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Hardhitter Vs Michaelmadness
yo unlimited lines...due when ever no crew no hate votes
3-0 knock out or first to 5 wins........... |
Ight check check ...when the hell u droppin ....Blind spit, no feeding
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Listen Up....
I started you in this Rap shit.............Now you think you can beat me ?????/ His family don't call him Hard hitter, They call him Steve, Aka Pee-Wee/ Non stop he watches For Em and 50 hopin to see them on his T.V/ Idolized by both...so he stays rockin his G Unit shoes Nd' Nike Beanie/ Please Believe me, This fuckin Kid Infatuated W/ stars...Hes Wack/ True story, ask anyone in my Highschool, This Shit is a Fact, Pee-wee Dyed his hair blonde,Got made fun of then Dyed it Black, So That every Thug that saw him wouldn't crack up Nd' Laugh/(Eminem Wannabe) Now Pee-Wee You don't want none of this man...Pack up ya bags,U bout to lose/ Remember Son I put u in this game, I can jus as quickly Take u outta it Too/ By the way Ya G/F Shelly.Told her Sister Whom told me Shelly said I'm hotter than u/ HardHitter came from outta the blue,Speakin and textin some Weakshit/ Weeks later No elevation ............But peep this,steves formed a fetus..... Steves Bitch is gonna Have 1 mouth fer each Tit/ Pee-Wee Got her Pregnant..and now he has to support Thee Kid/ U Got hard Hits, I'll Take yer hand and Make u punch yerself w/ each fist / Jesus!!!, Steve Yer the only Teenage daddy in our Hood, Face it.....You can't beat me But I'm sure Shelly Could/(HandJob) treat u like a pelican,make ya face hold more then ya belly could/(Hold Bullets) Son, you jus been served, W/ out a doubt you've lost/ since shelly jerkin mine,stop callin me out and go hard hit ya fuckin dick off(masturbate) Ok.........Lets get these votes posted.........hahah no beef.....we jus tryin to see whos the iller MC... |
The structure is all fucked up, it was 21 straight lines
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I started you in this Rap shit.............Now you think you can beat me ?????/His family don't call him Hard hitter, They call him Steve, Aka Pee-Wee/Non stop he watches For Em and 50 hopin to see them on his T.V/Idolized by both...so he stays rockin his G Unit shoes Nd' Nike Beanie/Please Believe me, This fuckin Kid Infatuated W/ stars...Hes Wack/True story, ask anyone in my Highschool, This Shit is a Fact,Pee-wee Dyed his hair blonde,Got made fun of then Dyed it Black, So That every Thug that saw him wouldn't crack up Nd' Laugh/(Eminem Wannabe)Now Pee-Wee You don't want none of this man...Pack up ya bags,U bout to lose/Remember Son I put u in this game, I can jus as quickly Take u outta it Too/By the way Ya G/F Shelly.Told her Sister Whom told me Shelly said I'm hotter than u/HardHitter came from outta the blue,Speakin and textin some Weakshit/Weeks later No elevation ............But peep this,steves formed a fetus.....Steves Bitch is gonna Have 1 mouth fer each Tit/Pee-Wee Got her Pregnant..and now he has to support Thee Kid/U Got hard Hits, I'll Take yer hand and Make u punch yerself w/ each fist/Jesus!!!,Steve Yer the only Teenage daddy in our Hood, Face it.....You can't beat me But I'm sure Shelly Could/(HandJob)treat u like a pelican,make ya face hold more then ya belly could/(Hold Bullets)Son, you jus been served, W/ out a doubt you've lost/so stop callin me out and go hard hit ya fuckin dick off(masturbate)
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ightt yo i got shit to do tonight but im gunna drop 1st thing tomarrow morning..ightt..
and by the way that shit u spit was wacked u dont have a chance hahaha.... ................~*1*~............. |
Bull shit...what are you gonna take the night off to pre write yer shit???????
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just chill the fuck out mann..i got more inporting shit to do...i aint like u sitting in front of the fuckin comp all day u bum................haha............~*1*~.."next post will be the verse.......................
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fuck that pre-written shit, here
okay, ya practice lacks. this faggots trapped in plastic wrap you were always dope? i dont think you wanna come back to that? so hes passin the green huh? not when im smashin ya spleen punk You self served me about as much as Kwik Fill gasoline pumps this wins in sight dude, i'd re-write through to fight you why dissin on my gurl? son, yours dont even like you Hes slow for doe, n' dont know his flows He'd sell his soul for crack, shit he already sold his clothes (true too) Let loose son, ya used to reduce sums, now ya boost em' yeah, mah gurl got pregnant- ...too bad ya too young to produce one (hes younger than us) best hope ya nice, but sorry.. nope, im right.. ya sliced I didn't like your verse the 1st time.. so why post it twice? get on ya fight face, bite race at no price rates, right fake? Your failing now.. n' your still in 9th grade for christ sakes! (he suppose to be in 10th) suttin quick to pencil in, stencil shit under parental hits crack is fuckin with him- -he actually told his gurl he had a pencil dick (true) Missed cares lead to ripped stares n' clipped wears He reps Binghamton all the time..yet, he dont even live there I've seen more than kills, n' AL proved to be more than ill winnin this will take a god damn keyboard with skill around still? aight i'll reap fate, seek great n' defeat fakes This kid wanted sum skills.. so he used the search engine at Ebay |
uppin them votes...................................~*1*~
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haha ight good verse...even though it took u a day to write it.........Gimme a day to write my shit and I'll come up with suttin better
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ahhhhhhhhhh i wrote that this morning i couldnt do it last night cuz my girl wanted me to spend time with her and not on the comp........fuck utz..........
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uppin cmon lets get some votes on this ish..leave a thred
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Uppin....Cmon.....Lets get some votes in this biatch....Leave yer thread behind
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ightt uppin these votes..........#2.........i will return the favor.......holla ..........1........
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Uppin cmon lets get some votes on this shit....leave yer threads behind
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hardhitter gets this due to nice multis and a dope flow, this would of made a very tight aduio verse, the wordplay was minimal but there was enough in here for a few laughs and to show your intelligent, the ' you sold your clothes' part was funny, damn nice personals OoOoOo
The other kid was okay, i mean i don't even think you had any punches, and i'm not hating on you, lol, Pz v/Hard Hitter |
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Only good lines of the whole battle. This was basicly one sided. So I'm not gonna break down every category. Hardhitter took this. way. |
Yo this was one sided basically like every1 said...........
fuck that pre-written shit, here this wins in sight dude, i'd re-write through to fight you why dissin on my gurl? son, yours dont even like you best hope ya nice, but sorry.. nope, im right.. ya sliced I didn't like your verse the 1st time.. so why post it twice? Thats what took this battle Vote Hard he had betta overall verse!! |
I said No feeding...he fed off of my whole verse...I'm having this shit Dqed we can have a rematch
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ahhhhhhhh no i didnt feed shit i won thats all ..........................
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hardhitter took this one... his verse was more personal and madness structure was a lil' fucked up sometimez. automatically hardhitter also had a much better flow and his shit was just more fun...
Vote- hardhitter now plz vote on thiz one... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623 |
Rules state 3 votes is knockout. Therefore Hardhitter wins.
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