Lyric v. HYPER-ACTYVE (please vote)
 

10 lines
you go first
normal rules
Good luck

aight man, i was getting worried man, didnt know u still wanted to battle

aight my checking

Check check check, awaitin ya dopeness............

this dude says, "NOW GO!" as if hes beggin for this merkin/
hes as wack and beat out :beat: as J-LO......the old and new version/

ur a fly-weight & thats all ull be, because u cant fly-straight/
let me tell u, i aint that impressed, cause u aint that great/

look at u, uv been on here longer than me, and u still a free agent/
i'll help ya out, i'll get the wackest crew, and set up an arrangment/

"Lyric"....nah "Fake MC", i could see better spits if i watched Daffy Duck on TV/
this has got to be a Catastraphy.....u battlin me....u gotta be crazy/

u AIM me sayin, "Go ahead and spit, i swear i wont feed or bite" but u still happen to be the king of prewrite/
& like i said......."Youve been on this site longer than me".....and u still aint done nothing right!/

aight mayne, i told u i wasnt gonna rush, so theres my "dopeness", waiting on u now, dawg

still waitin on ya spit dawg, u got 6 hours left just remindin ya.

K, not a bad verse, startin now, my verse will be up soon

I'm keying this bitch for the V(victory) slashin tires on his viper...
I'll fucking choke the god damn air out you next time you act hyper
I can tell ya still a newb, picckin fights with elevated vets
Take the prophet outta ya sig, you aint on the same level yet
Your Sig says you hate people who dun finish what they start
but you shoulda noshowed, That chekin ripped ya verse apart
Fuckin newb usin smileys and shit like you know whats up
Only way you win a battle is pullin votes outta peoples nuts
I'll rip through you like you aint shit, Like slicing through the air
Easy win for me, Your verse was whack, I'll pretend you didn't care

yeah im tryin to battle with different styles, cause this lis like my first time really battlin period

man this battle was bad i would say this is a draw but canu hook a brotha
up wit some votes


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...964#post1129964

motherfucka wut the hells ya problem, sayin this shits a draw, bitch plus u cant even vote, u dumb faggot, and no i aint gonna hook ur gay ass up, bitch, imma uppin(1) this shit

multies - Lyric
Flow - Hyper
Punches - Hyper
Creativity Both

Overall Hyper

hyper took this because he came a bit harder and his flow was better plus his punches where landing a lil harder close battle though

return the favour
Chugs4Life ~vs~ JaiiLiin Maku

Uppin this shit, drop an honest vote and l;eave a link

^M.C get the fuck outta heree with ya freepostin, uppin this shit #2

aight im uppin(2)....................................

Shit, uppin 3, not one vote yet, hit this up please

Damn we're on the second page, and no ones voted yet. Come on drop an honest vote and leave a link.

aight someone, someone check this battle out and give an honest vote, im uppin(3) this battle

Shit Lat uppin. WTF guys? hit this up with some votes. Damn man honest votes here and we'll hit ya back

im uppin(4) time, someone vote, plan and simple, if u hit this honestly then well do the same

multis:Hyper
personals:Lyric
flow:Both
punches:Lyric
metaphors:Lyric

Lyric straight ripped dis cat apart like he was nothing... a newb anyway what to expect. Straight battle for da newb but hyper active gotta come with better disses then dat to stay alive on dis rap game, but good battle.Lyric mainly wins da battle because hyper's shit is old and heard before and structure was awful, better luck next time.

vote on dis or explain your opinion
AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

hyper- elevate.. but still good punches a little harder then lyric
you ut some multis which made it mor interesting

lyric- .. elevate also u had some descent punches also also
had good structure

overall- close very close but i'd have to say hyper- BARELY

i took the time to vote soo hit mines up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110301

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

word lyric did rip this kid apart he got some mad clever personals...and he hit with a couple solid punches..hypper i don't like your structure dog no hate just fix it....you threw a couple punches but it was really simplistic stick to the whackness emergency thread and work on your wordplay peace to the middle east i rep STP till the day i'm deceased......

holy shit i got these cats mixed up
ima get a mod to change this..
shit im sorry

where the hell ya;; comin from, damn, but wuteva....im uppin(5)

I will have to vote for Hyper Active..I just felt his verse more than I felt Lyric's..Lyric in my opinion came kinda of weak but he showed he had talent but that didnt do it enough...although I didnt like Hyper's structure he still did better with better punches..none was too played..all was original and hit much harder than Lyric's..

my vote goes to Hyper Active..

multies - Lyric
Flow - Lyric
Punches - Hyper
Creativity Both



weak battle though both need work
A little more work hyper try more word play
Vote goes to Lyric you still should have elevated more specialy going 2nd in a battle

Lyric caned this kid..

Hyper had more similies/metas.. but they weren't even used right..
How peeps can vote for that shit is beyond me..
Hyper..wasn't a bad verse.. good attempts etc.. few nice punches.. structure was off at times tho. An average verse..
Lyric had the structure down perfectly, tight flow.. lacked the similies etc.. but the witty punches and consistancy downed them with ease..
A better verse overall..

Vote - Lyric

punches lyric: I can tell ya still a newb, picckin fights with elevated vets
Take the prophet outta ya sig, you aint on the same level yet

metas lyric: I'm keying this bitch for the V(victory) slashin tires on his viper...
I'll fucking choke the god damn air out you next time you act hyper

personals lyric: Your Sig says you hate people who dun finish what they start
but you shoulda noshowed, That chekin ripped ya verse apart

flow both: both didnt have to stretched of lines so jea...both

pverall i gotta go with lyric for a better verse

peep my audio battle in my sig both please