mc.deadeye vs Ray-Ray
 

ok now were battling...

ok
You extinct like a fan of murder Inc,
My disses are gonna leave you colder than an ice rink,
My name is deadeye, I’m telling you I’m your father like you’re a fucking Jedi
Slap you in the face and leave you with redeye,
I’m called that because all I can see in front of me is this fucking dead guy.
I’m your dad but it’s your mother who gets the spanking,
You aint got a girl that’s why you resort to Wanking.
I give money to the homeless but you never gave any thanking.
I don’t need ten lines I can finish you in one
Listen up its over, you can go home SON!

u dissed on me deadeye? i got next against you, prove how good you are when you lose 5-0.................you're weak...Ray Ray, i apologize for the freepost but this kid freeposts in my battles and talks shit so i returned the favor...no more though...just battle me when your done weak herb...

diverse you little bitch listen to this, you weak rhyming motherfucker
My other nickname is the duracell bunny
I AM YOUR FATHER i aint being funny
step 2 me you're leaving in a hearse
ray-ray maybe shit but you're worse, Diverse

diverse you pussy give me a shout when you want to lose.

Dear Diary, i'm about to blitz a newbie,
Dead-eye-punk-ass-bitch just blew me like he knew me
Now I'll leave him bent over beggin' I remove ME
You think you're my dad, but where'd you get that notion?
My mom could beat you black and blue like you were running in slow motion,
It's true i'm cold but only in emotion
The word on the street is that your mommy date-raped ya?
She still quite likes you, but I fuckin' hate-ya
I'll go easy on you just to placate her
As for being a wanker, it's time to take you in hand....
To make your dick look bigger just use an elastic band

ok lets get some votes on this...........................

Dear Diary, that was pathetic
where did you learn to to rap

this was a weak battle
punches ray ray
personals none
flow both weak but ray ray takes it
best bar::
As for being a wanker, it's time to take you in hand....
To make your dick look bigger just use an elastic band
still aint even that good
both need work
keep battlin


my vote goes to ray ray just because the lil flow

plz vote on my battle at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110042

deadeye, check out bitchslapped, i called you out wack newb...ready to lose? i hope so b/c you have no idea what the definition of a good mc is...

uppin for votes............................................

Punches= goes to Ray, deadeye kept using the 'daddy' diss
Flow= goes to Ray, deadeye's punches disrupted the flow,
word play= deadeye, the start was better than all of Rays, shame it got boring towards the end
Originality= Ray, liked the structure, deadeyes-the star wars lines a little played

Just my oppinion guys

Vote=Ray-Ray

Return the favour vote on my battle wiv 'AK-mixa' appretiate it

Ray-ray a winner? Don’t be a sinner
His momma eats pussy like yesterdays dinner
Your chatting crap like bonespitter, between me, you and him… your still the shitter
You bitches take notes coz I’m the dopest spitter.
I’m about to smoke ray-ray like this is timesplitters
Aint no need to be bitter, you think I’d take that well i aint a quitter
All I got since I came here is ignorance
I don’t care coz ray-ray suffer from impotence
I know your pussy, I see through you like a x-ray, if your lucky you’ll live to die another day

uppin for votes............................................. ......

deadeye

Ray-ray a winner? Don’t be a sinner
His momma eats pussy like yesterdays dinner
a bit basic
Your chatting crap like bonespitter, between me, you and him… your still the shitter
suppose bonespitter did get involved
You bitches take notes coz I’m the dopest spitter.
I’m about to smoke ray-ray like this is timesplitters
i actually quite liked that, only because i have timesplitters
Aint no need to be bitter, you think I’d take that well i aint a quitter
you should be trying to big yourself up
All I got since I came here is ignorance
I don’t care coz ray-ray suffer from impotence
ok, ray-ray did bring dick size into it
I know your pussy, I see through you like a x-ray, if your lucky you’ll live to die another day
personal could have been used better

mediocre effort, i'm awaiting ray-ray second attempt
vote: deadeye, only coz ray-ray hasn't come back

I can't be botherd battling this bitch again.... it's a waste of my time... lets get some votes on this...

seen better battlez... ray-ray takez it cuz of the harder punchez although they still weak... if one of u is down for a battle some time pm me..
vote - ray-ray

return da favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

uppin for votes............................................. .....

both of you all sucked
and you can't write either
you can't rhyme 3 lines together it sounds shitty

your the manne are you??? What the fuck does that mean? Do you have nice hair bitch?