YO YO YO vs Harlem's Finest
 

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Im back on ere like another series, kickin booties and smokin people like chimneys
Whoop ass classically..... neva be forgotten...people write biographies

You think i suck?......... buts dats not your mum said
Thinkin i suck but i know u swallow.......time for u to move on and open a new thread

Give ya double-duplicating Jabs wid pace.... nxt.....hook u in the face and kick loud base
Hit u so hard....leave u moonwalking out the ring....time to close this case

.... Huff and puff all you want but u still cant blow me down
this is a mission impossible for u...like gettin a fish to drown

With a knife and a dictionary, you still couldn't cut a promo right
I just shadow box wid u.... still the force knocks u out 4 a night

Original name.. shows how far this herbs career has now progressed
Dropped a three word opener at open mics.. was boo'ed off before the rest
Son.. I'll be frank.. your third loss is hanging from this thread
With those stretched lines, I'd switch names.. to No No No! instead
Can't think of a creative punch.. the herb's getting scientific pleas
His minds one of a kind... the cogs must be turned manually!
Kid's elevation status is gathering more dust than Dirt Devil
A crack fiend.. downing pipes daily.. hoping to warp to my level
Ya wack and dumb.. searching forests on his family tree trace
They say that opposites attract.. and it seems true in this case

yo yo yo good opening but died in da middle. Harlem's Finest took dis battle coz his punches + stucture were a lot beta.YO yo yo ryhme was a bit week.
keep evaluating.
VOTE:Harlem's Finest

punk battle me and step up mayne i need a comeback and i think u need to get laced set up a room and we will make soom rules

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harlems finest took this his punches were mch better as was his flow

yo yo yo ur wack u need to elevate alot ur punches are wack and so is ur flow, ur whole style is shit

vote-hf

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Harlem Finest take this..
One sided battle..HF just merked it.
Go battle better ppl HF..
Harlem's Finest

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harlem finest's flow waz way better pluz hiz punchez were much harder. Yo yo yo keep workin' on your structure and try to use some personalz. U used none...
vote - harlem finest

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Yo Yo Yo

Im back on ere like another series, kickin booties and smokin people like chimneys
Whoop ass classically..... neva be forgotten...people write biographies
not really a punch...not really direct either
You think i suck?......... buts dats not your mum said
Thinkin i suck but i know u swallow.......time for u to move on and open a new thread
what? this was wack and it wasnt a good punch
Give ya double-duplicating Jabs wid pace.... nxt.....hook u in the face and kick loud base
Hit u so hard....leave u moonwalking out the ring....time to close this case
well... u had an ok concept but didnt follow through wit it.. the moon walking
.... Huff and puff all you want but u still cant blow me down
this is a mission impossible for u...like gettin a fish to drown
actually a decent punch.. not bad, coula been re-wored though and ya set up wasnt that good
With a knife and a dictionary, you still couldn't cut a promo right
I just shadow box wid u.... still the force knocks u out 4 a night
Blah closer, not direct and not a good punch


H.F.



Original name.. shows how far this herbs career has now progressed
Dropped a three word opener at open mics.. was boo'ed off before the rest
decent opening with ok personals
Son.. I'll be frank.. your third loss is hanging from this thread
With those stretched lines, I'd switch names.. to No No No! instead
lol....funny line and good personal, u did play off his verse though
Can't think of a creative punch.. the herb's getting scientific pleas
His minds one of a kind... the cogs must be turned manually!
anoher mid-way good punch...
Kid's elevation status is gathering more dust than Dirt Devil
A crack fiend.. downing pipes daily.. hoping to warp to my level
nah... not really a good punch or a direct one
Ya wack and dumb.. searching forests on his family tree trace
They say that opposites attract.. and it seems true in this case
so-so closer to end it

overall - Harlems Finest took this battle wit his punches and personals, his wordplay wasnt bad either. YYY work on ya punches and ya line length.

Harlems finest takes this one fore sure he had better flow better puches and better multis. yo yo yo you gotta work on your flow and wordplay..

vote - harlems finest

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Punches: Harlem
Wordplay: Neither
Personals: Harlem
Multis: Neither
Opner: Harlem
Closer: Harlem

Vote - Harlem's Finest

Yo had the most basic verse, no punches, and just barely rhymed everything, Harlem had an overall better verse, better flow.

Kid's elevation status is gathering more dust than Dirt Devil
Best line

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Uppin for a final vote..

Yo Yo Yo was general.. shit coulda been for anyone.. jus a string of random punches.. no flow or build up to speak of.. HF typed for his opponent.. did a lil hwk.. personal punches came consistant an a nice flow to hold it all together.. the opener woulda been enuff coa that was strait up witty.. props to both.. YO YO YO jus do some research on who u battlin in future.

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Man... uppin.. drop an explained vote.. I'll return the favour...

..Harlem's obviously one of the better FL battlers..
Every battle is a complete merking..
His punches & personals weren't great but for FL..superb.
Some nice little witty wordplay aswell..
YO YO YO, ur name alrdy ruined ur chances..
& then that verse..completely vanished ur chances..
Harlem's Finest was just better period.
Better punches & personal in form of sometimes dope wordplay.
Just much better then Yo Yo Yo..
HF

yo yo yo
not really any punches that hit hard, you had one or two decent concepts, but didn't make enough of them.
your struture was basically fucked, wordplay was pretty weak in place,
an a personal or two would go a long way.

harlems finest

you had some nice personals which basically killed the battle off, you had decent punches as well, wordplay was good, format an structure was nice.

harlems finest takes this for a better verse, with punches!!


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sorry to break it to you yo yo yo but you got merked from Harlem's finest.............really he's Harlems finest I guess. Anyways back to da topic of why I came here..............to vote Damnitt... well Harlem had some pretty ingenious punchlines and not too big up on any metaphors........da flows and da structure was a lot better than yo yo yo in my opinion also, but both rappers have a weakness. Harlem's weakness.........is he can throw punches and direct but don't often use a lot of metaphors but dats not really to important is it. Yo yo yo is aight..............he kept his own and held it down so i'll give him dat fact right there of course........metaphors were good but didn't have to do with da battle or dissing Harlem.....Yo yo yo jus needs to elevate and go to da Whackness and forum Q's & A's for help on making punchlines..........even though punchlines have to be self thought......... next time read Harlem's profile to have something much better to start off your diss with and use bigger words. Both keep on elevating ya talent and ya skills.

vote=Harlem's finest

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