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The Jett 01-24-04 10:33 PM

CarsonJet -v- E.Coli
 
10 lines
normal rules
30 minutes
check in
blind spits

The Jett 01-24-04 10:35 PM

checked in

e.coli 01-24-04 10:40 PM

in

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The Jett 01-24-04 10:53 PM

e.coli


Lemme spit in e's vaccinity so he can feel ILL
your records high, good thing ur on em pill's...
For real, u wanna see e.coli's true nature check his sig
Postin up his wins,He beat Tek?..Oh now he's really big
I could re-wind, and the result's still say the W's mine..
E.Coli?...he don't even drop lines'he's here for DR "grinds"^
And I aint Lie'in...He's battled no one...He can't step in elevated
over rated, Look..if he messed wit skill, U'd see that record Faded
He won't debate it, he comsumes more cock that window treatment
Fuk bein leniant-e.coli belongs exposed, wit thoughts all over pavement

e.coli 01-24-04 10:57 PM

u shouldnt have accepted this battle u dont know what u got into
im merkin carson times 2....with just this bar i could murder you
......#get real u couldnt be in the game if u were playin NBA live
its a damn shame u know u a loser when postin on RB is ya 9 to 5
.......nice try but no matter what u do no one will ever fear the jet
how u gonna have over 600 post and u aint been here 2 months yet
...........its time to expose the secret.......carsonjet is really a chick
please quit....your audios are the worst to ever be put on soundclick
.......its like u got hit wit a 10-ton brick cuz yo ass is gettin smashed
its over......like a plane piloted by a crackhead this jet has just crashed

e.coli 01-24-04 10:59 PM

nice drop carson.........voters please disreguard the #sign in the 3rd line

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BaNE 01-24-04 11:16 PM

punches/wordplay-carson
disses/personals-carson
flow/structure-carson
multis-neither

vote=carson

vote on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109037 (be honest)

e.coli 01-24-04 11:24 PM

^^^sorry bane but that is not a legal vote......follow the voting rules next time dude......uppin for some real votes

uppin(1)

LuMiNĂ¥Ry Te-X-t 01-24-04 11:28 PM

This was a clean battle but i liked Carsons Verse better shit was sik ..hot u must be a vet on the site e coli..good shit likes ya srtucture an flow
but still carsons personals were there

Vote- Carson...

Will U BOTH CLICK THE LINK AN VOTE HONESTLY CUZ I HIT YA SHIT UP AN TOOK TIME ..TO DO SO>>SO PLZ>>>HIT IT UP SLEPTED ON PC
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487

Wise Ways 01-24-04 11:29 PM

Hmm... Aight battle... was expecting more though

Carson.. Ya punches could have been worded different for more effectiveness
I liked tha cock/window line.. Flow was sorta inconsistant.. structure was wack
You came with personals..which touched on his custom/sig/name.. connected okay
I've seen better

Ecoli.. Ya opener wasn't that great.. Like carson.. you could of worded it better
Came with a played line.. But besides that.. solid verse.. nice personals bout tha soundclick/9 to 5/and his post count... nicely done.. I liked ya closer too
Thought it was very creative...

so

v/ E.Coli

Hit this up please... Its being slept on big time.. thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...03&page=2&pp=15

vEnOmS 01-24-04 11:37 PM

.ok heres the breakdown.........ill poll my vote on other aka
Flow:carson....easier to read... these----> ...... Dont make it easy
strucuture:carson...smaller and simple..both are small but the ...... gotta go from the beggining
Punches:carson.........witty punches....lol some good and some ill
Personals:....not a lot.....cant comment
multis:carson..............mulits are shown from both...
overall:carson....no hate beef good battle...both ok...carson came weak but still could have been better

Vote=carson

TheProphet777 01-24-04 11:38 PM

^polling vote now.............................

e.coli 01-24-04 11:45 PM

aight thanks for votin everyone

uppin(2)

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LuMiNĂ¥Ry Te-X-t 01-24-04 11:48 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487

your welcome for the vote but can u an carson peep the lnik dawg


cuz i voted in ya shit thanks ...>PC

e.coli 01-25-04 09:48 AM

uppin(3)

please dont sleep on this

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code-187 01-25-04 10:06 AM

this is a hard battle to judge it is very close,the flow was ok from both but id say e.coli had better personals
vote-e.coli

peep this
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371

The Jett 01-25-04 11:18 AM

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Dope Name 01-25-04 01:02 PM

Punches: Carson (you don't really say stuff about peoples posts, it's gay, you also used lines like i did when i first battled carson, "the plane's crashed" or something)
Personals:Carson (coli had more, but some of 'em didn't in my eyes even hit carson, carsons were harder hitting, Quality over quantity thing)
Multies: Carson (with a quick lookover i saw more from carson than coli)
Metaphores:Coli (there was barely anything to comment on)
Vocab: neither ( the biggest word in that whole battle was crackhead)...

