wogzta VS .iLL.
 

10 lines
no feeding
no d/r, hate or crew votes
.iLL. spits first

peace and good luck

checkin in

aight cool......... good luck and have fun............................................... ...............

~`~Intro~`~

This battle be the ~location~ of this faggots ~mutalation~ so here's the ~presentation~/
I'm the doc he's my ~patient~ and im in charge of this ~operation~/

~`~Dog Fight Begins~`~

Homie, this scientific and unspecific horrific lyrical exhibit/
is explicit by the minute cause my flow's prolific/

The only thing you 'stab' is ya meat with yur *utensils*/
your ammo's water, and u only 'pump lead' wit mechanical *pencils*/

Wogzta couldn't 'equal' my skillz if he was a 'Siamese twin' born wit me/
Hes been know to be compared to 50-
gay men in a sauna singin elvis presley/

~`~CloseR~`~

Masterful, supernatural attacks, tactical-planned 'n mathematical/
Grind your body into a pulp reminiscent of tuna casserole/

Kid must've read my battles the way he spits vocab
But "Thesaurus" was the only word I found in his notepad
My dexterity positions me as the martyr of rap
While he tries to blend in like Rednecks wearin' Rastafarian hats
Like horrible tracks, I present you with lots of issues
And then discard your existence like a box of tissues
Utilize your ears, I suggest you start listenin'
Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen
You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved
I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve

nice spit .iLL.... good luck

uppin, thanks

uppin 2

lol........my god...heres the breakdown
Flow:both...
Stucutures:both...same
Punches:::mad punches from wogtza....not enough to be great but enough.
personals:some from ill. NO hate on that one
multis:ill..FUCKING SO MANY!
metas:ill...had more metas..
overall:ill...the multis....so fucking many....
hit up my attle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1126197
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699

^ i'll hit up your battles when you vote my friend... you have to pick who is better... not just say "theyre both ill"... peace

Ill had some nice multi's, and flow. But the punches were just aight. Wogsta had a good flow, and sum good punches. overall sum of ill's lines were played i think wogsta came more original. so my vote is wogsta

check my battle out.

upping for honest votes............................................. ....................................

.ll. had some nice metas and multis. Usually I dun like multis cause people throw em in there to sound cool, but ILL made them punches which is nice. Wogzta had a nice flow and structure, not too many good punches or metas but I give him creativity for some of his metas. Overall .Ill.
Please take the time to drop an honest vote here. Thanks guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779

^ actually, ill had no multies at all... all his rhymes were internal, not multies.... but all my lines had 2-3 syllable rhyming except for the last 2... just letting you know

uppin 3 .. vote for this guys, and i vote for urs

Ill had good multis but Wogsta had good wordplay and had 2 good metaphores. The first being:
"Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen". He talks about line with the double meaning fo a fishermans lines.
And the other:
"You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved
I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve". Here he suggests that even though ill were as hot as sulphuric acid, he would never come close to melting him as he is Gold.
Also his verse was more pleasing to the eye.
therefore my breakdown is:
Flow:wogsta
Metaphore:wogsta
multi:ill
Form:wogsta
Rhymesense:ill

Wogsta/Ill = 3/2

^ thanks for the intelligent breakdown

"uppin 3 .. vote for this guys, and i vote for urs"

^ i hope you mean that in the way that you'd give an honest vote... voting for someone just because they voted for you can get you banned

yeah man, im just trying to encourage people to come here and vote, not trying to sway anything my way..i see how you coulda seen that, sorry. I aint like that.

and whats the battle go to, best of 5? 7? .. hell, i dunno whos even winning right now lol

^ nah its cool, i was just making sure.. since your new i wasnt sure whether you knew some of the battle rules but u do so thats good...

its best of 5... first person to reach 5 votes wins... right now im leading 2-1... peace

OK, this was a murder.

Wogsta - you should be battlin peeps wit your skillz, this cats needs some time before (if ever) he can take you on

Wog had the punches, but no personals. Wog you murdered him cuz he didn't throw any punches (and cuz of that thesaurus punch LOL), but you need personals and more wordplay. not that bad though

Ill- you need to focus on puns and clownin the othere person, it seems like you don't yet understand what battlin is... keep elevatin man

vote = wog

yall hit this up with an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109986

Why u pickin on newbies wogzta?

Wogsta - you came wit some decent punches and good flow, structure was there and u had an overall good verse. try to include some personals..even though hes new try to play off of something.

Ill- you need to focus on punches, multis dont mean anything, there about 5% of battling, take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center and battle some newbies like yourself

vote = wogzta

^ he was the only person who offered to battle guys... whenever i pick someone better than me to battle they always no show cos theyre scared of losing to someone worse than them :D

but ill did ok, i had fun battling him.... anyway thanks for your votes guys, appreciate it...

spitacular, ill check your battle out

upping............................................ .................................................. ........

Back to post my vote for ill now that I have 100 posts. Check this out guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881

yo i vote wogsta on dis one. i felt he had more flow and tha edge with his verse. his woz nicely keyed together and woz quite strong. close battle though, had to read both verses over n over to get who i wanted to vote for. good stuff