Typo vs CAMROK
 

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Im'a delete this typo, give his rep a reduction
I'll take out his fat ass like lypo-suction ((think about it))
Yo Typo, U don't understand Im a fo real danger
U mommy ever tell you not to talk to strangers?
Well I'm that bully u used to see at lunch
"Give me ur fuckin money, or I'll throw my punch"
Today hasn't changed, this rhymes bullying ya now
You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how
Your rhymes are wack, they don't attack
I'm like the big dog, and you're the alley cat
Take this beatin like a man, stop bein a little girl
Don't cry everytime, my line, puts you in a whirl
I come out of ya sights, fight, like the black in the night
you'll be lights out, have a good-night ass-whipe

Goodluck-

Here I go, my name's Typo, but there's no malfunction in my flow//
I'm here to rock Camrok's world, got my ducks lined in a row//
When I walk through the room bitches like Camrok be fallin to my feet//
Cause they know the force of my rhymes'll blow em down Fulton Street//
I look in ur eyes and see ur fear, you fake MC Hammer, makes ya stammer//
Everybody, drop ur battles, come and watch this MC get hammered//
I'm on a whole different level, high up while you attempt to ride my dick//
My skills is blessed like holy water, got the power to make molasess slick//
Lookin' at ur girl, she must be a trick cause she sure aint a treat//
But since I'm nice I'll allow her to come and try my weighty meat//
Saw her back, so rough a DJ could pull scratches off that s**t//
I understand though, it's the best you can do, the only kind you'll hit//
A word to the unwise, fix up ur profile, what the hell is a Camrok?//
But there's no time, cause my rhymes are da equal of a full force glock.//

Aight, good battle, kid. Let's get us some votes... Uppin #1
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Uppin #2... where the votes at?
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Lets get some votes up on this... uppppinnnnnnnnnn..!!@1

typos punches were better and so was his flow
camroks punches were all crap apart from this "I'll take out his fat ass like lypo-suction"
and his flow wasnt all that
vote-camrok

check these.
vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371

erm, no. -feeble

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vote-typo

well, both had their strong points, while camrok used better vocabulary and his rhymes were better, his punches were weaker than typo`s... flow goes for typo`s. as well as opening, but camrok had a better closing
my vote goes for typo

Also don't count.
-Axe

typo's punches were better, but his rhymes weren't as good. very nice start though. typo had harder hits though, and had a slightyl bettter flow, so i'm afraid i'm gonna have to go with typo on this one.

dont count -feeble

I definantly go wiht camrock on this one...nice hard battle from him...very nice and good...he gets my vote

do this again and youll be e-castrated. -feeble

Lets see some honest votes up on this???...... leave a link i'll return favors and check out battles when I can

come on i voted on urs vote on this i only need two more votes...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109426

Uppin #3
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Uppin #4
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I don't see the problem.. had a nice opening, nice closer.. my rhymes stayed consistant. had punches. not as many but still had them. creativity? wordplay?... is everything all ppl look at now is punches? plus ive seen some of his punches in battles here before.. originality? just my opinion... keep up the honest votes.. this was a good battle.

Uppinnnnnnnnnn(3)

Uppppinnnnnnnnn(4) ---

Leave links I'll return favors and check them out.

camrok - good structure........flow was pretty good.........vocab was ok........pretty tight multis.........wordplay was ok.........some of the punches hit hard........good personals......

typo - structure was ok.......flow was good........vocab was pretty basic........some of the multis were good........wordplay was aight........i was feelin some of the punches, some were wack though.........ok personals.....

conclusion - camrook takes this in flow, multis, punches, and personals so he gets my vote......

VOTE - CAMROK

Uppin #5
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Uppppinn (5) lets get the damn votes up!

Leave links. I'll return favors

Cam won this. He actually thre punches. Typo, there a self glorification cypher, check that shit out. Anyway, Cam had a few decent punches, both were kinda whack, but elevation will come. Peace

Punches: Cam
Wordplay: Typo (had one)
Multis: Cam
Personals: Cam
Opener: Cam
Closer: Cam

You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how
Best line, this line could've been so fucking ill if you added another wordplay, like this

You couldn't 'Stand Up' to 'Bullies' if Ludacris showed you how

Not m uch thought in it, but if you pu a little more in it, that line could've been really good.

Vote - Camrok

cam took this....typo lacked punches that hit hard sum were played both flows were aight i suppose.......personals closer finisher all go 2 cam typo elevate kid try improve ur punches and personals and u will/shud elevate

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

this was an ok battle..cam u had a good structure and flow, sum of the punches hit....typo u'r structure was aight, flow culd of been betta, punches were close but i think camrok edged it in punches. vote-camrok

Honestly dis battle was kinda aight...........Camrok did a good job throwing his punches and was more of an enjoyment making me actually laugh, you could kinda say. Typo was good with his punchs except da one's about MC hammered was fuckin whack as hell mde me laugh from da corny-ness of da context. Both were pretty weak in dis battle and could of did better, but seeing dat a battle all comes down to dissing your opponent i'll have to go with Camrok harder hitting punches and was consistant with it unlike typo who didn't keep it up.

vote=Camrok

vote on my battles and return da favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

man i wish i could just break this batttle down in categories cuz i feel it was one sided

typo- you came with some decent lines.. nothing that really hit hard though.. you had alot of filler in your rhymes like that line bout being able to make mollases slick.. dont put lines like those in your verse those arent disses.. and your punchlines were weak.. your wordplay was mediocre.. i aint really see any mulites thrown in your verse your shit was just average

camrok- you had some clever lines in this battle "Im'a delete this typo, give his rep a reduction
I'll take out his fat ass like lypo-suction "

"Today hasn't changed, this rhymes bullying ya now
You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how"

these are the type of punchlines that win you battles.. and those lines and the rest of your verse had nice disses in there

vote- camrok