Michael Madness Vs. Y.L.
 

Ight Heres the deal....
Check in...
Blind spit,
10-15 lines,
No feeding,
no hate votes,
no crew votes,
Post by 10 Tonite

Mm........check.......mm........check........mm... ......check

alright, this is my check in....so 10 what?? eastern? mountain? im on mountain time....so what time lkine are you on?

Eastern standard Time, I dunno jus make sure your shit is posted tonite ight homie?

iight, hey go vote on my otha battle...it was jus a mess around but our battle you can expect a vet to be droppin ......so dont judge me ont hat one...lol

u dont know wut your getting in to MR..................haha..........sorry bout the free post madness but........GET UM BOY..........haha.....1.....

Yeah Madness is tight....but i beatin better....its hard tryna beat the best when your a newb to tha site...ya mean? haha.....ima drop soon tho...gettin to bored

ima drop ten to twelve bars aiight? cuz i wanna rip you hard......ima between 6 and 8 pm mountain time....

Intro-ductionzzz

~isnt it amazing that this native kid rocks so well, drop ya best tracks and they not gon tell~


Killin' veteran American soldiers, with Viagra pills loaded from the ~holsters~ - oxygen tanks and life support - couldn't keep you alive long enough for this battle to be ~over~ {1}

I'ma give madness his props and spit ~non-vicious~, cause you know I like my bitches ~Raw and Delicious~ {2}

Bullets admire your back, I laugh at your ill ~assumptions~, force you ta suck my dick like it came with ~instructions~ {3}

if you was "fat" then im burning off ~calories~, this "mad" playa rides da bench wit da lowest ~salories~ {4}

check it like dis.......
you got a "wack" name "wack" game....ya think this fool ~cares~, i got his "wack" ass twisted up like a jamaican pube ~hair~ {5}

so twisted you leave me wit nothin else to do but rip you right outta this ~scene~, cuz you know you gettin fucked.....question is with or with out ~vasaline~ {6}

jus keep ~rippin n dissin~ the point you ~missin~, you need to sit down like bowwow n ~listen~ cuz you got no punches to be ~fistin~ {7}

i got you "shook"-dont forget "took" til ~eternity~, my spits are so tight even ya own "family" ~turn-to-me~ {8}

your not worth the "breath" to be spittin - but this battles what ya ~make-of-it~, you can call me "death" cuz i kill wack emcee's who lose battles like you form ~mistakes-n-shit~ {9}

i'll make you regret what ya "spit" cuz i dont show ~affection-to-these-tricks~, makin these people "shit" after they find out you get ~erections-from-seein-these-dicks~ {10}

yeah i be da one who fuckin ya mom......ya think she ~care?~, da fuck she does she tha one wit her ass in da ~air~ {11}

the only "madness" you got is the love you show for ~black-men~, you love em big to go deep in ya ~back-end~ {12}

finisher:

"mad" ya aint shit - thinking you ~lyrically minded~, "mad" you think you gon shredd but already ~lyrically-mine-did~

Hurry UP MAN!!!! where the hell is you????...................waiting.......you said 10 your time so i did....and you still havent posted.....WTF man....

my comps fucked up..Im at a friends , I'll drop now..sorry bout that shit

kewl
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Wow...Spit 10-12, My openin Punch will have ya mind swelled/
Face it ....No matter who he battles Vet Or Newb....Y.... L's (Loses)/
He wanted to Battle a Vet....I'ma give em' Wise Help......
Time Tells....W / exception of This Realm Cuz He don't Show Patience/
Battle's Vets to Get better...But shows no sign of Elevation/
You waisted ya Aces on the Newbs its time to fold,
you'll lose cuz I'm the 1st to battle u, who's beyond 9 yrs old/
His Rhymes r a joke, Played...Old.,Corny...Structures Jacked/
But I'm sure I Ain't the first Person to Notice this MuhFuckers Wack/
Man, I'll tear through you like nail's in Rubber Sacks /
as for the rhymes in my pad..Homie each is savored,
No lie Dogg, I've seen better structure on a clean piece of paper/
Fuck the Green Paper..I Rap to Breathe anger..
Stranger, Now you know I can rarely be beat/
Bitch,you waisted all that time typin to still be drown'd in defeat/


Ight some quick shit lets get these votes up........

