GaZeeBo vs B.rantis
 

aight i called out to anybody and he answered me

so 10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin

due in 30

ill spit first

check in

checking in...................spitting in 30 min..

gazeebo.................u wanna make it 20 lines and another 30 min?

I’m elite when like tiki barber always burstin through he seams
I’ll Staple Your Arms To Your Head And Really Make you reach for your dreams
Your Learnin im the Best, you Aint Insuring Respect
I Retreave The Soul Of This New Comer Like Securin and Impurin a Guest
I Heat and Bleed Weak, You Cant Reach My Peek
Defeatin Me Is Like Fallin Asleep With UnderWear on, Its Just a Brief Dream
The Streets Is Me, Im gonna delete your speech
This battle has more shells flyin then a Public Beach
Im Stompin You Out, Watch Im Merkin This Bout
I'll Put Your Eyes In Your Teeth So Next Time We Talk you'll Be Watchin Your Mouth.....

wow really bad
really am struggling right now
o well lets see.......

any one wona battle i need a come back set it up and get destroyed all battle anyone
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fuck you^^

and b just spit 10 cuz i already did 10

sent a pm bout the line count since im just doing it to get better... take what u want

Yo this dudes the same age as me but im more of the father figure,
Cause I spit hard like the booth on the basement, u more like big tigga
I don’t battle gays so could u spit a little straighter, thank god its over the net ,heard ur breathe speaks louder than darth vader’s, every punch u sayin’ is fallin’ fast and makin a crater, My style u cant create it, can hear the “stoned” trait but I spit like Roberto Alomar did that umpire on home plate,....right in your face , don’t think ur cool with me cause the topic looks like we running mates, this cat is getting adobted by B. cause hes obviously strayed, ill get a 5-0 and ull be confused like a blind kid lost in a maze. I got TKO’s for gazeebo type of brothers, hes sorry for 2004 like ruben studdard, you faker than my Christmas tree, sorry bout ur girl and all the surgery, way too much on both her knees, and I aint talking bout church kneeling and bible reads, talking stroking my dick like she does calligraphy, she likes it rougher than Buddy Lee in those Dungarees, don’t call her a bitch for fighting with me, nah its cause her favorite food is pedigree, only hit it to make u feel deceived, leave u dazed like u on Amphetamines
Got that funky flow that you don’t know, im getting away with this battle like OJ, and u ended up like Ron Gold….plus Nicole
How u plan to beat the punchline joker, strickly blunt smokers, thought it was games when I pulled out the tech and u busted out the super soakers

i didnt peep ur response but what ever... if u wanna come back with some more its cool

nah just edit out some of yours
its aight if its 12 or 13 just edit SOME out

uppin #1

gizzard juts pm me a link and it will b all over ya little pussy

yo i cant vote yet but hit some threads in my sig and i'll get back to you
drop a link and shit so yea i have like 95 posts so yea you no

B.Rantis should be DQd for goin over the line limit.
Anyway, B.Rantis came longa nd weak like an impotent nigga. His punches were all played, and his structure is totally fucked. Lines were stretched and it was jus a pain to read them all. None of the punches he threw hit hard, and his personals were weak. Everything he said was mad played, dawg ya gaoot come creative and witty.

Gazeebo, you didn't have any personals, but you had some good punches. The brief dream line had me crackin um, you came a lil played at times, but some of that shit was good. Thge multis were a waste, cause they weren't punches. When metas aren't pounches they end up bein kinda useless.

Overall I give this battle to Gazeebo for more punches and creativity

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540

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I’m elite when like tiki barber always burstin through he seams
I’ll Staple Your Arms To Your Head And Really Make you reach for your dreams
played with the arm staple thing, i just read an FL battle the other day and i saw a line almost exactly like that
Your Learnin im the Best, you Aint Insuring Respect
I Retreave The Soul Of This New Comer Like Securin and Impurin a Guest
so-so punch...coula been better but it was ok
I Heat and Bleed Weak, You Cant Reach My Peek
Defeatin Me Is Like Fallin Asleep With UnderWear on, Its Just a Brief Dream
u rhymed dream before up in the opening and dream and peek are a bad rhyme, meh..
The Streets Is Me, Im gonna delete your speech
This battle has more shells flyin then a Public Beach
coula been better, the concept was ok but the wording sucked
Im Stompin You Out, Watch Im Merkin This Bout
I'll Put Your Eyes In Your Teeth So Next Time We Talk you'll Be Watchin Your Mouth.....
played again... i myself used a line like this when i was a newbie


