Dazasta vs Da saviour
 

ok rules...

no fake votes..
no d/r votes
12 lines i think u said?..if not post after this and tell me..
no biting...
thas about it..


waiting for check in

10 lines, you spit first 20 minutes from now....
good luck

ok..spittin...

this was a mistake..tryna battle against me...
chuz unlike you..Jesus's return is guaranteed...
this is strictly keyed...herb prepare for the ride...
help me out....click on the X on the right hand side...
you lied...good luck? i dont need it battling you...
Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you..
matter to you...it shouldnt..your another kid this cat beat..
..proven shortly..you'll be another win on my stat sheet...
pack heat?..nah...this not what that metals for...
...chuz you'll get raped and abused..only by my metaphors....


ok keyed to in 3 mins...DO NOT...FEED!

you should be dqed... but im not a bitch.. im dropping so you can drop be4 an hour from now (7:30 PM)
im so asleep now...

lol... i see, sorry, i aint said nuthin... lol

ok.. here i go!!

lil wack bastard callin himself dazasta
ill eat you sauced with mustard for only thinking on being a gangsta
i could destroy all your fucking gang like my kitchen`s bugs,
cuz you aint got nuthin but a few faggot thugs!
they just came along to have me, when i was alone, unarmed and drunk,
dont care they were more than 12, they all finally fitted in my trunk,
you act like a punk, acting phonely like you dont need some good luck,
well, its true, with a holly intervention this would be still as hard as a fuck.
So dont try looking like you have ever been doin anything good,
even your friends shit on you when you are out of the hood!!

pzz n need votes

umm^^ yes u r another win on the stat sheet..votes...

i dont think so... but there will be plenty of dickriders cuz you are in 3 differents crews and have more wins... ill check for dickriding votes, so just dont try to

Opener - dazasta
Vocab - dazasta
Structure - dazasta
Flow - dazasta
Punches - dazasta
Closer - dazasta

Overall - dazasta

dazasta's verse just dissed the shit outta you saviour. saviours verse was actually not bad, but apperently doesnt do much good against dazasta. Even up your lines saviour, itll help it flow, and make it easier to read. But basically dazasta takes every aspect of this battle and thats why my vote goes to him.

If you could return an honest vote that'd be appreciated. Thanks.
vv Me vs. pictureperfect2 vv
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109706
Pz.....

Can't Poll But oo Well...
This battle was an okay battle, I deffinately seen better from Dazasta and the otha cat is unknown to me..but I think dazasta barely won this one only cuz he had some ok punches...da saviour on the other hand was ok but a lil more whack...especially the punches.. pretty whack or played..both need some elevatin from this battle..

Vote Dazasta

And if you think Ima dickrider saviour, then you can go ahead and think that. Just shows me what kinda thoughts go thru ya mind.

I aint dickridin, you lost this battle fair and square.

Ill be back to actually poll when i hit a hundred tho...should b soon...

this is what im talking about

Dazasta wins this battle easily....He set up his punchlines a bit more clever than Da Saviour did..plus you fed....so I'm going with dazasta...he punched harder and he had a nice flow to his drop...

Meta's- Daz...He was more clever...Da saviour was really vague.
Wordplay..Daz...His drop was structured well so the words really strung together and the multi's flowed.
Multi's..Daz..He had some.
sust-Daz...He kept it up through the whole drop..Saviour..you first lines didn't even come close to rhyming.
Punches.Daz..He made you think a lil bit....saviour was like..I'll rob you kill you beat up your gang!
Overall Daz....Good Show..Keep Elevating!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110161

and if people couldnt read just the first opinion, probably they would simply dont vote,
but here people suck, you know what im talking about, you are all just like bitches

and fuck it, i apologised for feeding, but i waited for 40 minutes and then i wrote that, cuz i was tired, and so i did so, i saw his fucking drop......
ba, fuck it

doesnt effect this battle at all..... how come i only have 1 poll when i should have two?...

Dazasta

first of all...you know showed for SL :( anyways...back to ya verse

this was a mistake..tryna battle against me...
chuz unlike you..Jesus's return is guaranteed...
umm..not really thinkin that this is a hard punch.. just me?
this is strictly keyed...herb prepare for the ride...
help me out....click on the X on the right hand side...
concept was goin somewhere..coula expaned more
you lied...good luck? i dont need it battling you...
Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you..
no rhyme besides you and you..sorry kiddo
matter to you...it shouldnt..your another kid this cat beat..
..proven shortly..you'll be another win on my stat sheet...
decent punch...not bad
pack heat?..nah...this not what that metals for...
...chuz you'll get raped and abused..only by my metaphors....
ok closing..not that good


Da saviour

il wack bastard callin himself dazasta
ill eat you sauced with mustard for only thinking on being a gangsta
blah.. wack opening
i could destroy all your fucking gang like my kitchen`s bugs,
cuz you aint got nuthin but a few faggot thugs!
not a hard punch...didnt even break the skin
they just came along to have me, when i was alone, unarmed and drunk,
dont care they were more than 12, they all finally fitted in my trunk,
umm...not a clean punch...as in it wasnt directed and hard hitting
you act like a punk, acting phonely like you dont need some good luck,
well, its true, with a holly intervention this would be still as hard as a fuck.
another not clean hit
So dont try looking like you have ever been doin anything good,
even your friends shit on you when you are out of the hood!!
Clean = nope


Overall - Dazasta took this, his verse had better punches, alittle bit of wordplay and wasnt as wack. Saviour Elevate

I can't poll vote..juss givin feedback..