Y.L. You had a good verse....for cypher...maybe. No real punches, more jus talkin bout yourself, and that makin him suck ya dick one hurt you moren than him. Came with some played sex, gay jokes.
MM you had some decent punches and personals. You've elevated a lot. Still ahd some played lines, but you won anyway.
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php? t=110310
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Ight Heres the deal....
Check in...
Blind spit,
10-15 lines,
No feeding,
no hate votes,
no crew votes,
Post by 10 Tonite
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10 tonight man, wtf...dont take you that long mayne...

lol, i dint waste my time...it only takes me like 4 mins to write that much.....it aint hard when ya got the lyrical mind ya know?

Stop bitchin u said it was kewl, I'm at a damn friends house cuz there was a snowstorm,shit knocked out the power , when the power went back on the fuse to the comp was blown...so fuck off I hadd to walk in fuckin snow to get here jus to battle. don't bitch just beacause i got a vote
uppin

lmao, wow....man snow is weak....its like 50 below zero here....and i walked like half amile in it...yeah my boogers got froze but your weather prolly jus 10 degree's lmao...naww man but fa realz its 50 below zero here.....and i did walk to school in it...and back

and my power aint out yet.....and we got 4 feet of snow out side.....and it is always snowing here.......and my power still aint out...lien punk...its all good....

update on the weather channel...i am in the middle of the biggest snow storm of all of usa.......and still my power isnt out...... lmao

yl stop posting u have exceeded the limt he can report u,and u will be DQ'd and he will win this so chill the fuck out kidd....................................
MM came alot harder in this battle, Very One sided.
Punches-MM had some good punches, creativity was used way more than in yl's punches,
Structure-Yl that structure is played out and wack as hell..MM u had a better structure in this battle then I have saw in your previous battles..
wordplay-MM had a nice pattern of words...used alot of creativity...Yl You used creativy but at times you didn't rhyme your words..
Flow-Yl's wordplay kinda messed up his Flow, MM Had a ok flow.
Battle was one one sided,MM is Elevatin, Yl work on your structure and wordplay and youll be iight...both keep elevatin
V/mm

aight..Mike gets this cuz he had more personals. YL u had good structure and flow, nice multi's couple aight punches i was feelin lotta meta's...Mike u had a good flow, good structure too, couple punches that hit personals...Y's verse was more enjoyable...but mike's personals hit and kinda made me chucke a little. both were good spits...vote-mike

good battle ya'll
return the favor when tech posts.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Ight Uppin lets get these votes posted and get this over w./

both of u but michael madness had a better flow,better punches and better personals
vote-mm

vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

its all good, even tho he posted his verse 4 hours after the deadline...so i shoulda got the win....i killed wit disses.....

man this site is wack.....all you care about is structure...damn.....cant compare it to free style its not even close to that its TEXT.....

but yeah...thanx dick ryderzz.....

Uppin(5) Ight lets get this over w/....need poll votes...Leave a thread behind

YL.. You're only allowed to up 5 times.
Post again and you're DQed.

MM won this.. Y.L Just had the worst style ever
You need to get an even bar structure n' actually
hard hitting pucnhes..MM just shower'd you in punches

v/ MM

man if i lose dis its the gayest thing ever........everyone on this site has the same gay style...NO MULTIES.,.....he had better multies then me? what multies? no one on this site uses multies......but i aint mad at cha....you dont choose the dik rydaz.....haha....fuck this is crazy....cant beleev im losing to that gay verse....jus comes to show me how much this site is bout da game....

like all my boys who comne here said....."jus put up a wack verse they'll like it" lmao

PeaCe OuT this site is to waaack!!!

ThEy DoNe ThOuGhT i GaVe Em A FrEe ShOt N ShIt!!!!

ite ite ite....herez how it iz...
y.l.....ur shyt waz ok.....ok punches....ok flow...n bad structure.....overall......elevate....
mm- u have truly improved a lot......nice punches....ok flow....n good structure
dis waz a fairly one sided battle....but it waz ok
punches: mm...ur shyt waz hitting hard...on the point
flow: mm- ur shyt had a rhythm ....
strucutre: mm......Y.L......werk on dat....
vote: mm- these r the things i care for MOST........
good battle.....no hate.......1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Anon

Y.L. was warned... and he persisted to Up the battle. He's DQ'ed.