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.:FreemaN:. Vs YO YO YO
iight...
10 Lines... All the normal rules... drop 20 mins max after checkin... break the rules and get automatic loss... your droppin first... i'll drop after a see youve dropped... good luck... |
iight...
10 Lines... All the normal rules... drop 20 mins max after checkin... break the rules and get automatic loss... your droppin first... i'll drop after a see youve dropped... i heard |
checkin.....................
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waitin on your checkin bitch.............
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hurry up man...
a can see youur keying... you have been for 20 minutes... ive been done for 10 mins... im drop now... jus cuz ur so fukin slow... and so a dont break my own rules! droppin now... hurry up ffs... |
Your delirious... repeating the same fuckin word
well... YO YO YO, youve got 2 losses so this'll be your third im hittin you damn hard... when a dont even really need to you must be fuckin stupid to accept, cuz a didnt even mislead you you could see my record blatantly... yet you still fuckin accept maybe you thought youd get respect from the way Free broke ya neck My verse has left you infected, like poison's been injected Not even your mother fuckin firewall can keep you protected Its like your a fuckin echo... three words for everyone Well, ive got an echo of my own cuz you jus got... ... SONNED SONNED SONNED |
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Listen up this rap battle has gone ass backwards, the main event is on first
I come on like a fetus, the rest of yo all are afterbirth Yea ive lost twice i dont care nothin stops me I still talk smack and back it up, like Muhammad Ali You acceptin ma challenge nigga, think twice like pulling a trigga, im a guy wid a figure You dont even stand a chance, go call yourself a ambulance, ILLbeat u alive go talk to a grave digga, You accepted this battle Ex-pect-ing a win, but instead I'm Dis-respect-ing your chin, If this was Wrest-ling you'd Already Be Pinned, You can call this Science class cause I'm Di-sect-ing this Kid call me a mathematician,first shot KO like im comin with the one hitter quitter your rhymes wouldnt shine even if they were covered with glitter |
u biter that is off wrestlin ban his ass sum 1 ma lil bro watches wrestlin and dats where its from
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vote doesnt count. bring this to i.r. if ur so suspicious. -feeble
vote goes 2 freeman cos he clearly murked him and he bit lines of a tv show thnx 2 me lil bro i fouind out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
multies: tied
flow:free wordplay: ??? where is it? Vote: freeman Vote on my battle guys...haha http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110193 |
oh shit......
punches:free thought it was wit the rest...my bad |
vote goes 2 freeman...................he had better punches and they hit harder.................
his shit flowd better................. it woz an all round betta verse vote=freeman hit ma battle up vs. skandalz in front lines.......honesly peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
Vote goes to Freeman, he knows how to put a battle verse together and it shows. Other guy is new clearly, he'll get it in time if he sticks around but choosing multis over punches is suicide. Free had good punches, i laughed at some of them, and also structure, all of the basics down so the win belongs to him.
Good battle guys. Drop a vote here if you would http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567 |
shouldent this fu be banned he used some one else is line.///////////////////////////
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...964#post1129964 vote on this battle it hot |
this has got to go to freeman... the verse had much harder hitting punches, and better concepts... and the flow was smoother... same goes for personals... Yo's your punches lacked, and thats what its all about.... vote=freeman
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
iight...
uppin this for the close now.... uppin #1.............................. |
uppin this #2...
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Punches: Free
Wordplay: Neither Multis: Free Personals: Free Pretty one-sided battle, plus Yo spent a line DEFENDING himself, what the fuck is that? Your delirious... repeating the same fuckin word well... YO YO YO, youve got 2 losses so this'll be your third Best bar of the battle Vote - Freeman |
uppin this... hmm... can you please give feedback and so on cuz 3 of you who voted, your votes have been taken away...
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uppin... this is my fourth overall... but... a think a get 5 seein as the battle has been opened again?...
so this is uppin #2 after being re-opened... pz |
Free had the better flow, structure and most importantly the punches.
YO needs to elevate, it shoulda been a bit better after 20 minutes. Vote -Free! Vote for this!......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683 |
Your delirious... repeating the same fuckin word
well... YO YO YO, youve got 2 losses so this'll be your third ^nice opener good personal...and punch.... im hittin you damn hard... when a dont even really need to you must be fuckin stupid to accept, cuz a didnt even mislead you ^this is kinda.....weak buti see how you were trying to take it... you could see my record blatantly... yet you still fuckin accept maybe you thought youd get respect from the way Free broke ya neck ^this is a good punch.....kinda..broke neck...old but eh... My verse has left you infected, like poison's been injected Not even your mother fuckin firewall can keep you protected ^this is aight...computer and rap.....but its still good Its like your a fuckin echo... three words for everyone Well, ive got an echo of my own cuz you jus got... ... SONNED SONNED SONNED ^eheh real nice closer.....word nicenice nice.... Listen up this rap battle has gone ass backwards, the main event is on first I come on like a fetus, the rest of yo all are afterbirth ^this is interesting wordplay...an ok punch...stretched though.... Yea ive lost twice i dont care nothin stops me I still talk smack and back it up, like Muhammad Ali ^I think i heard this one before......didn't like it then either... You acceptin ma challenge nigga, think twice like pulling a trigga, im a guy wid a figure You dont even stand a chance, go call yourself a ambulance, ILLbeat u alive go talk to a grave digga, ^multied yes.....stretched...yes....weak vocab.....yes..... You accepted this battle Ex-pect-ing a win, but instead I'm Dis-respect-ing your chin, If this was Wrest-ling you'd Already Be Pinned, You can call this Science class cause I'm Di-sect-ing this Kid ^this was actually a good line....i guess...multied NO DASHES...herb strucutre.... call me a mathematician,first shot KO like im comin with the one hitter quitter your rhymes wouldnt shine even if they were covered with glitter ^meh....a fine closer butnot enough effort this time for the win.... Winner freeman.....hit this up dope topical against deacon...pz...oh i can't poll says polls are closed get my shit polled though in I.R. follow links return favos peace.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620 __________________ YA HEARD |
free man had a few hard hitting punches, nothing to special but they hit,
yo yo yo, had punches but they didn't really connect, freemans structure, was good, yo yo yo still has a newb structure, with stretched lines, yo yo yo, probably took the multies in this, freeman had few if any. votefreeman better verse, capable of winning a battle, whlst yo yo yo didn't come hard enough |
uppin #3...
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vote go to freeeman......merkd this kat overall....yoyoyo work on your style,flow,strucutre....and especially punches elevate!
free you came decent ...attempted personals....flowed well...punches were there...vocab ehh....metas ok...wordplay good....14/20 yoyoyo not to good a verse but not bad....your punches hitting hard lacked....personals were attempted but hardly....flow was decent....wordplay to....witt was ehh... overall not bad 10/20 vote - free peep me against wise ways ..... |
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