Dazasta
You had a diff. style then most of tha ppl on this site that i've read b4...I liked it..I had to read it a couple times to get it..but afta I got where u were commin from..it wuz hot...Ur last few lines were hott..

"Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you..
matter to you...it shouldnt..your another kid this cat beat..
..proven shortly..you'll be another win on my stat sheet...
pack heat?..nah...this not what that metals for...
...chuz you'll get raped and abused..only by my metaphors...."

I thought that wuz off tha hook...

Da Saviour...

Ur verse wuz sumwut weak compared to Dazasta...I did like this punch though

"i could destroy all your fucking gang like my kitchen`s bugs,
cuz you aint got nuthin but a few faggot thugs!"

that wuz tight....

Overall..I thought Dazasta wuz more consistant..Da saviour had sum decent punches here and there...But just didn't really match up well...so ma vote...
Dazasta

hit dis battle up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110270

Not much great from either, Dazasta verse was much more polished.

Punches: Daz
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Neither
Personals: Daz
Opener: Daz
Closer: Daz

Vote - Daz

help me out....click on the X on the right hand side...
Best line

Return the favor in my sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token

ok once again..this was a keystyle...now....uppinnnnnnnn....

v/ - Dazasta

Why? Strong punches...much better verse overall. Da saviour...you had whack punches. The thug thingy...fake personal+whack punchline. Just because you are a rapper...doesn't mean you are, or trying to be, a thug. Sounds to me your more like the fake thug...

Continuing the breakdown...Da saviour takes personals...even though they were pretty whack in general so it won't play a heavy role with the outcome of this battle. Structure...dazasta. Wasn't great but it was better than saviours...

I think this battle has been pretty much decided already. Dazasta obviously takes it.


Both returh the favour and vote on my battles please. I don't care if you can't poll, drop ur opinion.

come on close it now...
just looking 4 a last vote against me, wait till i copy all you voters names out (lol)

shut up^^............vote.....the last one.........

Imma vote for Dasazta on dis one cuz da saviour really had bad structure and Dasazta`s verse was overall better

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

damn you homosexual...............reopening done battles are gay..you are going to lose..now shut up

dazasta got this hands down..he had tight punches..tight flow...and good workdplay
aviour u was ight u punches was a bit oplayed and ur flow was kinda off

Vote dazasta


plz drop a vote on this since i took time to vote on yours
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111173

dazata
this was a mistake..tryna battle against me...
chuz unlike you..Jesus's return is guaranteed...
5/10

this is strictly keyed...herb prepare for the ride...
help me out....click on the X on the right hand side...
6/10

you lied...good luck? i dont need it battling you...
Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you..
5/10

matter to you...it shouldnt..your another kid this cat beat..
..proven shortly..you'll be another win on my stat sheet...
6/10

pack heat?..nah...this not what that metals for...
...chuz you'll get raped and abused..only by my metaphors....
5/10

overall 26/50


Da Saviour
lil wack bastard callin himself dazasta
ill eat you sauced with mustard for only thinking on being a gangsta
4/10

i could destroy all your fucking gang like my kitchen`s bugs,
cuz you aint got nuthin but a few faggot thugs!
4/10

they just came along to have me, when i was alone, unarmed and drunk,
dont care they were more than 12, they all finally fitted in my trunk,
3/10

you act like a punk, acting phonely like you dont need some good luck,
well, its true, with a holly intervention this would be still as hard as a fuck.
5/10

So dont try looking like you have ever been doin anything good,
even your friends shit on you when you are out of the hood!!
4/10


overall 20/50

my vote dazasta

plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Dazasta gets my vote because of his set up scheme and his punchlines a helluva lot more clever than Da Saviour did plus he punched harder with fists of gold and da fluency of his flow killed Da Saviour. Jus keep on elevating and getting better aight man.

Da Saviour had a off beat...off tempo flow which was throwin me off all da time jus reading or looking at da shit. a few lines didn't really rhyme but most of his rhymes were o.k. not great though....keep elevating man and do what you doin no hate man.

what really made a difference in dis battle was this punchline dat grabbed my attention

pack heat?..nah...this not what that metals for...
...chuz you'll get raped and abused..only by my metaphors

vote=Dazasta

help me out finishing my battles to, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

uppin...
man, why mod reopens this thread? i have already accpeted the loss, so please, even it is an invalid vote, leave it as it was valid

what i decided, since im about to lose this one and i have with this 3 battles opened, im going to up this shit so may times you ave to close it, or someone drop a vote, hu?

Weak battle by both, to start of with.
Both came with sometimes blameworthy punchlines..
Work on that, & Daz i know you can do better, so please do.
Dont let me read that horrible shit again.
But on with the battle.
Not very one-sided as i expected..saviour came ok..
But no more then just ok.. needs to definately elevate.
You got the basics down..but thats nothing yet..
Browse through the triple L to see how wit & comedy can be very usefull.
Also try to get more creative & just put some more effort in to it.
Dazasta..still takes this pretty easily.
Better punches..the structure was a little crooked but it didnt bother the flow.
Another herb win i'd say.. you need to definately take ur ass to elevated frontlines.
But the overall picture is,
That Dazasta takes this with more creativity & better punches.
vote Dazasta