n'zyme vs. Malice
 

10-12 lines
house rules
u spit first or blind spit
g'luck

this kid bitched out......close this battle........................................

I aint bitch out... Im workin on a sig ho... U need to be patient bitch, givin the fact that u never gave a time limit.. hold tha fuck up, You'll get urs!!

I can make you wait bitch, cuz your rhymes are tainted
Let me pull out my whip an leave ya whole back painted
Ya not shit to this game, ur new wit no respect
Im new too bitch, and im leavin your rep wrecked
I take pecks at ya, but no big chunks
at least not till tha end when you recieve my final punch
I got tha attitude of a warrior, tha style of a champ
You little bitch, take some midol for ya monthly cramps
Ya got ya panties in a bundle, tryin to get this post closed
Well oh no... a no show... ho I dont think so
Cuz I aint no punk ass wannabe as you can prolly tell
Im gonna turn this *n'zyme" back to a single cell

Blah bitch

Kid reps Nati, i'll leave him endangered like Bengal tigers
it's out of pure Malice, that i actually strangle writers
told me to be patient, i just want to start his losing streak
so slow, types with hunt and peck, until i bruised his beak
fuck malice, your not ruthless enough to be one of 7 sins
this kid is just RB's deadweight, that's why its a heavy win
hand this bitch a quick L, watch him shutup without defiance
nothing u can say would shock me, unless you're a home appliance
watch as n'zyme invades his body, shutting down his immune system
the odds of you winning are as good as the restoration of communism

here ya go bitch...

uppin for some votes...................1x........................ ...........

this was an iight battle is go to n zymes he
had good flow and punches..malice u was ight
you juss got work on flow and produce harder
punches...

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votez...

okay it's 1-0, lets get some more votes........don't sleep....

needz votes please....................................

nzyme took this....malice your whole verse was wack except for dat last line...that didin't sem so forced....n had good punches, and flow...structure...all there...
vote-nzyme

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yo this battle was aight and can any one out there hook a brotha up
wit some votes on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110581

uppin for some votes........make sure you follow the voting rubric...

damn, c'mon ya'll uppin this thread....don't sleep on this shit...i vote on battles all the time...return the favor and check this one out........

this was tight a man its hard to judge. malice was full of it. the way he came in was just overwhelming. it was too personal and he meant it. i'm gone have to go with the checkklist approach. opening. punches. personals. flow. vocab. closing

malice enzyme
open b b
punches b c
personals b b
flow b b
vocab c b
closing c b


nod to enzyme

malice
verse laced comlexity, it was too simple really,



what the fuck^ you need to hit with your punches an hit with personals,
not much wordplay, seems like you need to elevate.


n zyme
no need for an explanation really, most people can see you took this,
harder punches, better wordplay, nice vocab, good format,
everything needed to win a battle!!

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yo this battle was a typical newb battle....ill say this...
n'zyme took this battle cause he had harder hittin punches
betta flow and structure....

malice...your shit jus lacked skill...you need to highten you skills and throw harder hitin punches along with keepin your flow together....

vote...n'zyme

uppin this.. really slept on.. i'll return tha favor

yo cmon yall... still uppin.... yall got my word, post a link to ur battle an ill hit it up

yo this was close,but malice came a little harder. i like that shit about restoration of communism, just not enough dog.