:) vs FairInHeight
 

ok 10 lines.. no hate votes.. gazeebo cant vote.. you spit first rhymes due 20 minutes after we both check in

peace

checking in

check in...............................................

sry for freepost but i wouldnt do that

our beef is our beef...no need to bring it over to another battle

dont wry bout that dawg...that aint fair if i would do that

dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP
leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS
you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED
and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS
faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED
son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG
your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON

tearz beat opens
funeral singing starts and ends.

your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/
ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/


scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/
winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/

this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/
momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/

this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/
you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/
i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/
wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/

uppin, i gotta fix up the structure

tearz beat opens
funeral singing starts and ends.

your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/
ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/

scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/
winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/

this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/
momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/

this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/
you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/

i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/
wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/

im gonna have to give this one to faireinhight he had overall better punches smiley i liked your flow and creativity but still have to give this one to faireinhight close battle though.........

vote Fairinhight

sorry i cant poll vote

can you take a look at my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110557

fuck that.. uppin for real votes shit wasnt even explained at all.. and i said 10 lines not 20 mothafucka

uppin............................................. .....

dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP
leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS
you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED
**At first flow was off but den it picked up......okay punch**

and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS
faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED
son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
**OOOOOOO nice ass punches here......shyt good shyt.....im still laughin***

i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG
your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON
**also nice punch but the shitted on lines are gettin played out bu tu made it work**

overall: good shyt, nice punches, sum multis, wat was up wit dat structure????????


your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/
ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/
**good hard punches...great use of mulitiples**

scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/
winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/
**k good but not makin dat much sense, again good use of multis**

this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/
momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/
**like da shyt about trpplets but da last line killed it.....good way of talkin about ur self though***

this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/
you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/
**lol ill ass punches, again with the multis***

i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/
wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/
**aiight good use of multis, dat would be a good line but not a good closere***

overall=good shyt, great use of multis and nice punches

dis was a very good battle, so to decide da winner u have to find out who messes up more and it was faininheight with the 4th bar about pigs and shyt...dat killed it...
besides dat good ass battle........I'm da head recruiter for dynasty soldiers and i suggest that u 2 try out for it.....
vote= smiley aka :-)

dis is da last time im uppin dis battle its been slept on for about a week!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267

hey yo we goin up this shit again.................

....................................uppin for votes

Pretty close battle, I liked FairInHeight's style, but punches weren't as effective

Punches: Smiley
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Fair
Personals: Tie
Opener: Smiley
Closer: Tie

Vote - Smiley

faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED
Best line, I thouhgt it was funny

Return the favor in my sig, with an honest vote

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP
leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS
you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED
and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS
faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED
son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG
your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON
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structure was horrible and punches were pretty good decent personals
but yer opener was whack finished strong at the end and shit but 7/10
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your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/
ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/

scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/
winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/

this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/
momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/

this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/
you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/

i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/
wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/
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pretty whack idk yer punches and personals were horribly directed
flow was on but homie punches wins battles so you lost but 7/10
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vote/:) for having better directed punches and personals
this was pretty mucha tie and shit but :) barely pulled this off
i would say youd be lucky to win this battle
yo doggs hit my links up in my sig and return the favor ok

..................................uppin for votes, eh

Multi - I think the multies were tied in this battle... Hard to determine because :) had the better wordplay...
Wordplay - :) had better wordplay which help his multies out.....
Punches - :) used a great deal of better punches, however his verse started to get a little weak towards the end......
Structure & FLOW - TIED (Both ppl need to work on their structure and FLOW)

I vote for the Smiley face thing

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

uppin this crap again.............................

man this site hardly gets any votes.. and i want to know how antonios vote didnt count.. though he broke the vote down in categoires.. he still explained why he voted like he did.. that post should count man.. this site barely gets enough votes as it is without people cancelling the votes.. when we actually do get votes

uppin for votes...................................

Multis- : ) (he always wins this, that's his style and structure with the whole multiple rhyming deal)
Punches- : ) (more effective, more straight forward and creative for better impact)
Structure- Tie ( Not that important of a category but neither were great)
Flow- : ) (the multiple rhyme thing helps flow immensely)
Win- : ) (no question, he took all solid categories in my mind)

Drop a vote here if you have the time.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111365

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

smiley got this at first he starte off whack then picked up had decent punches and his flow was str8..fair u was ight u juss tried to force to many punches and ur shit was kinda strench which messed up ur flow..

Vote:smiley

hit dis up honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111221

yeah yeah yeah.. im a up this shit again.. im wiining this 3 to 0 .. uppin this for my ko

uppin this shit for smiley
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

okay

smiley had overall better punches
he seems to be just more experienced than fairinheight
i feel smiley had better word usage, and wordplay
his punches were hitting harder
and his verse was just creative

v/ :)

man uppin this crap again.............................

Uhhhmm vote smiley cuz good flow had some good rhymes in there; had some good punchlines better than fairinheight but fair had a good structure so that goes to him; originality was a tie cuz I tought it was a bit crappy but in the end my vote goes to smiley

Can I get some votes up in here thx
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111844