' you could see it
just better overall punches

v/ COM