Saltshaka vs. LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1
 

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U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane//
Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math//
Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath//
Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse//
I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse//
Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol//
Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE//
Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated//
Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated//


aight....letz do this

5 POSTS...HAHA

DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/
U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/
Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/
Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/
Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/
Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/
The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/
But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/
But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/
Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/
Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/
Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/

uppin #1.........lets get sum votes......drop a link and ill return the favor.............please vote...............1.........

I was feelin Salts verse til the American Idol line, shit kid no good. Lyrically came weaker than normal, he didn't throw that many punches in this battle. Salt came good for a newb, I think Lyrically underestimated hime, salt had a few ok punches and metas. Vote-Salt

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

Salt[/B}

U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane//
[B]Blah punch... be more direct and complex
Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math//
Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath//
So-So...
Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse//
I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse//
Meh..
Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol//
Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE//
u used idle/idol 3 times[/B}
Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated//
Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated//
[B]I could be 0-3....dont mean im bad, i have an alias that i started off on as 0-3


LLS

DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/
U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/
Not a strong opening
Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/
Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/
ok punch
Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/
Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/
Decent hit[/B}
The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/
But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/
[B]so-so... not the greatest
But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/
Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/
Blah...
Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/
Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/
No punch...weak closer


Overall - Salt took this battle even though both verses werent the greatest

Salt[/B}

U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane//
[B]Blah punch... be more direct and complex
Ya lyrics are weak like a kid in kindergardens math//
Even if u wuz beserk u still wouldn't have a killer wrath//
So-So...
Kid might as well say he spittin bones cuz I ate tha meat off his verse//
I don't stop when ya dead, I make sure they wreck ya hurse//
Meh..
Erybody gonna diss ya verse like u wuz in American Idol//
Betta yet betta make me ya idol, cuz afta dis battle u really gonna be IDLE//
u used idle/idol 3 times[/B}
Homie must think he's ill cuz in his sig, he's intoxic-ated//
Look on tha bright side, ya 0-3, so no way u over-rated//
[B]I could be 0-3....dont mean im bad, i have an alias that i started off on as 0-3


LLS

DoGg they created the death poll becuz of me/
U just gonna b anotha victim i guarantee/
Not a strong opening
Cuz a cat like you wont even break skin!/
Sure ull get a hit but ur skills empty like a violin/
ok punch
Simply anotha wannabe cock suckin pranksta/
Baggy clothes, Straight brimmed hat, the whole nine...face it ull neva be gangsta/
Decent hit[/B}
The way u try to act tough but inside ur as soft as fur/
But i dunt think ull eva get the picture....u jus keep wishin u were/
[B]so-so... not the greatest
But its ur first battle so jus keep tryin/
Cuz its only losses ull be indentifyin/
Blah...
Aight yo u just a regular newbie that i dont have to use energy on/
Let it be heard this is true...a gospel according to john/
No punch...weak closer


Overall - Salt took this battle even though both verses werent the greatest

Uppin ma 1st time b4 i go to bed
peace...........

uppin............................................. .....number 2................................................. ..

uppin for the 3rd time come on dont sleep on this just vote.............................................. ..

uppin ma 2nd time...letz get sum votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

and rememba to poll vote... :P

salt took this shit...even though he a newb he came wit it...wit some okay punches and some okay wordplay...

insane1 was a lil wack he usually doin good but this battle he flopped

vote-salt

salt took this shit...even though he a newb he came wit it...wit some okay punches and some okay wordplay...

insane1 was a lil wack he usually doin good but this battle he flopped

vote-salt

salt your rite mi shit was tite...but you gotta get enough posts tah vote..den hit me up we battle

I enjoyed watching a newb batle a flyweight and it was good to a certain climax.

Salt shaka had a killer opener and straight closer, punches alright, but what I like about dis kid is dat he has potential and da creativeness on his punchlines like dis below. elevate your structure and flow and dats what you need because your a witty one already.

U may be a psycho wit da mic,But I left u lyrically insane//
You dont stand a chance, my lyrics decenigrate ya cell membrane//

as for LyricallyInsane1 you didn't have a good start which made me say what da hell and da punches weren't hitting and didn't connect at all most of da times. It looked like you underestimated your opponent and took him waaaaay too lightly. Improve your wordplay, punches, and metaphors and you'll be straight jus keep elevating.

!!!GOOD BATTLE BOTH OF YOU!!!

vote= SaltShaka ( reasons are explained above)

vote on ma battle (AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin) below is da link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

Uppin 3rd time............
Thanks for all tha votes!
And aight skandalz..i'll battle u afta I get 100 posts.....

aight...uppin 4'f time.............................................. ................................

Aight...letz try and finish this battle tonight...Sumbody plzzz....hit this battle up...I wanna new battle..but dun wanna keep up wit both

This battle was pretty close...I think Lyricallyinsane1 Did underestimate this cat...For a newbie..he spit damn well....Nice structure..He needs to work on harder and more direct punches towards his opponent though...

He had a good opener..
Lyricall man...I just didn't like your shyt one bit dude...
My vote...

Saltshaka

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Ight
Punches-Ss has harder hittin punches(opener was a nice touch)LI Yer ish was played at that but also worded horrible/
wordplay- Creativity was used throught the entire battle, but again LI shit was jus worded bad, so this gave saltshaka somewhat of the upperhand
flow-again because of the bad structure and wordplay use by LI it messed his flow up big time..I see signs of u being good LI jus reword yer shit better and hit harder w/ punches and personals SS nice solid flow, constinect wordplay, good punches
structure-LI Structure was wack, kinda messed up his whole shit

V/ Saltshaka

Honestly judge and vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833

aighht thanks for the feedback.............jus get 1 more vote so i can get in a notha battle................

someone vote on this battle Sop we can get this battle ova wit...itzzz old

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