StreetzGullie vs BlackGod
 

10 line min.....12 max
check in......due in 20 min....or dqed!
u spit first...
no d/r
no crew
no hate....VOICE OF THE STREETZ! :cussing:
no bytin.......
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Be sure to peep what he said in da rules n shit 4 personals
And if yall niggas never know...scully = head......I know some niggas know dat, if u never knew....now u know

I'll pop his voice box when I hoist glocks with weary-eyed focals
.............Leavin holes in it deeper than Barry White Vocals
Shit's like Sex Ed Classes when dude gets clapped up
This fag'll be in the morgue just another fruit that's wrapped up
I slap weak emcees like you for makin noise when they speak
And when your bitches screamin that's the 'Voice of the Streetz'
Like 'X-Files Reruns' for votes he keeps givin niggas 'Scully'
Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'
'I'll bet 10' on it...tryna shank me wit butter knives? that's lame
'Kickin his dome' now 'losin's on his mind' cuz 'da-feet is on brain'
Grabbin da Tek and start popppin one of Dynasty Soldiers
.....Applyin da 'heat ta his mug' like 'Cofee Folgers'

fucked up on a line

it should be

*Murder him...left body parts all over the 'Street Gully'*

my b....never really proof read da shit....

im nice wit the flows.....lyrically....ya WEAK!:
but tech to ya throat....and leave u wit out a "Voice" for "Da Streetz":
what u think....i dont walk wit my macks out?:
crazy..only time u beat me...is when "God" "Blacks" out:
its gullie dawg....told u...ya need levitation wit ya words:
say u beat me.....but im the insperation to this herb:
told u once.....im ya damn INSPERATION:
bout to "son" this fag....and i aint talkin bout family relations.....:
is more like........lungin and dissin:
cause like blind boxer......all ya punches is missin!:....
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B.G.

I'll pop his voice box when I hoist glocks with weary-eyed focals
.............Leavin holes in it deeper than Barry White Vocals
Decent opening
Shit's like Sex Ed Classes when dude gets clapped up
This fag'll be in the morgue just another fruit that's wrapped up
not the greatest, not the worst
I slap weak emcees like you for makin noise when they speak
And when your bitches screamin that's the 'Voice of the Streetz'
Some wordplay...
Like 'X-Files Reruns' for votes he keeps givin niggas 'Scully'
Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'
Ok wordplay[B]
'I'll bet 10' on it...tryna shank me wit butter knives? that's lame
'Kickin his dome' now 'losin's on his mind' cuz 'da-feet is on brain'
[B]so-so
Grabbin da Tek and start popppin one of Dynasty Soldiers
.....Applyin da 'heat ta his mug' like 'Cofee Folgers'
ok closing

Overall - you had some decent punches and ok wordplay...coulda came harder though

Gullie

im nice wit the flows.....lyrically....ya WEAK!:
but tech to ya throat....and leave u wit out a "Voice" for "Da Streetz":
Ok opening
what u think....i dont walk wit my macks out?:
crazy..only time u beat me...is when "God" "Blacks" out:
decent wordplay
its gullie dawg....told u...ya need levitation wit ya words:
say u beat me.....but im the insperation to this herb:
no punch
told u once.....im ya damn INSPERATION:
bout to "son" this fag....and i aint talkin bout family relations.....:
Little played.. just ok
is more like........lungin and dissin:
cause like blind boxer......all ya punches is missin!:....
Played closer... meh

Overall - you came ok, word play was there alittle...ok punches

My vote - Black God... he came harder with his punches and they were more complex, he also had more wordplay

dawg the rules say no bytin...and Black bit....but ok...its kool...imma let it flow.....1..................decent battle to me...but ok...........1

OK,

Black God

'll pop his voice box when I hoist glocks with weary-eyed focals
.............Leavin holes in it deeper than Barry White Vocals
^^set up was crap, but the second line was OK
Shit's like Sex Ed Classes when dude gets clapped up
This fag'll be in the morgue just another fruit that's wrapped up
^^nah... weak punch....
I slap weak emcees like you for makin noise when they speak
And when your bitches screamin that's the 'Voice of the Streetz'
^^'voice of the streetz' is the most played line on RB, seen it three times today alone
Like 'X-Files Reruns' for votes he keeps givin niggas 'Scully'
Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'
^^eh... weak I used a better X-Files/Skully Line Months ago
'I'll bet 10' on it...tryna shank me wit butter knives? that's lame
'Kickin his dome' now 'losin's on his mind' cuz 'da-feet is on brain'
^^no....
Grabbin da Tek and start popppin one of Dynasty Soldiers
.....Applyin da 'heat ta his mug' like 'Cofee Folgers'
^^OK Closer, nothin special

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Streetz

im nice wit the flows.....lyrically....ya WEAK!:
but tech to ya throat....and leave u wit out a "Voice" for "Da Streetz":
^^again, played line..... bitten from above?
what u think....i dont walk wit my macks out?:
crazy..only time u beat me...is when "God" "Blacks" out:
^^So God helps you win..? not sure where this is goin
its gullie dawg....told u...ya need levitation wit ya words:
say u beat me.....but im the insperation to this herb:
^^no...
told u once.....im ya damn INSPERATION:
bout to "son" this fag....and i aint talkin bout family relations.....:
^eh... mediocre punch, played
is more like........lungin and dissin:
cause like blind boxer......all ya punches is missin!:....
^^OK Closer

I have to give this to Black God, but both yall need to elevate. On the right track, I see potential, just keep workin on it

pz

hit these up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110015

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109986

Bull Shit......................but Ok............lol Uppin 2..........................1......................

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LMAO............how can I bit when I dropped BEFORE you........and also...da rules said I should spit first...........if any1 bit it was you..................................

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uppin 3..........come on..........stop sleeping...........and y u change ur sig all of a sudden street?????????

blach god got this, he had betta flow and the punches were harder. streetz u'r shit was aight, the flow was the punches were weak and the ender was so played out...both had good structure, and vocab but black took it with punches. vote-blackgod

can ya'll return the favor
end the battle in my sig thanks.

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Just giving an honest opinion:
(if you have any honor in you, you will!) jk

I'll do this line by line:

Black's open:


[BOLD]Decent, I kinda felt it , except, it was in no way directed personally[/BOLD]




Streetzgullie's open:


[BOLD]wasn't really a bunch, basic multies, lil choopy[/BOLD]

Black's Line 3,& 4:


[BOLD] it was an attempt at a punch, good structure, syllable count, etc[/BOLD]

Streetz 's Line 3, & 4


[BOLD] kinda basic, basic multies, could bee extended, for better flow[/BOLD]

Black's Line 5, 6, 7,8


[BOLD] I agree the 'Voice of the Streetz' line is played, dope structure,
a better attempted punch,[/BOLD]

Streez's Line 5,6,7,8


[BOLD] still no punches, basic multies, better structure than the 1st lines[/BOLD]

Black's close:


[BOLD] again better structure, better multies, decent vocab, decent end[/BOLD]

Streetz close"


[BOLD] His 1st real punch, I agree AGAIN it is kinda played, but better than the open of the verse, AGAIN basic multies, choppy structure, [/BOLD]

I got to give this to Blackgod:

Black's weak points:
more wordplay & vocab
better punches


Streetz weak points:
structure, try to take those :: off the end it looks just as good, the same
(extend structure and flow)
could work on better multies, wordplay etc

Both got to keep elevating

I said this in another battle:


Keep that in mind!


JamesJr.