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Lirael One (0-0) vs. Def Con (0-0)
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Blah .. you stole your fucking name from a well known head online, why should i bother with you?
10-12 is all your getting. |
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Bitch, the net's your life .. thats why im Sonning Ya ..
Kid had an out of this world experience .. .. when he ACTUALLY left his monitor. i'll Whore this 'Vet' .. till just a Corpse is Left .. Then make you call me oxygen .. .. when you finish Short of Breath. My Shits Insane .. damn right i'll Rip this Lame .. Def Con won a tourney at Prowlers .. .. perhaps that's why you Bit his Name? this Fake Fool a Vet?! .. ima Straight School him Next .. your Neck's not at Stake .. .. i'll just push a Stake through ya Neck. this Crack Addict's .. bout to get his Back Shattered .. i'll attempt to win his heart over .. .. if not, at least i'll take a Stab At It! ; ) & make sure ya Shroud Brain, gets Bounced Again .. the fuck you gonna diss me? .. faggot cant even Pronounce My Name! Kids been scowerin' on AIM .. Feeding for Tips .. Here's one .. Stop at the second line, thats where we stop Reading ya Shit. You'll get whored son .. .. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth See i Call the Shots .. .. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; ) Admit it .. I OWN YOU .. & this Nerds Best .. .. are wack name flips, lame kids here havent Heard Yet .. its not i dont like you .. .. or how you Space ya Lines .. it's that EVERY line you use, ends with a Basic Rhyme. Ima end it there .. .. dont really wanna offend this Textcee Cause that way .. .. he'll go and vote for me again Next Week .. - The Nigger Molester |
I only spit hot lines to make it quick when I'm hurtin fools
And the only thing faker than Chrit’s Lines…are this kids personals^^^ Man D- Con’s-fiding the truth- and this kid is a dying man Dude thought he was safe dickryding…till He…PM’d me his diaphragm!!! A crying fan, who factually never really had a chance to harm me Cuz generals lead his verses- I thought those cats led the army??? U can’t spar me- kid won’t even get a touch- let alone a wrestler Cuz it’s known I’m white- aren’t you known as the Nigger Molester??? I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four I hate to make it noticed- but you proved that you know I’m the boss Cuz you only post all those smiley faces- when you know that you lost Quote:
EDIT: I was missing some words on line9 |
yo....this was a good battle...
check it... Lirael came nice...i wasn't really feelin that structure...but its ur style...good punches but some coulda been flipped better... .. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth See i Call the Shots .. .. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; ) like this one is an example...the setup was actually ur punch...ur punch was more or less ur setup...cuz Sniper in Phone Booth is not a punch... Defcon came witty as hell and shit was dope...the Diaphram line was hilarious... and then when he threw out the... I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four i automatically fell in love all over again...:) vote-Def Con |
yo....this was a good battle...
check it... Lirael came nice...i wasn't really feelin that structure...but its ur style...good punches but some coulda been flipped better... .. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth See i Call the Shots .. .. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; ) like this one is an example...the setup was actually ur punch...ur punch was more or less ur setup...cuz Sniper in Phone Booth is not a punch... Defcon came witty as hell and shit was dope...the Diaphram line was hilarious... and then when he threw out the... I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four i automatically fell in love all over again...:) vote-Def Con |
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He liked it so much he voted twice.....lol....thnx |
my vote goes to L.O...I liked his punches better..and he also had a good flow..the only thing I didnt like was his structure..otherwise that he had some nice punches..but no personals..
Def Con you had a few good punches but none that I really liked..the dick riding punch was good..and the nigger molestor punch was good..but the rest was "ehhh"..pretty good match but more categories go to L.O. vote~L.O. |
Close...Lirael Had Some Nice Punches....But He Went Up And Down In His Verse With Punches....Like Every Once In Awhile He Had A Good Punch....And Def Had Some Good Punches As Well...And Some Funny Ones....
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^Funny Quote:
^2nd Line, Nice Wordplay.. Quote:
^LoL, 2nd Line Funny And Witty Quote:
^Best Line In Entire Battle....Funny Personal Opener - Lirael Personals - Lirael....Def Con Name Stealing Thing He Wouldnt Let Go Punches - Def Con Structure - Def Con Closer - Neither...Both Were Weak Vocab - Def Con Vote - Def Con, Better Punches And More Punches...Lirael Seemed To Be Hungover On The Name.... |
I agree with Fue.. that was tha best line in this battle
I thought this was a close battle though.. Lirael only had a couple personals.. from what I saw But Def took tha personals and punches eaily with that 34 line Very creative from both.. Lirael got tha multies ..cuz he had a lot of em Flow was leaning towards Lirael... it was close both were good But Def got this with his punches and personals v/Def Con |
LMAO I think I know who Lirael is... I could be wrong though... haven't spoken to him in a min... but...
