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VennyRhymes vs MC aines
U know the rules. Check in then ill drop!
Time Limit 20:50 |
checkity checkity check fuk the time limit u can av as long as u want theres no rush
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To kick us off here's a little teaser
You better get used to it cos they don't get ne easier// If a tree falls in the wood does it make a sound Just cos u don't see it dont mean your mum dont get around// Why do you call yourself MC aines Cudn't u think of a better name aint u got no brains// Luck at your avaiter "fuck milk get pot" To make ur rhymes sound good u'd need a lot// Your jaws a bit shaken from that last punch The rhymes comin out just aint got no crunch// Aines you called me out, the cheek Now take this last bop on ur big fat beak! |
Just waitin 4 ur drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lmao ^^^herb im not even gonna cum hard
Venny ur verse is prob wack,it'll lack punches peronals and Rhymes... This is ur 1st tutorial listen in but dont bite my lines... Like ur avvy im merkin and sendin u on a road trip... Voice of tha streetz is who u WANT 2 role wit... I’m Spiting-Raw… don’t even Start me Kid, I’ve seen you talking Hard and Shit- like you’d blast me…but with what, your printer’s ink Cartridges... Rhymes vision of skill is more like a Peep-Hole…your Nothing-Kid... You’d have to stick your legs in a toilet…just to be Running-Shit... Face the facts like your custom text....your pathetic... If that was a joke it would be like pussy...you dont get it... Your flow needs medication...I heard it was ill... But ya style aint sick...its just allergic to skill... I know for a fact your garbage...but I kinda felt ya at first... Untill you posted this in the W.E.C..."Need help with a verse"... uppin this shit 4 votes |
uppin number 1
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iight...
aines won this... obvioulsy... he had punches... other dude... drastically elevate... your shit... really you are... the most basic shit ive seen for a long time... if you dont like it... battle me... a wudnt mind a nice easy win... haha... aines... you had some nice punches... a liked the opener... even tho its played... but to be honest... anythin would of beat this herb... no hate... cuz a dont know shit about you apart from that you cant spit... elevate or fuck off man... haha vote - aines... pz... OUT |
yo i no i cant vote or nuthin but could you hit this battle up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...101#post1132101 much appreciated |
^^^no uppin number 2
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Ok this was a 1 sided battle
Opener: Aines Closer: Aines Wordplay: Aines Flow: Aines Punches: Aines Final vote: Aines Venny u got to elevate peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress |
opener:venny
closer:aines flow:aines( vennys was on n off) punches:aines enjoyment:venny VOte:aines 2b honest not da best battle at all but aines came harder, but 4 a Newb venny ur rap was aight. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress |
uppin number 3
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Flow - Aines
Punches - Aines Opener - Aines Closer - Aines Multis - Both pretty weak Creativity - Aines Overall - aines Aines took this one for sure his puches came harder his flow was way better and Venny you need to elevate.... |
return the favour
Chugs4Life ~vs~ Jaiijiin Maku |
Aines ripped the newb. Pretty nice battle by him. he had some nice punches and personals, and was original too. Venny came straight whack, with played lines and all. Good battle by Aines. Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
yo man i need yall to hook a brotha up wit votes on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...964#post1129964 |
mc aines got this battle.. loved the wordplay in some of the lines, it was nice. better punches. more creative. venny had some alright ideas, but need to get better. get tighter punches, and better wordplay. work some multis in there too.
Return Favor. Please hit up my battle. vote- mcaines http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424 |
uppin number 4 sum votes got disqualified cos tjey wernt explained rite
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Bit harsh man. Its only me second battle an aines called me out. I thought id get a bit more respect by answerin it than jus ignorin it but i guess not wid imbaciles like u around! |
upppin thisw shit 4 the last time
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Bit Ott. I appreciat the constructive criticism jus dont wanna b slagged of thats all. Ne pointers on how to improve will b much appreciated
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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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Uppin 4 votes............................................. ..
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Flow - Aines
Punches - Aines Opener - Venny Closer - Aines Over All: Aines Venny elevate U had some gud ideas. |
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VennyRhymes is DQ'ed for a grip of UPs.
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