Kilo [vs] :)
 

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drop an hour after we both check in
blind spit
no feeding
who gives a fuk who votes, as long as it's honest and fair
good luck

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aiight checkin in..................................

yo im just going to straight up leave your FEATURES RATTLED
*everyone check the link in his sig* no one wants to READ YOUR BATTLES
with performances like that how are you ever going to BE DOPER
your damn battle had nearly 600 views but only had 3 VOTERS (hahahaha)
your overlooked bitch cuz the impression that you SEND IS SMALL
plus your a dumbass wit a brain the size of a TENNIS BALL (lol)
the good think for you would have been to have this battle RAP SKIPPED
cuz you aint got the proper TACTICS to MATCH THIS
ill have your ASS WHIPPED
then have your spinal cord STRAPPED WITH a MATRESS
thats filled with a million CRACKED TIPS of a desert CACTUS
so just give it up and become and ACTRESS
cuz kilo you cant see me in THESE VERBAL CLASHES
cuz you ride so much dick your ass LEAVES PURPLE GASHES
damn faggot.. the rashes on your asshole are thicker than STEVE ERKELS GLASSES

"Hi everybody!", appears like im battling Dr.Nick Riviera today
cuz this guys is dumb...
...thinks my illness would be stopped if he drank kool aid
Look, This forum ain't McDonalds...It isn't now and never was
This guy only loves to smile because herbs are all he does
Smiles only good with the whack, so he aint worth my while
and I know he wasn't worth my moms because she still has a smile
With whackest and worst...his path has no Junction...
he sucks so much you'd think he's rapping bout lyposuction
You know how when somethings ugly...it's just hard not to stare?
No wonder people vote on his battles...
Your structures worse than the one that's in Iverson's hair
Just like your eyes...This battle should already be closed
Smiles been roc'ed so bad you'd think he has fellas on his clothes

lol.. yo we goin up this for votes.........................

uppin again.. wow.. thanks for the votes people... gosh

Good battle..

:).. structure was slightly off but held well.. first two bars were dope.. real nice personals..
From there it seemed to go downhill slightly.. kinda played punches.. didn't really match the opener... multies were nice, but it coulda been better as a basic rhyme scheme..
A good verse overall..
Kilo.. opener wasn't in the same class, but it was okay..
Structure was tight throughout...
Got better throughout really... some creative punches..
I was feelin it more in the end basically.. a better verse in my eyes..
Tight battle but..

Vote - Kilo

:) takes dis battle.both had good punches but :) hit hard.both had good lines. :) took da humour side of dis battle.both good alround.
VOTE: :)

i voted for smiley cuz he had a better flow and at first kilos flow was goin nowhere, also smiley had a better closer...kilo most of ur stuff didnt even rhyme,Your structures worse than the one that's in Iverson's hair
vote=smiley aka :)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267

doesnt count -feeble

^ugh...upping for voters that have a brain...and that understand my structure please. Say it's bad if you want, but i've noticed a lot of peeps on the site have the same one. Espically in LLL...so just vote watever...but make it better than dat guys...

thank you.

good battle. i really enjoyed it. Kilo you have mad elevated: nice work!
:)...you are getting better with your structure as well, i really like your choice of rhymes and shit...its a refreshing read after seeing so much SHIT/BITCH bullshit in FL. you really have a way with rhyming words. Im gonna have to say Kilo got this one...he came more personal...and his punches were connecting well and when i read some i thought....wow thast clever. liposuction thing was tight. same with with the iverson's hair punch. :) i like your verse as well but the punches didnt seem as clever. i mean your rhymes are tight but in some ways it takes away from your verse cuz its like you are focusing on the rhyme words and not the whittiness of the punch as a whole. a real life battle might of been a different story because :) was going off with multis. good shit. if you can rap :) , i think u would be good in audio or something. anyways good battle. but to me, Kilo takes it.

good job guys.

vote: Kilo

shut the fuck up you swayer.. strucure has nothing to do with your verse.. and also im 14-2

uppin yo grinch poll your vote

blah go ahead and cry about this being a hate vote but its not

kilo came out strong and so did :) but some lines just did not make sense like for example the mattress line...what the fuck was that

but kilo did have harder hiting punches and the closer was pretty good for a betetr verse and better punches....

v/kilo

opener/closer- smiley

his structure, punch, and personal just outclassed kilo's

flow/structure- smiley

in the opener and closer kilo's structure slipped.... but smiley's flowed sickly with the cactus-matress-actress area, and the multis gave smiley the edge

punches/personals- smiley

kilo had some alright ones, but smiley's personals just hit alot harder... and that line about stever urkels glasses just overshadowed kilos several decent punches

vote- smiley

not a bad verse kilo, you might want to consider putting multis in ur verses... in text it helps alot


please hit up and vote fairly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110000

:) - your structure needs some work, dont need to CAP YA PUNCHES and try to make it so your lines are about the same length. when you got started your punches were good From there it got worse wit soome kinda played punches.. you had alot of multis which arent needed, try to not focus on them and just focus on makin ya punches more complex and adding metas to them

Kilo opener wasnt that great... it was just ok, it did get better though witr some of your creative and origional punches..your structure was better then :) but it wasnt the best. you dont need to """ around ya punches etc and you did have some un even lines...it wasnt bad though. your ending was good and it made up for your begining.

this was a close battle but ima have to go wit Kilo, he had an overall better verse

good battle guys, keep it up

uppin for votes............................................. ........................................

img onna have to go with kilo..miley ur shit was mad funny..structure was nice..and you stayed away from the obvious name flips that most people use on kilo..name flips suck when they get used to much...and i thought you had this battle for sre when i read it..but then i read kilo's..kilo's verse was nice..yet he shouldnt use so many smile references...still i think he won this..

v/kilo

uppin to get this shit closed.......................good battle smiles..............................

uppin to get this shit closed.......................good battle smiles..............................

uppin to get this shit closed.......................good battle smiles..............................

I liked both of ur verses, but...

Smiley: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals. Okay punches and all. Nice creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Kilo: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals, but some of ur punches seemed kina indirect to me. Good creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Vote: Smiley

Structure: Dunno....neither had the best structure
Vocabulary: Kilo
Multi: :)
Punches: :)
Creative: Kilo
Fun Factor: Both Kinda Dull...

Vote= :)

Because Kilo would of had em....but it seem like he was stalling to throw out his punches and your lines was decent....but :) went straight to the point...and came straight at chu with no extra lines that didnt need to be needed....keep ya head up Kilo you nyce as hell....and i know you better than this...and im a newbie....Big up to both of yall

real nice battle here i liked both verses, but kilo came a little bit better so my vote goes to him

"Look, This forum ain't McDonalds...It isn't now and never was
This guy only loves to smile because herbs are all he does" my fav line, it had me rollin

"real nice battle here i liked both verses, but "kilo" came a little bit better so my vote goes to him"

i made a lil typo, my vote goes to t west i put in the wrong name, srybout that

yo ite this is how i saw this 1,
kilo had a nice verse..ive seen you elavate alot man,
your punches were nice and clever but i got them.lol.
nicer structure werk on personals and flow(came abit streched on places)
smiley-this was ite but ive seen so much better from you,
your structure wasn't good dont CAPS

your punches its newbeish also...werk on personals..
not bad but
overall-kilo better verse alround..................plz return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx.......pz