Overall: Carson

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109348 You guys know what to do...

The Jett 01-25-04 02:17 PM

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e.coli 01-25-04 03:37 PM

uppin(4)


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lets get some honest votes in here

:) 01-25-04 03:40 PM

damn this shit was hot.. both of yall had nice personals.. carson had some nice shit

but e coli hit him with better punchlines and personals

vote.. e coli

The Jett 01-25-04 04:06 PM

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Dustin Dubree 01-25-04 04:10 PM

punches cj: Lemme spit in e's vaccinity so he can feel ILL
your records high, good thing ur on em pill's...

personals cj: I could re-wind, and the result's still say the W's mine..
E.Coli?...he don't even drop lines'he's here for DR "grinds"^

metas ec: .......its like u got hit wit a 10-ton brick cuz yo ass is gettin smashed
its over......like a plane piloted by a crackhead this jet has just crashed

flow both: both didnt had too stretched bars

overall i gotta go with cj no hate just an opinion

both please peep the links in my sig

Joker 01-25-04 05:01 PM

Real good battle...but e.coli takes this his punches was
hittin hard...u lacked personals but the ones he did have
was strong and made up for it...and he had a good opener
...Carson u really lacked hard hitting punches..usaully not somethin
i see from u...u lacked personals..and didnt make up for it..
and your flow was a lil off thatss whyi went with e.coli.


Vote: E.coli

e.coli 01-25-04 05:25 PM

uppin(5)

last up..........please vote on this


final up


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menolin 01-25-04 05:49 PM

carsonjetX2
Lemme spit in e's vaccinity so he can feel ILL
your records high, good thing ur on em pill's...
6/10

For real, u wanna see e.coli's true nature check his sig
Postin up his wins,He beat Tek?..Oh now he's really big
5/10

I could re-wind, and the result's still say the W's mine..
E.Coli?...he don't even drop lines'he's here for DR "grinds"^
6/10

And I aint Lie'in...He's battled no one...He can't step in elevated
over rated, Look..if he messed wit skill, U'd see that record Faded
6/10

He won't debate it, he comsumes more cock that window treatment
Fuk bein leniant-e.coli belongs exposed, wit thoughts all over pavement
5/10

overall 28/50


e.coli
u shouldnt have accepted this battle u dont know what u got into
im merkin carson times 2....with just this bar i could murder you
6/10

......#get real u couldnt be in the game if u were playin NBA live
its a damn shame u know u a loser when postin on RB is ya 9 to 5
5/10

.......nice try but no matter what u do no one will ever fear the jet
how u gonna have over 600 post and u aint been here 2 months yet
5/10

...........its time to expose the secret.......carsonjet is really a chick
please quit....your audios are the worst to ever be put on soundclick
5/10

.......its like u got hit wit a 10-ton brick cuz yo ass is gettin smashed
its over......like a plane piloted by a crackhead this jet has just crashed
5/10

overall 26/50

T West 01-25-04 05:52 PM

i dunno how u guys get e.coli as the winner here. Truthfully, his lines were crap. and original? far from it. That NBA live crack would of been much better if it was worded better...and the ending of the bar was crap. In my opinion, both of you came out crappy. Espically you Carson, I expect witty verses from you, and this did not display that at all. But you did get the point across, and it is clearly identified in this battle. That you ppl are dick riding on e.coli. And its tru...
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Originally Posted by :)
but e coli hit him with better punchlines and personals

Carson's whole dam verse was personals...and by your judgement...u proved they were all tru.

Quote:
Originally Posted by code-187
this is a hard battle to judge it is very close,the flow was ok from both but id say e.coli had better personals
vote-e.coli

Same thing as smiley face...what the hell are you guys talking about.

I wasn't too sure on who to vote on once this battle was over, but after reading some of the votes here, I voted Carson because all of his shit was the truth and proved that a lot of you are dickriders. Vote Carson for harder punches and personals.

also, e.coli...stop using "......"'s to make your bars appear more even. You are dimiishing the purpose of what they really are for...and that is to signify a pause.

Vote- Carson


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