Dev vs Ny1stunna
 

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This Is Going TO Be A Great Battle !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am trying to climb up the ranks by beating Dev there is no way i will get Exterminated//
Facing me is danergours I can cause your career to be Terminated//
I am the Lyrical "senate" defeating you is like the Marlins beating the Cubs for the Pennant//
Your rhymes are older then the ice "age" maybe Dev could beat me if she stopped using rhymes off the same page//
My rhymes are like bombs being dropped in a raid//
Dev how are u going to beat me with bars that are overplayed//
I am dropping the bombs like i am japan wordplanes and your Pearl Harbor//
I have no clue how u think your going to beat me when your learning from Encarta//
To be RBs's lyrically killed emcee is how you were Designated//
Dev you were always scheduled to get deteriorated//

You can't spell... Fuck rapping,, you should stayin in school
Like shouting SNAP! With a joker... I’m playin ya like a fool
Called Ny1stunna… ‘cholesterol’ fits more decently
With ‘filling’ in ya lines… flip ya like 200lb’s of obesity
You’ll rename ya self bile… after a regurgitate ya punches
Then Rearrange them… spell ya name in half digested lunches
A member for 2 months… slowing down… barely 100 posts
That either means ya whack… or this kid has lost his ghost
At 13 in a mans game… this kids skipped outta little league
And I just hit ya for a home run… to leave ya lyrically fatigued

.I am starting to think i lost but.. Open For Votes.

This battle is about the cleaner verse which clearly belonged to Dev. Not only with a far superior structure to Stunna's, but also with punches and personals that were witty, and harder hitting. There was substance to his verse and it was clearly his own, Stunna's was good too but didn't show the experience that Dev's did. Stay up Stunna, work on structure and complexity and you'll be fine. Good battle guys.

Drop a vote here if you would
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567

dis battle goes to dev because of da harder hittin punches and wordplay, metaphors were a tad better, and he structured it o.k. as well.

as for ny1stunna it looks like you got merked but not by that much nigga you did o.k. but elevate a litle, it looked like you tried to hard to beat dis guy, structure of your verses were good too, metaphors were better in my opinion.

who deserves my vote for dis battle is Dev for his punches and creativity.

I'd appreciate it if ya'll nigas peeped ma shit right down here!!

AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

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good battle guys, but Dev definitely took it, he had way better personals and punches, and better structure, Stunna yours wasn't bad at all, some of your shit was actually kind of clever, just work on setting up punches. My vote: Dev

Hey guys please drop an honest vote on either or both of these:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109787

Tight battle... its good really but dev took it definnally.. better punches and personals i think but i dunno both have room for improvment... well i dunno close but overall

Vote-DEv

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110301

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

dev merked Ny in this battle...a much more creative verse, better punches, personals and way better flow and structure...i think it's safe to say that you just got outclassed on this one Ny...s'all good though, your gettin better just keep elevatin...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Alright Battle Here...but Dev clearly took this one...He had the much better verse overall i thought....Dev had the better punches, his flow was real nice, structure was real good, had some good personals in there as well. Ny you had a good verse too but not as good as Dev had, your punches were alright just didnt hit as hard as Devs...overall Dev took this one, props to both though. Vote Dev.

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flow/structure-
definately goes to Dev, his lines weren't stretched, multis were concistant while NY's lines were stretched and lacked fluidity

punches/personals-
this goes to dev, even though both could use some work in these areas

closers/finishers-
goes to dev,

vs
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overall, vote goes to dev


hit this up and vote honestly please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110000

i vote dev. ny1stunna....wut the helll are you thankin. alss you sed wuz" dev couldn't beat me......im gonna beat dev" were you even concentrating while you were writing or were you beating your meat while trying to battle.

i vote dev. ny1stunna wut were yoo thankin. alls yoo sed wuz" i'll beat dev......dev cant beat me" were yoo even concentrating at all while you were were writing or were yoo "beating" your meat while you were trying to battle.

Dev took this one wit eas, his verse better verse overall. Dev won with better punches, nice structure, steady flow and he also had some good personals too. Stunna ya had an aight verse but it just wasnt enough to over throw Dev's. Overall my vote goes to Dev, Keep battling both of you

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yo srry 2 free post....but dev.......can u go bak 2 mah battle wit U R Hear....cuz ya vote waz disqualified......can u plze go bak n explain it???

aight, ill get it done.... final uppin.......
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both came weak but it was obvious who won,,,

dev had a more rounded verse with better vocab but literally no punches,,, his opener was nice but the rest seemed to drift away from dropping punches to using more vocab.........his structure was a LOT better too....

stunna basically dropped like a newbie,,,, wack structure,, no punches and no wordplay... just sayin "i'm gonna kill you" in different ways does NOT count as punches,.. dev came weak but stunna came really bad

so vote DEV