vEnOmS Vs. Michael Madness
 

Ight,
Check in.
10-15 lines
blind spit
no hate votes
no crew votes
Post by 11

chewck check check gl oh yes no wise way votes or kaos theory votes to

The rules already say no Hate Votes................

ok droping mmy shit now.........................waiting on u to check in...............

Check.../..Oh yeh if your gonna add some rules I guess I'll add 1 more..No recycling

yo venoms.......i set up a new battle......go n chek in

Yo....

yo look first talk about newbie callouts..this is one of them
Thought i was going to have compitition..but i gotta face him
Michael madness? dawg u better off witta no-show....
Cryin, way this Ho'tel's u'd think he had free HBO...
haha..damn ur finished and you thought i was done...
Oops..fuck that shit those four lines were only verse one!...
R u kidden?...Mike?...it's triple 7 on dis mic'...
This kid's a net-whore only RB's are his type...
Wait Ko'd?...and Carson took it eazy on u...
check his punchlines, there cheesier than fondu...
Screw it...ur done...i dont have to spit the extra rhymes...
hell ill let you finish it...go ahead spit my last two lines...

Carson beat him and i saw the battle..carson came to easy on him lol...and still kod him
ok....gl to both

yo dawg u going to drop this shit or what? damn

Are u even going to drop mother fucker...Fucking herb.....damn no shows....Give me my victory bich

Yo wtf My comp is all fucked....Ill drop now bitch

bitch ass.........ur wasting my time post by 11....bitch its 1:22 ...fucker give me my win! Walks to "ir"

While he on R-b every nite, I'm on the block With crillz in my denim/
claim yer rhymes are potent,Like a snake You bout to be milked of yer "Venom"/
I'm bout to End Him...Lyrically....... w/ outta weapon,
He feels the tension/ Now hes edgin on his chair, Holdin his every breath in /
he's Hopin to win, but my worst is as good as his best is/ Learn this lesson, don't battle..yer fake /Nd You Got Put away like a hard earned wage/
So I'll save my best fer larger stakes/Becuase this "Venoms" Bout as deadly as a gardner Snake's/ Parter its time to face what youve been tryin not to face/
That the fact is your attempt to pursue a carrerr in rappin has been a waiste /
he thought to be eminem, after realizing hes fake, he be back to play 2nd base /
Nd' Im just tryin to hurry this up, cuz my comp keeps freezin
so I gotta quickly submit some junk/so I'll leave you w/ a punch,
This bitch is a gay fuck, acting formal,I Jus Ate "Venom" But yet I still feel normal

Ight man sorry bout all that shit my ish is all fucked up,,,,,some quick shit...lets get some votes on it

^bout damn time...ahh my eyes hurt from reading ur shit.....uppin 1........................

Okay..... yeh structure was a lil messed up but i had to hurry shit up cuz my last shit got deleted and my comp was fucked. o well i got this any way..
uppin(1)

wack shit here.......venom wins cuz he wasnt as wack...
both had herbish verses....but readind mike's was painful..

work on the structure..peace....yup........and venom is an idiot....peace...

^herb...either way....u mad cuz i voted against u....ive been on this site longer than ur ass and i know whats good from bad...dont hate on my shit and his shit cuz his shit is way better than urs. Uppin for both of us (2)

uhh..mad..nah..i still voted for u.....u know good from bad?? ur in FL..lol...
I'm an alias dumb shit..i know what's good......

^^ and so am i dumbshit

yep venom takes this one and hopefully i can poll it right this time..punches were good from venom although i've seen better...prophet man if thats you.....you really dropped the ball on your skills here dog you used to be better than this...micheal whackness emergency center.....nothing really even to say...your structure fucked your flow is choppy....i'll leave it at that peace....

yeah its me....didnt wanna waste time on these wannabe emcees...thx dawg...upping this shit yo

Venom killed this fool he had the better verse an strucutre good for a newb
oh actually i no who he is good shit prohpet..

Hit the link i left up in..it

Vote- Venom


Hit this up honestlyp c
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536

yo sure.....thx uppin this shit again............

Well what can i say?
Madman..You had tha shittiest verse I have seen today
..Just being real with you... L E Vate
Even out ya structure..and that will bring along flow

Yep..Venom had a couple punches.. from what i could tell
Basically a weak verse from both.. just madman's was shit

so

v/Venom

uppin this shit yo..........2...............

i gotta give this to mike, venom dissapointed me. Mike actually had a couple good punches. venom i don't kno where ya were tryin to go with ya verse dawg, but ya gotta diss ya opponent better then that. both flows cudla been betta but mike had the better punches. no hate...Vote-mike

i cant beilve this but alright yo...seems like u need to elevate....damn herbs....uppin this shit yo........(3)

MM had some fucked structure. Most of his lines were played. He took personals cause a few he threw were tight
Venom takles punches, structure, and flow. Not a bad verse. COmpact with not too much filler. Ok battle, but elevation is needed and will come
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks its much appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109353

Just thought I'd let you know...
Every post after both of you drop ya verses
Counts as an Up...Alias or not...
Be aware of that...
And violating that is an automatic DQ

Yeh ok, my punches clearly hit harder then yours but whatever man....Think what ud like..uppin for votes,,leave yer thread I'll honestlyy hit yer battle up.....(2)

not really^^.....madman u whined against me 2....it's what u do...
It's pretty clear that 777 took this all on flo an punches...
also a lil wordplay in there....
I hate whining...Madness accept u lost, dont be retarded

vote 777

venoms took this,
his punches hit harder, heha a better verse, an that was all it took to win this battle