I'm not sure whatever one else is seein... Flow: Lirael... punches: Lirael... wordplay: Def Con... creativeness: Leanin towards Con... overal enjoyment Lirael... but it was mostly shit I've seen... so... Vote: Definetly Con... |
Vote Def Con
He had me laughing more... Cam's was good as usual .. But Def's was more witty & All his punches connected |
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How funny is that... I think we may have confirmation... |
I agree with most here.
Def Con takes this because his punches were consistent and had wittier wordplay. His verse was just more enjoyable. Both came good.. This was a good battle. I just think Lirael One could have come wittier and with harder punches. V/ Def Con |
agreed.. Def Con had wittier punches
not sayins LO wasn't good, but def con just pretty much out did LO here with his punches.. just hit harder in my view v/Def Con |
7 - 1 def con, upping for more honest votes.. theres no need to vote with the crowd hoes.
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Word Up....
Cam Took This.... Def Con Came Nice, Cam But Came With Fire And Another Thing Is The Def Con Fed With The Whole 12 into 34 Line...If Cam woulda Posted 2nd Would He Have Been Able To Use That Line? And That Was His Hardest Hittin Punch. I Also Think Cam Was More Consistent And Came Equipped With A Lot More Punches. V/Lirael One |
Bitch, the net's your life .. thats why im Sonning Ya ..
Kid had an out of this world experience .. .. when he ACTUALLY left his monitor. ^Not the way to start it off. i'll Whore this 'Vet' .. till just a Corpse is Left .. Then make you call me oxygen .. .. when you finish Short of Breath. Seen the concept, even used it myself. My Shits Insane .. damn right i'll Rip this Lame .. Def Con won a tourney at Prowlers .. .. perhaps that's why you Bit his Name? There we go! Nice. this Fake Fool a Vet?! .. ima Straight School him Next .. your Neck's not at Stake .. .. i'll just push a Stake through ya Neck. Nice this Crack Addict's .. bout to get his Back Shattered .. i'll attempt to win his heart over .. .. if not, at least i'll take a Stab At It! ; ) Nicely Flipped & make sure ya Shroud Brain, gets Bounced Again .. the fuck you gonna diss me? .. faggot cant even Pronounce My Name! Fake Personal Kids been scowerin' on AIM .. Feeding for Tips .. Here's one .. Stop at the second line, thats where we stop Reading ya Shit. Lmao You'll get whored son .. .. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth See i Call the Shots .. .. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; ) lol Admit it .. I OWN YOU .. & this Nerds Best .. .. are wack name flips, lame kids here havent Heard Yet .. Fake Personal its not i dont like you .. .. or how you Space ya Lines .. it's that EVERY line you use, ends with a Basic Rhyme. lol, nice Ima end it there .. .. dont really wanna offend this Textcee Cause that way .. .. he'll go and vote for me again Next Week .. Bleh, poor closer. Overall: Had a discussion with a friend that doesn't post on this site. Showed him the link etc. He explained a couple things to me(there was nothing I didn't understand, he just helped me to look at battles differently...if you're that concerned about it..contact me on AIM) I only spit hot lines to make it quick when I'm hurtin fools And the only thing faker than Chrit’s Lines…are this kids personals^^^ ^Dope...then I realized...that's fed. Man D- Con’s-fiding the truth- and this kid is a dying man Dude thought he was safe dickryding…till He…PM’d me his diaphragm!!! ^Nice A crying fan, who factually never really had a chance to harm me Cuz generals lead his verses- I thought those cats led the army??? ^Shitty U can’t spar me- kid won’t even get a touch- let alone a wrestler Cuz it’s known I’m white- aren’t you known as the Nigger Molester??? ^First line...wtf was that? Second line, nice. I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four ^Fed I hate to make it noticed- but you proved that you know I’m the boss Cuz you only post all those smiley faces- when you know that you lost Decent Overall: Not a bad verse...but 2 fed lines is a huge no no. I've seen people get DQ'd for feeding before...why is this time different? rereading the battles...and paying close attention...making sure I've taken everything into careful consideration. Cam had 2 fake personals...Those don't sit well with me. However, I'd rather see fake personals all day long than fed lines. And Def Con had 2 fed lines. 1 he could pass off as not being fed, but the other is blatent. I think the first was fed too, just by usage and the fact that it's at the beginning of the verse. Overall, both had some hard hitting punches...and some punches thrown that shouldn't have been. HOwever, Cam did have more...and the fact that Def Con fed is much worse than Cam's Fake Personals....in light of that... Vote ~ Cam |
im going def on this one...
the strecthed line did it for me, if it wasnt for that Li would get the vote from me dope verse guys |
Just like koncept said....
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Which is true, but i think they allow feeding, not really sure what the new rules are but w/e. The only two lines i liked were the diaphragm line and the 12 into 34 line. L.O had a consistent verse, which had some nice lines. L.O had some better punches, and he took it with the wordplay, so.... V/ Lirael One |
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