Lyric v. mc aines
 

10 lines
You spit first
No hate/crew/etc
Spit soon, 20-30 minutes

checkin in kid.........................................Go easy on my ass.

check check........u spit yo shit as it was yo callout i wont feed

No you spit first. It's in the rules and it was there in bitchslapped too. What you scared of?

aight den imma drop first i will drop soon as im done

shit sorry lyric i was busy aint started keyin yet.....start now shit will b dun within an hour from now

Ive got artillery for emcees like u so y would i dare run...
From a emcee who can only talk about gats but can't hold his dick nor less a gun...
Your rhymes sounds like shit water bound like u picked them up out of a moat...
Talkin u would give it to anybody white,black,mexican, or whatever floats ur boat...
And u rap like u can take lifes what nicca now u something like GOD...
Fuck go spit ur wack shit to ur moms thats tha only way u gettin applaudes...
A standing ovation-fuck nicca to me ur flow really don't appeal...
And ur a true magician so go disapear like u was Copperfield...
This emcee is gay so he wud think i meant somethin else if i said i would rip this guy...
I pull more rabbits out of a hat so if i kill u now i wont catch u on the voters dickside..

wacl quick key

drop ya shit lyric

Yo Lyric u shud drop 1st seen as u made the call out!ibattled aines b4 so ill giv u sum advise.........................................G'l uck!

u got a max of 30 mins i took 31 mins u cud use the xtra 1 2 if ya want lol gd luck ni99a

k droppin now. Nice spit mc, good luck man........

Your avy shows that you suck, cover your dissapoints with herbs..
I'll take the Voice of the Streetz and put your Grills to the curbs
You jus anutha MC rappin, Jus anutha export from England
Couldn’t ‘watch’ my attack so I ‘clocked’ ya with Big Ben
Dawg you coming played, wheres the creativity you claim
Kid slipped on his ‘spit’, an all hope went down the drain
You got more beef on this site than all the meatpackers combined
Yet you still drop like your blind....did you read your whack lines?
Fucka Dizzy Homel you got dick ridden already and I aint spit
English shit, isn’t it tea time? Those the only herbs you eat bitch

nice drop 4 a newbie dint cum hard but might of payed the price nice drop anyway uppin

uppin this shiat....................Drop links, we'll hit em up

opener:Lyric
closer:Mc Aines
flow:Mc Aines
punches:Mc Aines
enjoyment:none

Vote:Mc Aines

VOTE DOESNT COUNT!
\-feebl

^Whack vote, mad cause I used him in my spit lol. Dawg ya gotta break it down anyway.

lyric takes this one. aines your shit was stretched...so much so that it didnt even fit on one line...in result your flow was off. so lyric takes the structure/flow category cuz his flow was straight. aines, most of your punches didnt really hit hard/connect...and lyric you came with a little played shit (big ben/clocked)...but thats the only thing that harmed your verse. you got personal, had straight flow, had wordplay, and had a closer that i really liked...

so thats why i think lyric took this...

aines can you hit this up...lyric already did...thats how i got directed here. (this is not a dickride...i clearly explained my vote...) but hit up my battle with an honest one please mc aines.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109418

hahha you better post on IR about that bullshit vote from dizzy hommel the biggest herb on rb.....hehe anyway back to the battle.....aines i expected more from you...you've been elevating lately but you fell off on this one...you really missed every single punch you ever threw like seriously it was sad i was crying....especially the line about the moat water.....Lyric nice verse....seems like you were strugglin lil bit...towards the end threere but basically you had a strong verse ...clever punches that play off the personals...so vote goes to lyric.....peace no hate hit this up guys

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109886

homo wtf u doin bitch ass wanabee???u must b new the site u didnt even break down ur vote........

by the way fuck off dizzy hommel, that was pure dickride its really clear who won this battle. you should report that lyric...

rite u ni99as want a break down ok!
Lyric i fort u came strong wiv ur opener but after that 2me it went down hill!no h8!
Aines u did the opposite u started off downhill but then worked u way up it and came stronger after the starter!

Nah I aint reportin shit, I dun care. I'm up 2-1 but the polls only 1-1. Did both of yall poll?

is dat ok? Phoeniix shut up its clear Aines won!Get off Lyrics diik idoubt he wants u on it!............................................... .Blah............................................. ................

homo u need 2 check yo eyes man in this battle imma clearly admit that lyric won this 1.........lyric report his ass

This is uppin number 4. Dizzy, Phoeniix aint on my dick, you aint on aines dick, I see this as more of a hate vote, cause I used you in my verse. Everyone please stop freeposting!

shit this kids hot for a newb....
aines came weak no efence man i think you thaught you could walk all over him,
your shit was ite but streched and punches were inconsistent,
lyric had nice hard consistent punches,
with a better structure and flow.....
.............nice verse man...try-out for instant sum time...

.........................................pz

Last uppin. Please drop a honestvote here. Dun forget to leave a link

Ok, heres tha breakdown:

Mc Aines -

Ive got artillery for emcees like u so y would i dare run...
From a emcee who can only talk about gats but can't hold his dick nor less a gun...
^^Weak Opener, it's obvious you're a New-B
Your rhymes sounds like shit water bound like u picked them up out of a moat...
Talkin u would give it to anybody white,black,mexican, or whatever floats ur boat...
^^OMG.... I'm sorry but that shit is wack
And u rap like u can take lifes what nicca now u something like GOD...
Fuck go spit ur wack shit to ur moms thats tha only way u gettin applaudes...
^^Please Elevate...
A standing ovation-fuck nicca to me ur flow really don't appeal...
And ur a true magician so go disapear like u was Copperfield...
^^I guess this is a punch... Ok
This emcee is gay so he wud think i meant somethin else if i said i would rip this guy...
I pull more rabbits out of a hat so if i kill u now i wont catch u on the voters dickside..
^^Weak Closer

and

Lyric -

Your avy shows that you suck, cover your dissapoints with herbs..
I'll take the Voice of the Streetz and put your Grills to the curbs
^^OK Opener, second line was weak
You jus anutha MC rappin, Jus anutha export from England
Couldn’t ‘watch’ my attack so I ‘clocked’ ya with Big Ben
^^Ok Personal, kinda Cheezy
Dawg you coming played, wheres the creativity you claim
Kid slipped on his ‘spit’, an all hope went down the drain
^^Ok Punch
You got more beef on this site than all the meatpackers combined
Yet you still drop like your blind....did you read your whack lines?
^^Ouch. Nuf Said
Fucka Dizzy Homel you got dick ridden already and I aint spit
English shit, isn’t it tea time? Those the only herbs you eat bitch
^^You drink Tea.. but OK closer I guess

Well Obviously Lyric got this... he had the only personal and punches. Aines you need to elevate, you can get better just keep at it.

Vote = Lyric

mc aines, good shit, punches were pretty good,
that applaudes line was dope dawg, really good flow,
aight structure, good job dawg.

lyric, aight verse, not the best, you had some decent
punches, but not strong enough, you needed a couple more,
flow was pretty good, but not as good as aimes flow, i didnt
see any kind of structure, dont worry you will elevate.

my vot: mc aines

Shit...
STructure-aines ya shit needs work, lyric had a iight structure
Flow- it was really close but lyric got this jus cuz aines structure fucked his flow up
wordplay-Lyric's shit was better worded, u could see the newbish style in aines, he had to many run ons
punches- lyrics were sweet and short , he hit harder and put more creativity into his punches
lyric took this
no beef....keep elevating
v/ Lyric