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n'zyme vs. killaconcepz
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usual rules u spit first g'luck |
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ayo if I wanted da title trust i could have-in dis' battle i would get in your ass,but word is your a fagat-if da oppurtunity comes to win tou betta grab it-or end up gettin' punched in da face till' you resemble lenny kravitz-believe or not da battle is mines-cause i'm about to blow ya spot up like cheeta's steppin' on mines-cause n'zyme couldn't rhyme even if i offered a lifeline-bout' to be known worldwide cause my flows is intercontinental-bangin' on tracks so hard sometimes i destroy my own instrumental-don't be mistakin' cause i'm new-cause basically in my world i'm Hitler and your the jew-don't spit back it's already ova-but if you wanna win use da tactics of true soulja- or whateva dat fags name is.
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[QUOTE=killaconcepz]ayo if I wanted da title trust i could have it-in dis' battle i would get in your ass,but word is your a fagat-if da oppurtunity comes to win tou betta grab it-or end up gettin' punched in da face till' you resemble lenny kravitz-believe or not da battle is mines-cause i'm about to blow ya spot up like cheeta's steppin' on mines-cause n'zyme couldn't rhyme even if i offered a lifeline-bout' to be known worldwide cause my flows is intercontinental-bangin' on tracks so hard sometimes i destroy my own instrumental-don't be mistakin' cause i'm new-cause basically in my world i'm Hitler and your the jew-don't spit back it's already ova-but if you wanna win use da tactics of true soulja- or whateva dat fags name is.
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sorry for mistake, ignore first flow
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wolverine doesn't represent you, b/c u can't connect-a-cut
no shovel needed for this battle, your diggin your own rut here's a concept, look at your verse, fix your damn structure Urine so much trouble from these words i bet ya spleen will rupture watch this kid fall in exhaustion, my heat has got this killa stroked good thing there isn't a license to mc b/c your's would've been revoked wannabe x-men, Marvel at my lyrics, whereas i just find you comical the difference in quality between ya verse and mine is defined astronomical u compiled a verse of run on sentences, threw them into one big paragraph even you found my punches funny but you're just too scared to laugh |
let's get some votes on this battle..........................................
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N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken.. Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard.. Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar.. Basically a very one sided battle.. For originality, structure, and witty punches.. Vote - N 'Zyme Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472 |
nzyme took this...punches were better, only cuz they existed in his verse...concpz was just wack....n zyme had a better structure too..both had kinda weak rhymes tho...
vote- n'zyme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
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uppin for some votes....................1x....................... ........
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don't sleep on this.....................2x....................... ................
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vote on mine and I'll tell some people to come vote in here..lol
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uppin for the third time....it's 2-0 so far, let's get some more votes....don't sleep
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killa- you need to fix your structure, i had a hard time understanding yor verse.
n'zyme- your vese was straight, punches and wordplay where nice and you clearly took this vote n'zyme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
thanks for the honest vote..........up up and away.............
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uppin this shit.........honest votes that follow the rubric only.....
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damn...........votes people.........don't sleep on this shit....
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N'zyme murdered this cat,
every line was nice, better personals, defo harder hitting punches, he had a structure, his wordplay was nice, an it was a good battle verse!! killa conceptz, that was absoulute shit realy, fix ya struture, make your punches hit him, hit with some personal, you had no wordplay really, your cretivity an ability to make punches obviously dont match!! jus elevate!! peace |
N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken.. Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard.. Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar.. Basically a very one sided battle.. For originality, structure, and witty punches.. Vote - N 'Zyme yes^^ he basically said it all..just elevate aight? |
uppin............................................. .
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yo n'zyme takes this easy...HARD hittin punches...good personals....nice flow...shit lookin like n'zyme got great potential on this site aslong as he keeps it up
killa you need to hit with harder punches and throw personals in...thats what its all about |
yo hit this shit up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543
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ill throw down honest votes to nebody dat throws down on dat shit
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a yo just finish dis' battle off
uppin' |
hurry
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