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(Instant)lm Vs .:FiorZ:.(Voice of tha streetz)
Ok Instant Vs Voice of tha streetz
10 lines, both spit within 1 hour of checking in, No d/r, No crew, No hate, No feeding No freepsoting, ………………..good luck to all……..pz |
Checkin in....I'll drop ASAP....................
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Ok here I am....
Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz... And now I'm done.... |
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Quik Key...
Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant" Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:. Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef Peace..................Lets Get These Votes Goin' |
where da fuk are the votes..............lol
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lets get sum votes up in this mu'fuka |
This one's tough...
LM came with (and I checked twice) no wordplay at all... Everything was straight forward, not even a single meta. That's not cool and not what I'm used to seeing by you. Now... Fiorz did come with wordplay and metas... Mixed things up nicely. But... All, and I mean all his shit was either played to death (veggie burgers/beef, plastic surgery)... Or whack (monk) (playin on ya own sig)... So... How to vote? I guess LM for the originality. And for showing more aggression. This battle was hard as fuck to decide... And not for good reasons! Don't half-ass! Peace |
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alright battle......both came sub par and shit.....
Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs original. ..7/10 I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career ehh.... played 5/10 Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored want feelin it 5/10 Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england getting better...nice personal 8/10 I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz again a good personal ... 810 31 poitns :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" No...monk?..blah 5/10 If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant" decent 7/10 Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery better .... 7/10 nice puersonal punch Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:. Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway much better 8/10 , witty Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef ehh....3/10 wasnt feeln it..... 30 points...........you lose....by a piont decent .... but both came weak .... vote - LM.....more originality.....more wit.....better punches......Fiorz i hated your closer !...... |
Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs 5/10.. cant get more average than that line when it comes to battles I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career 7/10.. significantly better.. 2nd line watered down by first tho Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored 4/10.. simple yes.. but in no way effective.. played Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england 5/10.. another below par punch.. nothin new with regards concept I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz... 7/10.. compared to the rest not a bad way to finish 28/50 Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" 6/10.. liked the first line.. nice concept.. ?? @ the second If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant" 5/10.. massively overplayed meta4s Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery 6/10.. not hard hittin at all.. but original Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:. Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway 4/10.. horrible.. need i say more? Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef 7/10.. relatively nice closer.. original(ish) meta4 28/50 Lmao! Scores are tied.. cant go by closer.. so i'll go on my fave punch: "I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career" - LM Let down by the first line.. cos the second wasnt bad at all. "Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" - Fiorz Opposite to LM.. nice first line but dodgy second.. tho it was still a tad stronger than LM's.. VoTe = Fiorz Drop a vote on whichever one u can: vs wogzta: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 vs W1CKED: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 ...1 |
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Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs ok personal, kinda a played meta I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career ok Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored ehh didnt rhyme in my head Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england lmao....ok...played I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz... played, but ok Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" ehhh kinda whack If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant" pretty good Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery ok personal Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:. Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway ehh ok Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef good personal/punch Hmm close call, I have to give this to FiorZ. He jus came with more witty punches and personals. LM jus came with too much played shit. Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 |
OK, this should be in regular Front Lines... word
but I will have to go with LM - Fiorz ya punches were all played to hell. I can't even justify taking the time to give you a decent breakdown - because I will feel like I got ripped off for the value of my time. both of you should be embarrassed.... that is all drop an honest vote on me & Lyric's battle in this forum pz |
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Alright so my vote goes to Fiorz, not a great battle guys, I know you can do better, I voted on y'alls batle so please vote on my battle. |
uppin 4 more votes...
lets get this shit closed now people holla... |
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upiin votes for ya'll, and i would vote but fiorz iz in my crew so i cant. good battle tho!!! pzzz
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iight...
LM Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs Nice opener... Straight to the point... Lol... 6/10 I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career Very hard hittin personal... 8/10 Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored Not feelin it to be honest... 4/10 Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england Nice enough... 5/10 I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz... Good personal... 7/10 Overall... 31/50... Structure was good... Vocabulary wasnt bad... Flow was good... Punches where good... And some nice personals in there aswell... Good verse... Pz... Fiorz Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk" Good opener... Good punch... 8/10 If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant" Not bad... Played... But not bad... 6/10 Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery What? 4/10 Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:. Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway Not feelin it... 5/10 Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef Badly worded... Self-glorification... 5/10 Overall... 28/50... Structure wasnt bad... Vocabulary was iight... Flow was off at times... Some iight punches... Some pointless shit... Not many personals... Decent verse... Pz... v/ LM... Punches hit harder... Less played... More consistent verse... Both drop a vote here please... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020 Thanks... Pz... |
wow this battle has been upin for ages so im'a get it closed
vote LM |
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