pictureperfect2 vs LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
 

yo yo 10 - 16 lines.........no hate, d/r, all that shit..........check in due 45 min afta check in.......ill check in afta u then start keyin.....dont no show

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Pictureperfect no more cuz u just got a loss/
You just anotha path that is easily crossed/
Why the fuck you have tupac as ur avatar wen u got no game man/
You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/
Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/
Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/
Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/
Im tellin it real so i wont rhyme cuz i gotta express this to ya/
So stop posin dawg cuz u just aint "ThUg LiFe"/
Haha this cat wont have sex til he gets a wife

GOOD LUCK

Spittin rhymes inclined
to take u back in time
yo mom gives birth she say da child aint mine/
jus another verse I know it hurts
lazy fuck gave up before beginning the search/
so les fast forward to when u was a kid
and see how u was way back when/
u was funny looking as we look back
hooked ass beeck wit a hooked ass back
aww am I makin u sad
heleriosly ironic u sumin u never had
one stick this pussy bleedin
my dick he slurpin seaman
to go on I see no reason
beat me keep on dreamin

Lyrically definitly got this. No real challenge here. Picture had some tight metas and punches. Picture didn't really throw anything, more of a freestyle verse than a battle I think.
Please check this out, both of yall. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

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uppin number 1.......................please vote...........drop a link...........................1.................. ...................

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uppin number 3.............................vote god damnit..........................................

Lyrically Insane took this one easily, he came with nice structure and really good punches, "You live a thug life than why you have high speed internet and broadband"
that shit had me laughing, good job. Pictureperfect keep working at it, your lines were short and choppy. vote: LyricallyInsane1

hey guys please drop an honest vote, this kid talks shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243

aight...

LI... your structure prolly is wut i think killed you da most... i think you had da lyrics... but you really didn't catch da rythm of da flow... punches were ok.. not anything to stand out-ish.. overall not to bad tho...

out of 10 i give you 7.3-- <---structure--->

PP.. pretty good... i like how you tried to keep ppl reading with a lil intencity...... punches were a lil better... good structure.. easy to read and get your text style... good job..

out of 10 i give you an 8.3

Vote: Perfect

uppin..........yo peep what blak woods had ta say if u votin.......sumone who actually understood a bit how i be flowin, and flow dro dat flow u thought was hot by dat doo, is not coo at all. fo real when u look at it, i'd be inbarrased makin a slam from someones computer, das jus gay.............uppin.......................

LI got this, but you two need to elevate a lot, both of you had a lot of things that didn't make sense, LI had more of a flow, and used more wordplay, and metas, but they didn't really make sense, i bet if you guys tried harder you could do a lot better, your flow was a little odd.
Both of your structures were fucked up.
Pic I thought was tied with creativity when he said the whole thing about the beginning of LI's life, but LI said: You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/
Just a rich as fag that wunts to be like the crowd/
Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/
Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/

So overall LI takes this, keep elevatin

Yo hit these battles, they didn't get enough votes, and have been going on for more than a week i think, so click on this link and plz vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109650
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108789

if u know how ta flow read mine over agian cus the whole thing flows "perfectely" so he aint beatin me in that catagory, and i appreciate your input, but lets get some cats who can actually vote, to get this thang closedandone .
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<funny u somin u never had" then i call him a pussy, get it..........anyway uppin............................................. ...aint no one vote on this yet so sumone fix that

3-1 me..............please vote............drop a link and ill return the favor................could a mod put the votes on the poll?.......thanks 1

LI got this he aiint come that hard but he the only 1 that actuaal had a punch and a personal..the otha cat came weak and had no punches or flow...Both need to elevate

VOte:Li

please an honest drop a vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122

This one was neck and neck but to tell ya tha truth I gotta give it to PP2.

upppin.............................old one but aint nobody actually vote, so do dis up.................................

yeah i agree, ppduece took this battle, not that it matters because i cant vote anyway, but hey can any of u guyz hit up my battle with MichaelCorleone.

newbie or ingorate cats who cant vote, dont give me advice cus u dont know, shit, cats u know sumin i'd respect thought out vote and i'll return da favor, get some real votes on this, get this shit closed up

4-3 me comin....finish this off............................................... ........................

if i could vote, it would definitely be for picture because his structure was a lot better and his opener kicked it hot.
Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

4 to 4 if everyone could vote, sumone who can vote get on this close this out...................................

Picture's opener and closer were what really did it for him. All the stuff in the middle was just filler, but he did have good flow and like one good punce

LI claimed that picture couldn't be thug and that he was going to harvard. If he werre, why would he be on this site. LI's flow was lacking as well. My vote goes to pp2.

Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

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Pictureperfect no more cuz u just got a loss/
You just anotha path that is easily crossed/
weak open, attempted a a pun, didnt really work
Why the fuck you have tupac as ur avatar wen u got no game man/
You live a thug life than why have high speed internet and broadband/
weak punch
Just a rich ass fag that wunts to be like the crowd/
Prolly goes to Harvard...making father proud/
poor
Well bitch where im from we dont got dads n we provide fer our family/
Im tellin it real so i wont rhyme cuz i gotta express this to ya/
maybe you shoulda rhymed
So stop posin dawg cuz u just aint "ThUg LiFe"/
Haha this cat wont have sex til he gets a wife
brutal close


Spittin rhymes inclined
to take u back in time
yo mom gives birth she say da child aint mine/
not good enuf to open
jus another verse I know it hurts
lazy fuck gave up before beginning the search/
...not really a punch
so les fast forward to when u was a kid
and see how u was way back when/
again, not much of a punch
u was funny looking as we look back
hooked ass beeck wit a hooked ass back
again
aww am I makin u sad
heleriosly ironic u sumin u never had
???
one stick this pussy bleedin
my dick he slurpin seaman
to go on I see no reason
beat me keep on dreamin
at least you closed aight

Both had no punches worth being called a punch. So ima go on flow, and pic had a lil betta flow.

vote pictureperfect2

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dude who thinks he's insane got this easy one

killed him wit thug life line structure was basic though
the picture was nothing perfect from other dude
the mother punches is played out and wasn't feeling tha gay semen line
only the truth from the butcha-

uppin drop a link da kid'll get back at chu............................................... ..

uppin this battle like over a moth old still aint closed yet, someone plezz help cloze this drop a fuckin link in i'll hit u back as soon as i can..............

I'm gonna give this to Lyricallyinsane. Pic just didn't step up to this one. He got skills but needs to focus on the battle more than the freeverse. Good content overall for lyricallyinsane. Good punches too. I'm out.

UBR

I also wanted to add that I did think that pic displayed more rhyme skill than lyricallyinsane, but he made up for it in punches.

UBR

hay drop a vote for 1 of my battles and i'll drop a vote here.

uppppppppppppppppppppppin......................... .................................. get a vote on this jazz help close it out, drop a link, and i tell u what i think.

pp2 takes this one but it was close his punches were tight and he in general raps better than the other guy insane i have seen better from you give it all you got and you coulda took this guy
vote-pp2

return da favor fool