Rock Bottom Vs. Word Definate
 

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no hate votes
no crew votes
no dickride votes

you drop first...

See You In Hell
 

I'm Taking You Beyond The Grave...Im A Rave The Critics Crave,
I'm Darker Than A Cave...You Can Scream But You Won't Be Saved
This Kid Can't Think...His Minds In A Lock,
I'm Ending You On The Writers Be-Heading Block!
Definantly Your Word Is Absurd And The Worst I've ever Heard,
Lirael One Will Be Your 2nd Loss...And I'll Be Your Third
No Need To Take You Down And Break Your Crown,
Come On Put On A Smile Instead Of A Frown
I'll Leave You Looking Like The Salad That Ya Toss, :hump:
The Only Definate About You...Is This Loss!

going or what?........?...........?..........?...........?

drop ur verse already you fucking no show pussy!!!

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Rocks hit bottom harder than the angriest homo,
n couldnt take this heavyweight if his class was sumo
Hey Rock, Bottoms up, a toast to my new win,
I could never stop flowin if I was anymore fluent
You couldnt be in deeper water if you were spongebob squarepants,
n like carnival games, you still never really had a fair chance
Rockin bottoms where ill leave u lyin on the charts,
n you couldn't pushed rapped goods with grocery carts
my battles are like the mumbles the way that i got UMMMM,
n not even a mime in a hole would ever feel rock bottom

:nono:

finally you droped your verse, it only took 2 and a half days!!!

dam....both these verses sucked..but ima go with WD..cuz at least his had better punches n more personials..n rb ur shit sounds like a poem...or something like that..cuz the rhymes are really basic..but both u need to intensivly need to work on ur punches...ok

yeh rock ya shit was way too simple, flow was aight....word ya flow was better, and actually had an array of disses that hit harder then rocks'..so vote is WD

uppin for some votes =D

Word Honestly I think killed it......Had one of the nicest lines ive seen

Hey Rock, Bottoms up, a toast to my new win,
I could never stop flowin if I was anymore fluent---Very Nice!

I'll Leave You Looking Like The Salad That Ya Toss,
The Only Definate About You...Is This Loss!-Nice Finisher Rock!

Rock your flow wasnt as hard hitting...but it was good. Def good shit once again.

Votes Please......

uppin for some votes...

uppin

Aight honestly Word was better. I feel that both need to elevate more though. Word had better punches than Rock but both were weak in my opinion. Rocks lines were pretty simple but simplicity , if used right, can win a battle. Win goes to Word.

Rb

I'm Taking You Beyond The Grave...Im A Rave The Critics Crave,
I'm Darker Than A Cave...You Can Scream But You Won't Be Saved
This Kid Can't Think...His Minds In A Lock,
I'm Ending You On The Writers Be-Heading Block!
Definantly Your Word Is Absurd And The Worst I've ever Heard,
Lirael One Will Be Your 2nd Loss...And I'll Be Your Third
No Need To Take You Down And Break Your Crown,
Come On Put On A Smile Instead Of A Frown
I'll Leave You Looking Like The Salad That Ya Toss,
The Only Definate About You...Is This Loss!

No need for break down becuase i would end up sayin the same thing...it sounded like a poem or an open mic. punches werent that good and you had no complex anything. no wordplay, metas werent the greatest, personals i dont think you had any. you need to elevate or stop battlin and go all openmic and poem


WD

Rocks hit bottom harder than the angriest homo,
n couldnt take this heavyweight if his class was sumo
Hey Rock, Bottoms up, a toast to my new win,
I could never stop flowin if I was anymore fluent
You couldnt be in deeper water if you were spongebob squarepants,
n like carnival games, you still never really had a fair chance
Rockin bottoms where ill leave u lyin on the charts,
n you couldn't pushed rapped goods with grocery carts
my battles are like the mumbles the way that i got UMMMM,
n not even a mime in a hole would ever feel rock bottom


your verse wasnt the greatest either, but your punches did hit harder then Rb's. you had meh wordplay and some lame stuff, you need to elevate. how ever you did win this battle becuase Rb didnt throw one ok punch

my vote - WD for reasons stated above

somebody forgot to poll vote....DAMNIT...one more vote somebody

Weak battle...
Rock..elevate...straighten ya verse out
Work on ya punches..they was weak and played
Tossing salad<--don't use that unless you have a really good flip

WD.. yours was simply better..
More complex wordplay and punches
Hit him with lots of personals also
played off his name alot

so

v/ Word