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Emerge vs Derive
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10 line max No feeding.. First to 5 votes wins... ...good luck... |
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ok that's cool it dont bother me none... i will be leaving to the radio station in a while so i might have to drop until i get home from school tomaro...but if that bothers you then go ahead and drop tomaro...there is no feeding anyway so it dont really matter |
i almost forgot about this...i just finished watching a movie...this was a quick 5 minute key...
This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see.. a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough, and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough! Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride, and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride! His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong.. and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on! If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life".. and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest) quick key....good luck... Edit: Hmmm, this new forum layout fucks up everyones structure, i had my structure correctly but the forum layout is too small so it fucks up peoples structure.... |
uppin for emerge.........
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I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside I deride..... but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive! You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew Fuck beating you black & blue... ....ama punch you in & out every single hue! And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too Laughed when he said,... ....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you" You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars blah blah blah blah blah blah..... ^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far yup... |
eh i changed my mind i want this poll because im an herb
who cares about records........so somehow ama try to get this polled ^LMAO... duke's honest. -Axe |
Derive....
This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see.. a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology ^ Filler. Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough, and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough! ^Blah Old Concept. Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride, and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride! Garbage. His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong.. and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on! ^Meh - Nothing Special. If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life".. and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest) ^ It Had No Flow At All. It's Was...An Ok Line. I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside I deride..... but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive! ^ Ok. You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew Fuck beating you black & blue... ....ama punch you in & out every single hue! ^Decent. And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too Laughed when he said,... ....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you" ^ Alirght Wasn't Really Feelin It Though. You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze ^ ahha - Made Me Chuckle. You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars blah blah blah blah blah blah..... ^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far ^Meh - Played Concept. All In All Emerge Took This Battle With Ease Derive's Punches Were Horrible And Very Unafective Emerge Came Decent Although I Saw A Few Played Concepts He Still Had The Batter Verse By Far. V/Emerge. Polled. -Axe |
All Swaying was deleted. No more freeposting..
..Carry on |
Shit.... god damn... just cuz u got beat no need to sway Derive
*Edit... sorry token when i wrote this post the swaying was there |
No it was not^^^^....this is bullshit, emerge, bring on all of your dickryders
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Keep it up and you will lose 500 posts.
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Token, post count means shit, record means shit, and i have just realised, that text battling on RB is useless.....well, unless in a tournament....
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If u want a poll, make a new tread..ill close this, & edit votes in.
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No point on a poll, records dont show anyways, so fuck a poll.....
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i love records!!!!!....and you said you beat me and you were swaying and talking shit
so yes a poll now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
how about no?.....now stop freeposting...
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upppppp
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it's like tennis...back..forth...back..forth...this is great..
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^^^sorry i meant to put my actual vote on that post as well.....my opinion is that while neither of you dropped especially nice, emerge still took this one...he had more creative punches and better personals...derive your verse wasn't bad but some of your lines were kinda played....all in all i've seen both of you drop better but emerge takes this one, his verse was better
Poorly explained. Doesn't count. -Axe |
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aight ima have to go with emerge on this one because of better punches and betetr personals
hit punches hit harder were mopre consistant and were more direct also his sturcture was nice and his flow was better no hate here just an honest vote.. v/emerge hit up the battle in my sig please Also poorly explained. -Axe |
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vote you fucking whores!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
derive-nothing personal cuz but ya verse wasnt all that great....your punches were kind of soft......and sex punches are played as hell and u seemed to have a lot of them in your verse....u had a couple good lines but the sex jokes just werent cuttin it....get more creative next time.........decent verse 6 1/2-10
emerge-u had a nice verse....i was feelin some of your verses......i have seen u do better verses from u but i liked this one as well.....u had some nice creativity in your verse and your verse was consistant...this was a nice verse.....8/10 vote/emerge.......no hate just a vote |
upp# 4
where is my DR when i need them :rolleyes: lol |
Originality - Emerge.. v.witty an creative
Punches - Emerge.. cos of the above.. plus they knitted together.. not all stand-alone punches Personals - Both.. each had shit on the other Flow - Both.. easy to follow Opener - Emerge.. raised a smile.. much more witty Closer - Emerge.. had to laugh at that one! VoTe = Emerge Both came personal but i didnt feel Diverse's punches were as effective as Emerge's.. both had the content but Emerge put it into words better. Drop a vote on this plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 ...1 |
Upppppp
Just droppin this of at the top. Bye. |
This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology nope Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough, and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough! lol, nice Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride, and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride! nope His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong.. and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on! this got a slight smile...nice If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life".. and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! I know what it meant...I wasn't really feeing it About 2 nice punches out of 5. Wasnt feeling some of the punches. It ws ok, but could have been better, with harder punches. I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside I deride..... but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive! eehhh, could have been better You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew Fuck beating you black & blue... ....ama punch you in & out every single hue! lol, nice one And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too Laughed when he said,... ....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you" slight smile...it was ok You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze blah You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars blah blah blah blah blah blah..... ^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far ok This verse had a few decent lines. Could have hit harder on a couple concepts, but it was ok. Overall Emerge had a better read top to bottom, than derive. This was close, but Emerge clearly had more decent lines. Neither came with personals that were real ill, so on pure readability, and punches, Emerge gets my vote. Vote: Emerge Please drop an honest vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 Edit: Sorry but the polls says I need 500 posts to vote... I'm about 200 posts shy.. Anyway, good luck on getting voting in this... -W1 |
This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology ^^...wack...1/10 Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough, and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough! meh...4/10 Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride, and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride! ^that is very true..he does ride dicks...6/10 His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong.. and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on! ^compliment??..need to be more direct..2/10 If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life".. and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest) meh..sex jokes=gay..sex jokes for closer=1/10 overall for derive...14/50....28% I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside I deride..... but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive! meh..worded wack 4/10 You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew Fuck beating you black & blue... ....ama punch you in & out every single hue! You Homo??...why do u play off his verse?...0/10 And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too Laughed when he said,... ....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you" ok...6/10 You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze coo...6/10 You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars blah blah blah blah blah blah..... ^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far played..3/10 overall for emerge...19/50...38%...he wins.. yup...late |
Um... Sorry Haze, Emerge did take this one.
Though I liked the line about killing the paper, the rest was blah. Emerge. None of your lines stood out enough to quote em, but you were more consistent and just had better punches. Haze. Work on some better personals and disses. Not very hard with them mayne. V/Emerge. |
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yo ite,
this battle was ok...i read it b4 you got i t polled, and emerge theres you saying records don't meen shit but neway, derive-not to good a verse i think you came quite played in parts, and also very simple you had quite nice punches they just didnt stant out, you also came a lil streched in places...nice personals man....not bad 6/10 emerge-not bad man..nice sense of consistency... you had a nice punch most bars..thaught your flow fell of at times, but your witty'ness won this, nice structure also.... .....not a bad battle you 2 nice.... v- emerge..................... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...528#post1156528 .......................pz |
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