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Yo What Up vs. nosam
ha ha brian.......ur gay.......BIZATCH!!!!!!!!!
10 lines house rules verses due tonight at 12 est blind spits ha ha.......ur fuckin done foo....... |
CHECKIN IN...........
ill start keyin afta u check in........... ur fuckin done brian........ lets go son......... |
Checkin In.....................
Reppin The Mondo Thugs... |
iight sons of NEW YORK.. REP.. MONDO...
peep peep.. CHECK CHECK Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/ You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/ Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/ But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/ You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/ But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/ DONE MY SONS... hey yowhatup said i could have 12 so yeah i have 12 |
^^^LMFAO........y would u even talk shit and come wit shit like that.........whateva.......REPPIN DA MONDO THUGS.........check it.......yo, yo.......
just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/ ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/ this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/ after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/ even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/ im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/ dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/ u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/ i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/ dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/ EXPLANATIONS - 1st bar - in his sig he has "reppin da mondo thugs" twice......one right below the other one 2nd bar - in his sig he had to write "i be illin" in huge ass letters cause everyone knows hes wack 3rd bar - self explanatory 4th bar - he goes to my school and hes fat.....carmen is also fat, but ud have to have 3 carmens to make him 5th bar - in his post he said he was from new york, but really hes from arizona like me....... __________________________________________________ ______________________ should be enough, but whateva........ UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!! |
Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/ You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/ Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/ But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/ You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/ But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/ _____________________________________________ k overall 6/10 keep it up and come harder wit witty punches ------------------------------------------- just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/ ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/ this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/ after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/ even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/ im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/ dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/ u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/ i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/ dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/ _______________________________________ man yer struc is horrible fix that shit,overall 7/10 _____________________________________ vote/yo... |
^^^thanx for the vote..........
UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!! |
Uppin #2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Dont Sleep On Dis Bitchs......... Lets Get Some Fuckin Votes!!!!!!!!!!! |
I thought YO wutup took this better punches an wut not
didnt feel other guys structue ya AB ab Rhyme scheme didnt feel it u had a bunch of good punhces an if u structured it rite i think u wud of taken the battle but u didnt... Vote-WUTUp Hit the link up dawg..Cuz i voted on ya shit an poll ya vote..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487 |
Punches:Yo
Multies:Yo Vocab: Yo Wordplay:NoSam...like the play on his name Metaphores: NoSam Stucture:Yo Vote: Yo What Up..good shit 1 left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545 |
Yo What Up, what da fuck? We was supposed to battle today but you openin' up battles like a muthafucka. Don't tell me ur duckin', not after all that shit u was talkin?
U could PM me ur excuse. Anyway, as for the battle: This battle was decent. Ur not really supposed to reveal info like names, but both of u don't seem to have any problem with it, so: nosam: Your verse was just okay. Pretty basic and all. However, u did have some good potential. Okay wordplay, good structure, kinda weak punches, more on the creativity side. Keep elevatin'. Yo What Up: Your verse was okay too. Pretty basic, but with some nice wordplay, metas, and creativity. Punches were good but I've seen better from ya. Keep elevatin'. Vote: Yo What Up |
^^^thanx for the feedbacks.............
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!! DONT SLEEP ON DIS HOES!!!!!!!! |
Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Foos........lets Go Sons!!!!!!!!!! |
yo took this battle his verse was dope,much better pesonals and structure
vote-yo peep my battles vs dizzy hommel http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195 vs d.liver.e http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371 |
Punches:Yo
Vocab: Yo Wordplay:NoSam Multies:Yo Personals: Neither Metas: NoSam Poll vote Please=\/ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392 |
Nosam bit that line
"Cum clean jacking off in the shower" from Eminem http://www.lyrics-site.com/313_Lyrics.html Second verse, nosam just varied it a bit. |
YoWhatUp took this battle.. nosam wasn't really all that bad but Yo took you in the majority of all the catagories... punches, creativity, personals.. ect
vote- YWU Return the favor, honest vote hit up this for me. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424 |
^^^thanx for the votes.......
UPPIN FOR THE LAST TIME........ ONE MORE MOTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!! |
uhh... yeah uppin for the fitsrt time UPPIN
VOTE FOR ME uhh... yeah YEAH VOTE FOR ME |
Yo Yo Uppin #2
I Be Uppin For Som Votes... Vote Now Dang What Is Taking So Long |
This Was A 1sided Battle Yo took this Easily His Punches Hit Harder,Disses/Personals Were More On Point, Decent WordplayGoiod Multi Use....
VOTE=YO WHAT UP Return Da Favor... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109032 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109612 |
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