FaTaL LyRiKzZ VS YOMAMA
 

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checkin in........................................

I Am Also CheckinG IN IIGHT We Al ready Post Ya VERSE

Im Not Tryin To Be A Killjoy But F'realz Post Ya Verse Man Takin You Long ENOUGH

Fatal thinks he's tha man but we know its pretend
only thing fatal's got is AIDS from his boyfriend
well either him or his grandpa, it might depend
sorry faggot, but this is your end
Fatal's lyrics are whack
he wasn't prepared for my attack
well what do you expect, im YOMAMA and ive found out-
your a hypocritical bitch without a doubt
yo name dont match yo game
yo lyricals are lame and youve got bad aim
your a fag and youve probably got long hair
your avatar matches you, you guys are a pair
scum like you beatin me is rare,
right now yo probably whinning- "damn it's not fair!"
if you still think you got fatal lyrics then your smokin too much shit
you gotta be embarassed, do yo self a favor and quit.

yo i only took 38 mins- under my deadline, your the pussy that asked for 25 mins extra time

Aight Mah Turn

Check It,

I AInt Embarassed Cuz Nicca Am Yo Nightmare\\
Beatin Me Is Like Gettin A Answer Right In Who Wanna Be A Millionaire\\
Take Yo Chance Like In a Quick Game Of Solitare\\
I Leave You In ~despair~ you the one shoutin its ~unfair~ And Yomama Be ~aware~ cuz we all know u and Michael Jackson Got An Affair\\
He Lookin Amazed At meh With His Eye Popped ~Out~\\
Mah Dick In His MOMMA's Mouth And He Bout 2 ~SHOUT~\\
I Lyrically Buried Him Sacredly The Cops Gave Out On His ~CASE~\\
I Left Him With No ~TRACE~ Spittin Faster Then A Live POLICE ~CHASE~\\
Am A Experienced Genius With Mah ~Curriculums~\\
THis Foo Is ~DUMB~ Laughin While I Punch His ~Diverticulum~ He Has A Finger But He Use His Finger Holin ~THUMB~\\
Im More Then A MasterMind Im a~GENIOUS~\\
His Girl Was Confused askin "Is Your Pinky Your ~PENIUS~ ?"
Fuck The Ankles, I'll Have Ya Whole Posture-Broke/
Ya Ego So Big That When U Flow Its A Cause-To-Choke/
Krossova Ya Lines Wit Confidence As I Con-Yours/
Slappin Ya In The Face Multiple Times,Theres Your Encore

Aight We Both Checked In Posted Uppin For Votes Now

Any Votes ????????????????????????????????????????

No need to even do my famous breakdowns.

My vote goes to Fatal. Both emcees need to elevate but YOMAMA needs to elevate quickly. His verse was garbage. FAtal won this battle on every category hands down.

eh i no i aint got enough posts to vote but
can you give this battle an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110053
appreciate it

well I'm not gonna vote cuz I'm not a dick rider and I know yomama pretty good and were cool but FaTaL lyrikzz FaTaL actions ??seems a little odd doesn't it

its funny how after i dis fatal lyrics avatar he changes it (his avatar before was this ninja fag with long blonde hair), and how he says hes a genius 2 times in his verse but he cant even spell it right, and how he gets an unexplained vote from "another user" with the same first name- hmmmm could it be his friend dickriding him, or is he low enough to get another username to vote for himself? anyway im uppin this to get ACTUAL HONEST VOTES.

fatal took this shiit barely, both verse were weak on the flow tip, on the punch tip fatal came harder, while yomama's disses were not hard at all gotta use more punches. so vote-fatal

bad vote. -feeble

LOL MAN Im Not Going To Cheat FaTaL Is My Nickname For SOME REASON so everyname is FatAL then w\e example FaTaL_WiN FatAL_Michael Fatal_blah

aright dawg it just seemed kind of sketchy- anyway uppin

Ok Yomama For Real Why You Gotta Think Dat Cuz You Losin ??? Seriously Man I Dont Cheat Talk hat Ya Know !!

Also I Had 2 More Votes Who Deleted It ?