B

Yo this dudes the same age as me but im more of the father figure,
Cause I spit hard like the booth on the basement, u more like big tigga
horrible opening, weak punch that just flew by him
I don’t battle gays so could u spit a little straighter, thank god its over the net ,heard ur breathe speaks louder than darth vader’s, every punch u sayin’ is fallin’ fast and makin a crater, My style u cant create it, can hear the “stoned” trait but I spit like Roberto Alomar did that umpire on home plate,....right in your face , don’t think ur cool with me cause the topic looks like we running mates, this cat is getting adobted by B. cause hes obviously strayed, ill get a 5-0 and ull be confused like a blind kid lost in a maze. I got TKO’s for gazeebo type of brothers, hes sorry for 2004 like ruben studdard, you faker than my Christmas tree, sorry bout ur girl and all the surgery, way too much on both her knees, and I aint talking bout
cant really break down ya verse... it was to hard to read and ya struct was horrible. i shortened it to what i thought was 12 lines and then started to read it and noticed that i have no clue how u wrote it, i looked for some punches when i read it but they all werent that great, take a trip to WEC


overall - G won this wit better punches and struct, even though both werent that great

aight thanks^

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gazeebo - good structure.........flow was on target throughout his drop........vocab was ok.......wordplay was nice.........i was feelin most of ya punches..........no good personals.......best line - Defeatin Me Is Like Fallin Asleep With UnderWear on, Its Just a Brief Dream......

b rantis - structure was wack.....flow was fell off drastically.......vocab was aight.......wordplay was ok.........some of ya punches were good..........ok personals........best line - would be able to put down one if i could tell when ya lines broke..cause ur rhyme scheme was so wack i didnt know when ya lines ended and started

conclusion - gazeebo takes this in strucuture, flow, wordplay, punches, and had the best line......so he gets my vote

VOTE - GAZEEBO

lmao...even though B. Rantis went WAY over tha bar limit...GaZeebo.still could have beat him wit half his verse...B rantis didn't really have any direct punches at all...Gazeebo was out of dis cat's league...This battle shouldn't have really went on...

I know I can't poll vote...juss givin a lil feedback....

but if i could..ma vote gazeebo...

if yall could hit dis battle up witta honest vote...i'm tired of gettin slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110270

Gazeebo...you had a few great lines there...Your second coupling was hard...Had a few problems with some words that don't exactly rhyme..but I spit that way in real life and I make em rhyme so I feel you. You had hard effective punches...8 out of 10 lines and I gotta go with you..

B. Rantis..I don't know what to say to you...ou need to fix your structure...or better yet..apply one. You threw punches but they were weak because they were hard to read..and they lacked stength. Too much filler....keep elevating dog.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110795

Oh shit....I'm tripping...me and Gazeebo are Instant...please erase my vote. i suggest you report this B Rantis to make sure this vote is erased....My bad....I don't know what I was thinking....shit...I wasn't thinkin.

gazeebo-ok punches a few played but its all good.... at least ya had some-
ya structure wus easy read and flowed ok not great but decent...
some ok metaphors... again played but still beter than none right?
multis ehh didnt really see non...

B.Rantis(wannabe B. Rabbit lol)-anyway structure SUCKED.... flow wus horrible since
i coudlnt even read your structure... didnt see a damn punch in ya verse cept maybe
one punch... that everyons heard before...metaphors none i dsont tink.... u took
the multis category tho! woooo!....

OverAll-GaZeeBo... hit up my battle wit assassins tryin to end it...
peep my open mics... Pz....
_-SyaNidal-_ AKA _-BugZ-BunNy-_....

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This battle was wack, but...

B. Rantis: U went over, but ur verse was crap anyway. Mad hard to read and the things u were sayin' were not deep. You had okay metas, and ur structure and flow is the stuff of nightmares. Keep elevatin'.

Gazeebo: Ur verse was good. It had okay punches, persopnals and metas. U just completely dusted this guy. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Gazeebo

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