Momma

Fatal thinks he's tha man but we know its pretend
only thing fatal's got is AIDS from his boyfriend
1st line was meh and 2nd was ok
well either him or his grandpa, it might depend
sorry faggot, but this is your end
Played... basic wack punch
Fatal's lyrics are whack
he wasn't prepared for my attack
Basic wack punch
well what do you expect, im YOMAMA and ive found out-
your a hypocritical bitch without a doubt
Basic again..need complexity kiddo
yo name dont match yo game
yo lyricals are lame and youve got bad aim
Really? sure u aint talkin bout yaself?
your a fag and youve probably got long hair
your avatar matches you, you guys are a pair
Tried for a personal but like pitching a perfect game it was a no hitter
scum like you beatin me is rare,
right now yo probably whinning- "damn it's not fair!"
Better then your rest...not by much
if you still think you got fatal lyrics then your smokin too much shit
you gotta be embarassed, do yo self a favor and quit
Played... even with that it was ya best line


Fatal

I AInt Embarassed Cuz Nicca Am Yo Nightmare\\
Beatin Me Is Like Gettin A Answer Right In Who Wanna Be A Millionaire\\
wack opening cuz ya punch was false... people get answers right there
Take Yo Chance Like In a Quick Game Of Solitare\\
I Leave You In ~despair~ you the one shoutin its ~unfair~ And Yomama Be ~aware~
cuz we all know u and Michael Jackson Got An Affair\\
Really streatched 2nd line...lay off the multis and weak punch
He Lookin Amazed At meh With His Eye Popped ~Out~\\
Mah Dick In His MOMMA's Mouth And He Bout 2 ~SHOUT~\\
Ummm.... not a good punch at all
I Lyrically Buried Him Sacredly The Cops Gave Out On His ~CASE~\\
I Left Him With No ~TRACE~ Spittin Faster Then A Live POLICE ~CHASE~\\
this line was ok
Am A Experienced Genius With Mah ~Curriculums~\\
THis Foo Is ~DUMB~ Laughin While I Punch His ~Diverticulum~ He Has A Finger But He Use His Finger Holin ~THUMB~\\
2nd line was again streatched like the other one, cut em down and lay off he multis
Im More Then A MasterMind Im a~GENIOUS~\\
His Girl Was Confused askin "Is Your Pinky Your ~PENIUS~ ?"
Dumb and wack
Fuck The Ankles, I'll Have Ya Whole Posture-Broke/
Ya Ego So Big That When U Flow Its A Cause-To-Choke/
Not that good
Krossova Ya Lines Wit Confidence As I Con-Yours/
Slappin Ya In The Face Multiple Times,Theres Your Encore
ok ending


Overall - you both need to take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center, but Fatal took this even with his wake dumb punches becuase he actually tried to throw some and they were more complex then YOMOMMA's, even though there wasnt much complexity in eithers verse.

My vote goes to fatal.....werent really any punches that stood out but all in all fatal took it barely....both were aight.....peace........

vote gone -feeble

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Flow: Fatal
WordPlay: Fatal
Multis: Fatal
opener: Yo Momma
Closer Fatal
Metas: Tie
Final Vote: Fatal
peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Vote doesnt count.. read strobes new votin rule -feeble - Feeble Minded

Alright,4-0 Still Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin.............................................

When Does This Battle Vs Me And Yo Mama End ??? its already been 2 days

My honest vote goes to fatal but both of u need to elevate....ur structure was everywhere.....fatal took dis battle in puches cuz his were alot better and in multis he had atleast 2 in everyline so dats y he gets mah vote..
vote=fatal

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110511

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Ok 3-0 Kep Votin Plz !!!!!!!!!! Still Uppin !!!!!!!!!!

PLease Vote Guyz Its 3-0 Me Uppin For Votes Still Tho

When Does This Poll Close ????????//

I wasn't feelin' this battle all too much, I believe both of you need to elvate, but to give my vote off, I'll give i to Fatal Lyrikzz, his flow came better, had better punches, YOMAMA, was too basic.. Keep elevatn..

Retun Da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6260post1146260

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Alright 3-0 Keep Votin On Poll THanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both ya had fairly wack verses!!! btu wit disses i gotta give it to fatal!

my vote- fatal

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

3-0 My Wack Verse Was My First Post For Yo INFO LOL haha Anyways 3-0 !! Still Upppin

Fuckin Vote On This !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wat up yo both did alright some of your rhymes were whack put some ewre hot

it took u 38 minutes to write possibly the shitties lines ever, i could write that shit in 8 minutes

Yo This Is Inactivity Battle Here Please Vote On this...

Uppin For This BAttle !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with this completly



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour

Opener- Fatal
Flow- Fatal
Punches- Fatal
Personals- I couldn't really find any from both of yall, nothing to metion anyways
Complexity- Fatal,
Mettas-Kinda weak
Closer- Fatal
Overall- Fatal your verse was all right should be an easy win
Vote- Fatal

This battle is pretty weak.. YoMama had zero punchlines, you show potential but you need to elevate.... FaTaL_ needs to elevate as well but he has a better concept of punchlines and was able to squeeze out a win.

Fatal gets a 5 out of 10 and Ima give YoMama a 3 out of 10.....Vote Fatal...
Please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

Fatal lyriks Takes Thiz 1 Wit Better Puinches And Slightly Better Flow

Yomomma Try And Work On ya Punches

Vote=FL

Return Da Favour

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124165